| "The Exfoilation of Perenial Beings" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tiger Claws On: July 15, 2003 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want to Yami to bit yugi while having sex so I can complete my pervented life ;D |
Reviewed By: Tiger Claws On: July 15, 2003 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want to Yami to bit yugi while have sex so I can complete my pervented life ;D |
Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How can Yugi not see that Yami is a Vampire?
Oh Well!!
Still, This is a Fantastic Story!!
Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blushing bright red*
meep!
fanning herself....
good chappie..........-**-
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Reviewed By: anon On: July 14, 2003 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*fanning herself* jeepers, that was some hot action, lucky yugi. Soooooo, Yami doesn't see sunlight on weekends, he probably never sees it because he's a vampire pretending to be a slayer and Yugi is just so hot to him he couldn't help but fall in love and not take his blood, unlessssss, he saving Yugi for later, hmmmmmm, interesting! Anyway I hope you update soon, magnificent story. |
Reviewed By: Tiger Claws On: July 14, 2003 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love vampire and yaoi fiction put into one Yummy. But something is getting at me. I had this strongest feeling that Yami was a vampire. And since read chapter 7 I'm positive that he is a Vampire. That makes this story so much better |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 12:16 CDT
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Okay, that was an interesting chapter. Why does Yami have such a problem with being out during the daylight? I hope you post more soon! I like this story a lot so far. |
Reviewed By: The Star-Heart's Shards of Amethyst On: July 14, 2003 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"The trench coat was not for show. The trench coat was to hide the show."
XD That's freaking great! You come up with some wickedly nice lines! *clap clap* Absolutely wonderful. I look forward to more. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Some girl On: July 12, 2003 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is great but I was just wondering if Yami is really a Vampire SLAYER or just a vampire cause he sure in the hell sonds like a vampire to me?!? |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 20:46 CDT
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That was good. I liked it. I hope you post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Star Magician On: July 11, 2003 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is really different.
I can now imagine Yugi shooting at vampires.(very nice scene)
Well,update soon! |
Reviewed By: anon On: July 11, 2003 14:56 CDT
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Hiya! I came back to read more of your story and its more shway than the first time I read it. Is Yami gonna turn out to be in cohoots with the vamps, I hope he's not evil, but then again it would be an interesting developement. I guess I have to wait and find out, that is if you would be so kindly as to update. ^____^! |
Reviewed By: some girl On: July 11, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plzzzzzzzzzzzz update!! and I was just wondering is yami reallya vampire slayer? because to me he sounds like a vampire.But it's probably just my twisted imagination. |
Reviewed By: Blood Moon On: July 09, 2003 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sighs* Absolutley beautiful. You ARE going to update again, aren't you? You had better. You hear me? I'll send another biker gang out and have them attack you if you don't!!! GREAT WORK!!! |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Ruby On: July 07, 2003 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word: UPDATE!!!! ^_~ |
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