| "Surviving Together: Retribution" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maria S. On: June 22, 2003 12:19 PDT
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I'm glad they'er back together, well sort of.
You're tearing me apart, I'm a B/V fan and a Radditz fan, I just wish you find away for all of them to be happy PLWEEEASWE. Besides I just love a good twist. |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: June 22, 2003 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awesome chapter! Yeah! B/V finally get some alone time! The lemon teaser was very delicious : ) Again, update soon! |
Reviewed By: Satoshi16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 20:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaaaay! So happy to find more story! Trunks should kick Raditz's ass! And maybe Atae will start feeling more toward Veggie as she is around him more? Ooh, maybe even a dream sequence or two? ~_^ I love that Trunks pretty much already knows that it's Bulma, does that mean he might be the one to learn the truth first? It would be very fitting since he's known Bulma for the longest. Can't wait for the next chapter, as always it will most definitely be worth it! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 17:53 PDT
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Did anyone even eat?? Damn, I hate it when a fight breaks out at dinner and everyone forgets to eat. :D Anyway, nice chapter. I liked how Vegeta had no problems with Trunks attacking their 'guest.' *snickers* I would image him to be that kind of dad! |
Reviewed By: Maria S. On: June 15, 2003 16:16 PDT
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Besides, it will be more original if Radditz was given a second chance, besides it would be ashame to lose the only relative of Goku. But I don't want to tell you how to write your fic, I just want make a few segustion please consider it, it would make a great twist. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 16:05 PDT
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UUUPPPPPDDDAATEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! I LOVE ITTTTTTT!!!! MMOOREEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
LATERRR!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Maria S. On: June 15, 2003 11:31 PDT
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As much as I aggree and hate what Radditz is doing, I still can't help but feel sorry for him, he must've had terroble childhood for him think thats how a child soposed to be raised, seems to me that he's always been alone in the univers and never had anyone to care for him, so natually he doesn't know how to care about others, heck the fact that he had enough strong feelings for Bulma not to seduce her or force himself on her, makes me believe that maybe just maybe he can change for the better, if he's capable of feeling anything other then bloodlust & hatred, then there might be hope for him and a chance for a good life. Please, Please, Please don't listen to those bloodthirsty reviewers, but if you have to kill him, make him feel regret and ask Bulma for forgiveness for useing her for his selfishness.
Please, I know he deserve death but why not second chance, come on How manny fics where Vegeta is just as worse as Radditz here, yet always forgiven for his missdeed, I bet if it was anyone eles the people would ask for blood & kill that character becuase he's not Vegeta there for not capable of feelings, but noooo its Vegeta he should always be forgiven becuase they find excuses for him, that he was abused or rape thats why he turn out the way he did, but about Radditz from what I read here he does seem capable of change for the good but has alot hatred for him to get there he must over come it. I Hope I given you good Ideas for a twist in your fic |
Reviewed By: vegetalovesme On: June 12, 2003 10:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant wait for the next chappie simply fabolous
rock on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bEcca On: June 10, 2003 19:33 PDT
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omG!! when will she retrive her memories?? will she remember vegeta?? and when will vegeta reconize her as who she really is?? update soon!! well lateS~! |
Reviewed By: Neo s On: June 10, 2003 04:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey finish plese???????????? |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 20:17 PDT
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Ooooh, the tension is building. can't wait to see how dinner with trunks is going to turn out. |
Reviewed By: DevilishDiva69 On: June 09, 2003 12:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly love this trilogy. If the rest of the story is as good as these first two chapters then i can't wait to read the rest. the story is awsome and full of drama and mystery. i can't wait for the next chapter. please update again soon. later. |
Reviewed By: Critic On: June 08, 2003 21:41 PDT
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Very good fic. I really like how you capture the emotions in the characters. Fics are much more enjoyable when characters are not OOC and you do that wonderfully. I hope you update soon; I'll be looking forward to it. |
Reviewed By: love On: June 08, 2003 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for next chapie
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Catreena On: June 08, 2003 19:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, I have been following the "Surviving Together" stories for quite some time now and I think that are really original. Excellent writing. I just can't wait for more. |
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