| "Price of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Title: Phenomenal
Reviewed By: Dblover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2024 07:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, I love Trupan and this Vegeta Sei AU is definitely
unique. Trunks is so infatuated and totally in love with Pan, I
find that sweet. He is head over heels in love with her and this
story was so romantic. Pan is so strong and sweet, she's such a
brave and determined saiyan I didnt like q no matter what, that
bastard got away with so much. I dont care for marron, she is so
annoying here and doesn add to the story, Goten x Bulla storyline
could have been better without her. Amazing story, I know this is
so late but please come back and write more wonderful stories.
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Reviewed By: Dani On: November 22, 2016 19:44 PST
Comment/Review:
So I just noticed that you said this isn't your favorite story that
you've written. I personally think it tops my list, although I
haven't read them all. The flow is very good, I didn't find myself
pausing to figure things out and you have quite a few lines in
there that were hard not to laugh out loud at. I don't review as
often as I should but I've been trying to leave more since I've
found myself reading fanfiction again recently. Most of the stories
I've read are the ones I read as a teen so most authors aren't
around to see the reviews anymore. But I did feel the need to tell
you that although it may not be your favorite, it very well may be
mine. I can't think of any other story that I was more excited to
re-read. It did not disappoint in the slightest.
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Reviewed By: Awesomesauce On: August 08, 2016 03:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo! This was awesome man!! Total Ten for sure!! Damn, I can't
believe I haven't read this piece of art till now. Mostly coz I
only go to fanfiction dot net. Such an amazing storyline with
awesome drama, bruh reading this was sheer pleasure I tell ya! I
humbly request you, as a reader, please please post this on
fanfiction dot net as well.. I don't want people to miss this
outstanding piece of writing like I almost did... You sir, are an
amazing writer!
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Reviewed By: Violet62 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2010 23:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly adore you ! You do have the very talent to write fanfic , all I could say is "THAT WAS REALLY AWESOME " please keep writing ! (ngoctrang)
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 04:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the story and the way in which you portrayed the characters, however i do feel the ending was rather rushed, it would have been better to spread it out but overall good fic
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Reviewed By: venus legacy On: April 05, 2004 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was fantastic a true demonstration of how nurture rather than nature effects who you are and how the children should not be blamed for their fathers sins. I must say i don't usually like trunks and pan fics but you completely changed my mind i absolutely loved this fic and loved blizzard and the scene after gotens death when he paid tribute to the brave warrior and prayed for him. I was dissappointed at first with bulma as she was too passive but then towards the end she really let her spirit shine which made me love her again i am definately going to read the sequal. It was a very unique way of showing goten and trunks as i usually expect them to be innnocent especially goten but the fact of how they were socialised truly made them in to who they were . Fantastic. Blizzrds wish had me in hysterics i never expected Q to be made into a woman that is an ultimate punishment for him
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - I am logged it but this stupid site keeps saying I'm not On: February 21, 2004 10:16 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the end of a long journey. The fic was awesome... from start to finish... (exept the part where Vegeta gets his ass kicked by that moron). WOnderful job. Thanks for writing it.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl - not signed in (apparently) On: February 21, 2004 02:54 PST
Comment/Review:
Woot!! Goten's back!! Will he end up with Marron?? (Runs away) Poor Yamucha - will Q ever accept him without a struggle? She should be damned grateful that such a handsome man wants her at all, considering her past... O.o Anyway - enough of reading this... Go and write AWWA!! :D
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 13:08 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK! I am sharpening a spork even as I type (which ain't easy!) Please update! Why did I think this was finished? I need no more angst in my life. I need to know what's going to happen next. Please don't leave Goten dead! Please don't ruin B/V! Whew! What a ride!
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: January 08, 2004 10:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing like finding a great epic you can read lots of chapters at a time! So THIS is the B/V story you need to write, ne? Well, so far it's a great T/P story and I'm totally stumped as far as the G/M/B triangle. How will that play out? Looking forward to reading more chappies tomorrow.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 07:40 PST
Comment/Review:
OK... first you kill Goten... Now you are turned Q into a woman. Why is it that everytime I start liking one of your male characters you decide to torment them? O.o Gasp! What are you going to do to my poor Vegeta???? Great Chapter!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac(Not Logged In) On: December 11, 2003 11:22 PST
Comment/Review:
Now that was completely unexpected, AM! I think that was a very fitting wish and I loved Trunks' reaction. Not quite sure what to think of Blizzard at this point. His action with the wish lead me to believe he shouldn't be trusted, even if he did help Marron. I'm on pins and needles!
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Reviewed By: LiL Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 05:39 PST
Comment/Review:
ok....did u update the story at all? cause it says u did but there arent ne chapters!!!! :( ok. well just email me please and tell me LiL Elf
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 14:34 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm still pissed that you... did what you did to Goten! :( I know, I hated the G/B pairing, but still. *Heavy sigh* Will you pleeeeease give Q his "just reward?" This fic has done a great job at wrenching my heart all over the place. I hope there will be a happier chapter coming up. I'm not holding my breath, though, knowing that Vegeta's on his way to declare war. This fic would make a great movie, AM!
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72, Carla to you On: November 28, 2003 03:49 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well, well.... Vegeta is invading Earth... I can't help but to think that is a huge mistake. Not only will he have to deal with Goku, but I have a feling Trunks will do whatever is necessary to protect the people and the planet that Pan loves. You KNOW it kills me to say this, but Vegeta should listen to his wife. For once, she may be right.
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