| "Dream Weaver" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trina On: August 01, 2003 06:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sugoi a little short and u tell nothing but I still liked the second ending. |
Reviewed By: animeHELLangel On: July 28, 2003 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. It's just what us YYH freaks have beenwaiting for :) |
Reviewed By: Kristoth On: July 27, 2003 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was an amazingly well written story. but i won't accept an unhappy ending when it involves Hiei and Kurama!!!!!!!!! lol. i can't help it, it just won't process in my brain that they couldn't be together, lol. it was a great story though, this fangirl gives it ten thumbs up :) |
Reviewed By: Tori On: July 24, 2003 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yay! I like the sad ending, but I'll LOVE the happy ending. I can't wait! So hurry up please? Oh, and smack The Boy for me. hee hee.
-Tori |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 03:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah so painful. Beautiful and heartbreaking. I'm sorry I read it but glad as well. I liked the inclusion of the song and the length was correct.
Well I'm off to feel like an idiot for crying.
If you remember the site where you got the song post it cause I'd like to hear it. |
Reviewed By: la-la On: July 24, 2003 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this is a great story. When I first got into reading fanfics I was kinda yoai-baised too, because I just couldn't see my favorite charaters that way. I soon realized that it really is just a story, and gay people never bothered me at all, so why should gay anime characters? I give this story 10 out of 10 |
Reviewed By: xi_hou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That "me" person is a flaming moron, ne? It's an excellent story, and your average mature reader doesn't care if you are gay, straight, or attracted to fruit. You write well, and that's all that matters.
I liked your sad ending, by the way. (Yep, I'm an angst queen.) That's not to say that I'm not looking forward to the happy ending, but Kurama is so...lovely...in misery. *evil laugh* Write on, m'aam. ;-) |
Reviewed By: Trina On: July 23, 2003 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
u mad a ending i'm so happy. 2 bad it was a sad one so make the other one quick. and plese be in a happy mood. |
Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 08:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. Very good fic...*still laughing at Kuwabara*
And as I said before, I'll be looking fwd. to reading both endings, because I like to see how ppl put Kurama and Hiei together (most of the time Hiei is OOC), but I also think Hiei would keep it bottled up inside of him for the most part. (and as for the "Are they even friends?" question...yes, they met about two years or so before the beginning of the series.)
Your spelling needs a wee bit of work though, gomen.
And I agree with your "chapter 5" 100%. For one, Western culture is waay too dualistic ("you're either this or that") and too logical ("if A, then B") for its own good. We need some insane sanity here!
Later!
-SirPsychoSexy |
Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*applauds ch. 2 and 3*
This fic...not only is it sexy so far, but it brings up some very nice philosophical questions as well: What is reality? Where do dreams take us? etc.
And I had a very vivid piccy of the figures mating and Kurama growing embarrassed b/c that was one of his wet dreams...XD
The only thing you need help on is your Japanese^^. I don't think Hiei would be caught dead using watashi for himself...most guys use boku or ore (the latter is the more arrogant, rougher "I", used, I think, bu all 4 Tantê). In the future, if you need J help for your fics, give me a call. ^^
All in all, a good fic so far! *claps* |
Reviewed By: Neko_Youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, WOW! This story was awesome! ^__^ I really enjoyed it! I was hoping for a conclusion, but that's alright. I'm a fanfic writer myself *grins* I might try my hand at an ending... We'll see. I also wanted to applaud you on your response to the person who reviewed this story going by 'me'. I'm right with ya on that, and very proud of what you said. Narrow-minded people bug the crap out of me. So yea, now that I sound like a total space case. I'll be going now, but once more, AWESOME fic! I'll be looking forward to any new ones ^__^
~Neko_Youkai |
Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*applauds*
Wonderfully original idea! And the way you wrote it...damn...I want to read more...I swear, I strongly identified with Hiei here. Very very few fics make me do that..feel the, erm, touching...*blush*
*applauds* You have made my day. I will return.
-SPS |
Reviewed By: kely On: July 20, 2003 20:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
end it happily poor poor hiei desevres a happy endng and make that weaver have a bad funny ending or something like getting stuck in a two year olds head |
Reviewed By: Ally_Hearts On: July 20, 2003 19:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!?!? u.u...i want a happy ending!! Sadly i can't write my own cause i sux at writing stories can't seem to some up with a good plot. N E WAY...plz i beg up plz finish it....i'll cry if u dun..u.u
(ain't it pathetic how i get so worked up over a fic |
Reviewed By: me On: July 18, 2003 14:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
OK i would like to start by saying i hate yaoi and yuri. I'm tired of people acting like Kurama and Hiei are a couple of homo sexuals. and Yusuke Kuwabara etc. etc. In any case Kurama and Hiei and the others are STRAIGHT ok. Why can't u people get it through ur filthy stupid gay assed brains.Ok my analasis is any one who writes gay stories ARE gay. Thats all i have to say |
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