| "Anything For You" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 21:32 CDT
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Oh how can Steven be so cruel?? I mean his son and grandchild!! That man had no buisness being a father. And poor Ryou and Aten... and Bakura!! I can actually picture him in tears. :( And Aten's message, 'Horse Out of Town'? You lsot me there but i lsot it so much! and yeah I read your other fics but i guess i need a refreser course ^^ more please and soon!! |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 20:24 CDT
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Yes, the weapons are very limitless. WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN TO RYOU?! Thank Ra for Bakura's bloodlust... Congratulations on your engagement! (and gomen nasai for my lateness...) |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: June 18, 2003 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad you like 'em! I kept meaning to say, but forgot -_- So here it is: Congrats on the engagement! Did I spell that right??? Anyhoo! That was really good! And, What DID Aten mean by "Horse go out of city?" or whatever he wrote? And I would like to think Bakura finds and tortures Steven next chappie, ubt I'll wait ^-^ I know it'll be good. In the mean time: KEEP UP THE AWSOME WORK!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: leila15rose On: June 18, 2003 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait until Steven is caught! Heck, I'm so ready for that wonderful moment, I already have some weapons Bakura can use if he chooses! We have our automatic rifle, several thousand hand gernades, a nuke, (Think big!)a Japanese sword... *Many hours latter* and a tank! :D Hope you're able to update soon! |
Reviewed By: Caro On: June 18, 2003 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! sorry, i haven't really reviewed much -_-;;; finals are almost over!!!!!!! whee!!!!!!! we went to an amusement park today as a school field trip! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!! ^.^
Caro |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to wait that long?*shrugs its better then nothing I guess. Once again I almost killed my computer.*hugs computer* But it still lives!!
This chapter was so sad.*sniff* Its cool Aten knows Egyptian! When he's older he can cuss in it! But he might not, he's too sweet.
Tim's got a Game Boy. Was he playing Barbie? It would've been funny if he was. How dare he throw it at Ryou! Well he can have it!*throws her GB at Tim* Haha! Take that!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!! |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: June 17, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like my snakies name, too! That was a good chappie, but I yelled in frusteration when they just missed Bakura and Marik. My family thought I was going crazy because I was yelling like there was no tommarrow and pulling my hair out. It was good, though. I just can't wait 'till they suffer. Although Tim sounds like he just has some problems. Was the Game Boy pink? It'd be funny if it was....... Anyhoo *hands bakurasgirl a plushies of Bakura, Ryou, Malik, Marik, Aria, and Aten* I made the Bakura and Marik plushies a little plushie dagger and Millennium Rod. And this one *holds out Steven doll* e'll yell, scream, and beg for mercy whenever the weapons or yami plushies touch him. It even rips open! Enjoy! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. poor Ryou. bloow up Steven. "oop did I do that" sorry couldn't help it. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 16:37 CDT
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no wait hold up!! oh man so close and yet so far!! please i am begging you come up with hte next chapter!! i'll give you anything you wnat!!
DS: and make them pay! Oh when you do can I help? can i can i can i???
poor ryou and aten... very smart child though. starting to think bakura is part blood-hound or soemthnig ^^ |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: June 17, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang, if i'd have been Ryou, i'd be screaming my head off. I can scream really loud, when im angry enough. You'd think Bakura would have already taught Aria how to track blood.........she'd be good at it. |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughing*HAHAHAHAHA!! AH MAN!!
Bakura:What the hell is wrong with you?
Malik:*whispers into Bakura's ear*
Bakura:Shit. Not again.
Ok I stopped laughing ^_______^. I'm in a very good mood, right now. Its scary O_o
YAY FOR ARIA!! SHE MADE IT BACK TO DADDY!! YAY!
Bakura:You really are starting to scare me.
I SHALL KILL STEVEN AND THOSE OTHER PEOPLE LATER.
Really funny with Aria. Little kids are just too innocent. Thats why they're good info givers.I feel sorry for Seto and Joey.*sigh*Poor guys. |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 00:21 CDT
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oh wow aria made it!! gee i didn't think kids could remember stuff. i'm sure those two drivers will never look at seto or joey the same light again ^^ i sure wouldn't! btu good! not go save ryou and aten!! oh and do some serious damage to jessica and steven and tim. make it hurt alot and i mean ALOT! |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: June 16, 2003 23:13 CDT
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Awww.........Seto's and Joey's affair isn't a secret from the workers? Hmm........i wonder how the found out. *snicker**snicker* that would make a good one-shot. I mean i doubt they would stand up and TELL them exactly what they've been doing in the bedroom..........hehehehehe |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: June 16, 2003 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* Sure! I have a rattle-snake and pithon cross (not really, otherwise I'd make a Steven doll and feed that to the snake)^-^ You can have him, though. He's big and deadly. I named him StevenKiller ^-^ Anyhoo! That was really good! Aria's a pretty smart kid. I'm surprised she could read, but she IS the daughter of a yami.... I hope it's not TOO long before Steven gets what's coming to him. Keep it up! We all love it! |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 15:59 CDT
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Poor Aria and Aten (and Ryou, of course!) Very lucky that the KaibaCorp van was there... I review bearing gifts! *Hands over a large bag of bishie plusies and a bag of assorted bag of weapons* The Magic Bishie Plushies turn into whomever you choose! The Magic Weapon Bag supplies any and every weapon you want! Very good for Steven/Tim/Jessica torture... (hint hint) Keep up the good work! |
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