| "Anything For You" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel Black On: June 22, 2003 14:20 CDT
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Aww.............riding the dragon.............ok. It makes sense, It just sounds weird. When are we going to get to Ryou/Aten/Bakura/Marik/Somebody on the other half of the world? I want to know how close Marik and Bakura are to kicking Steven's a** |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff*The poor crab ;_; Do they sell brains?
Poor Malik. Aww. Malik needs a turtle.*hands him stuff turtle* Well today is my sister's birthday(the one I told you about)SHE'S TEN!!*throws confetti*Pretty young huh? *whispers*But she likes Ryou.~^__^~
Ah a lemon. Just what I need to calm down. *looks at calender* OH MY GOD!! ITS THE NATIONAL WEEK OF CHEESE!! IT STARTS TODAY!!(IT really is real)
WRITE MORE ONEGAI!! PRAISE THE CHEESE!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 02:28 CDT
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Yay!! I'm gettig my internet back Monday, so I can read this fic everyday again ^_^ I love this story! |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay now I know who gets hte msot sympathy in the entire fic. The crab! i mean Ryou and Aten are being held agasint their will but at least they're gonna be reascued! But Fluffly, that poor poor poor crab... and yeah I'd be surprise too. How could he not have died of a heart attack?? maybe if he played dead Anzu would leave him alone. And working to buy a new brain? Oh lord >.< And they say blondes are bimbos but this one takes teh cake! Yeah we needed a break from thinking of torturous things to do. Can't wait for hte lemon ^^ Sex on a Merry-Go-Round. ooh boy! *giggles* more soon and please hurry!! |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: June 21, 2003 21:50 CDT
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You can take a lemon break anytime you want ^_^ as long as the kids aren't watching or anything, i would rather them keep an innocent mind. Or at least a shut mouth, unlike my little sister is incapable of doing. i swear she talks in her sleep. Keep going! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HELL?! WHAT KIND OF BASTARD GIVES A TWO YEAR OLD WINE?! Oh yeah. Steven's that kind of bastard.
ATEN IS JUST THE MOST SWEETEST CHIBI IN THE WORLD!! EVEN MY SISTER THINKS SO! She doesn't like to read but she likes Ygo. And she likes your stories. When I told her about Steven she practicaly tore our room apart.
Bakura and Malik best kill those guys! If they won't then I will! And like I said before When the yamis send them to the Shadow Ralm I'll mae sure to send them straight to hell!! |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: June 20, 2003 15:37 CDT
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Awww......a wittle bunny wabbit. dnag, too bad you won't be updating :( Chapters fly by really fast though.......i mean 15 chapters, taht's a lot and it seems like so short amount of time :) Well, good luck with your comp |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A problem?? oh he so sounds like my own bastard uncle *growls* i swear if i ever get married to a man like that i will personally gut him wiht a spoon and make sure he suffers first!! And i hoppe they get caught. Prison is too good for htem, death is too good for them~~ bakura and Marik!! make them torture to the brink of insantity!! *growling again* good chapter. poor aria she loves her bro. and at least aten found a cute toy. lord above and below... please update when you can! sorry for hte spelling i jsut finsihed cleaning my room. |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: June 20, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HECK?! YOU CAN'T GIVE A TWO YEAR OLDWINE IT'S NOT RIGHT!!! *takes DEEP breath* Is Rhea gonna show up in this story? I always love it when she kicks butt! I actually think she should kill Steven (or Jessica of Tim), but I'm sure Marik and Bakura would do a better torture job *evil smile* Oh, and since Anubis is dead (I'm asuming he's not coming back) who'll Steven go to? Man, I gotta stop thinking... it hurts my head >.< KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK!!!! |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: June 20, 2003 12:58 CDT
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Still love you work even though I havent been reading it all the time (I dont like depressing storys) Though I am sure after I see a happy ending I will be able to read the whole thing yep yep, keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Shade A [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, all I can say is "Go Waitress Go!!!!!!!" The waitresses here in Canada are never that nice to me... Lucky Aten. I'm envious of him now!!!
^__________^ hope you continue soon!
~Shade~ |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! GO WAITRESS!! WHOO HOO!!
Karona: When are we going hunting?
Might as well go now.*grabs any weapon* Haha! I'm get that bastard!*cracks whip* Wait! We can't go yet!
Karona:*in armor and has weapons* Why not?
Because we don't have anyone to watch the chibis.
Karona:*whines*
*sigh*I feel sorry for Aten. I wish the waitress would've asked what he meant...Why Ryou!? Damn you Steven!! When the yamis send you to the Shadow Realm I'm gonna make sure the monsters send you straight to hell!!*sigh* I feel better now. |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why can't this thing go higher than 10? It should at LEAST be 100 not 10.
Man oh man you have me on the edge of my seat!! I hope that waitress saw what direction they were heading in!! Hurry call, send signal falres, anything!! *waves arms frantically* Hurryhurryhurry!!! Side note: i think I had too much soda right now. but please update and soon! |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: June 19, 2003 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That waitress is my new hero! YOU GO GIRL!!! I am SO going to get enjoyment out of this story when Steven is mutilated and/or dies! Aten is so cute! How can that....that....THING think of hurting him?! (I called Steven a "thing" because the words I want to say are too nice for him) *paints KEEP UP THE NICE WORK on the side of her house* |
Reviewed By: Angel Black [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 21:59 CDT
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Fools! Wtf do you THINK horse out of city means! Ignore the horse, OUT OF CITY! I truly think Bakura, Joey, and Marik are complete idiots! And Seto calls himself a genius! Sapphire and Amethyst eyes.......mmmmmmm. Uh um i mean colors taht don't match yeah umm. dang, too bad i have a no erase policy on my reviews. v_v oh well i can still call them all fraculences! (idiots) |
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