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Title: kinda wrong
Reviewed By: katikat02 On: May 30, 2004 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story up until the very end when you made Sesshomaru all cute and cuddly. He raped Kagome. That is not something you can be all cute and cuddly with someone after. I dunno, the whole tone of your story was lost. I really was enjoying it up until then.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 20:48 CDT
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Umm...an updateor something. You could at least tell us that you're done writing this story.
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Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds~Lia~ On: April 27, 2004 16:05 CDT
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This is an amazing story!!! Please update soon!!! PLEA~~~~SE!!! AOD ~Lia~
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 00:59 CDT
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I LOVE your story and I can't wait for you to up date!! I'm pulling out my hair just waiting for the new chapter, I hope you update soon. I wish you the best of luck with this story and keep up the good work, your fan rAiNwAtEr aka justina
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Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobsessed On: April 18, 2004 18:24 CDT
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YOU CANT BE DONE!! NOT AT A CLIFFHANGER!!!YOU CANT!YOU CANT!! i just had to say that(even though you might still be writeing) for on your story it says status:Complete. i hope your not. it such a great fan fic. what happens if sess does make it through the well? pleas up date. if your not done you might want to change your sumery to in progress. i hope i didnt afend you in any way. anyway wonderfull fan fic!!! Ja Ni
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Can't wait to see what happens. If Sesshomaru make it through the well or not. Update soon.
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Title: Et toi Lo? Heck yeah I'm begging for a update already!
Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 00:50 CST
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Wow, you can send messages back & forth from hell(refering to Inuyasha getting a message out to Sesshoumaru)? I hope you cover that briefly in your next update. Speaking of updates....please, please, PLEASE UPDATE because I'm already suffering from withdrawl symptoms *begins to fall back into dramatic mode again... the person who took care of Lo-chan before is too irritated from her muttering for updates in odd intervals to grab her* I th-though K-K-Kurama would *sniff* meet Kagome again and I'm ready to bang my head on the keyboard a la Seasame Street pianist style cause he didn't. *insane chuckle escapes Lo's lips* A whole week and no Bishie Kurama, no tender moments Sesshoumaru, and with my luck, Shippou probably owns more than one pair of pants-wahh! At this rate, I'll probably end up drawing pictures of what I think might happen which will really make me need an update since a.)no one can get the same amount of literary pleasure that they would just recieve from reading your work and b.)stick figures aren't that inspiring. P.S. Cliff hangers should be exiled from this story! You just don't need them, it causes the masses to get ungrateful and then the next thing you know, someones leading an angry mob of deprived BAON junkies (not me, I'm trying to remember why I don't threaten authors, though platonically I love you too much to hurt you & I would rather see you not hiding for once and besides, I'm on crutches)
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Reviewed By: LYW On: January 31, 2004 15:19 CST
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An interesting and well written fanfic. I look forward to reading future chapters.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: moon of twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that is a really good story so you juast have to update and you better hurry. PLEASE
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Reviewed By: nienty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 07:10 CST
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i really like this story please update soon though i like to read but some stories go forever but i lik eyours alot just so you know and i usually like sessh but he is pissing me off in this one....
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Reviewed By: corinnetkn24 On: January 02, 2004 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting a long time for the next update and it was great hope to read more soon
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Reviewed By: trihn On: January 02, 2004 02:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the fic.
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: January 01, 2004 18:21 CST
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this is the fir4st time i read this story , i read it today jan 1 2004 , gotta tell ya , i love this story . is crazy !! please update it soon . OMG is sesshomaru gonna be able to get through , but i thought it had been three months. so she doesnt belong to him anymore. yeah!!!!!
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Title: Dranged fanfic lover
Reviewed By: Debbietherex On: January 01, 2004 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow realy good storie I would realy like for you to continue. and soon too.
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv this story can't wait till u up-date so i can read whats gonna happen next^_^
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