| "Dream Weaver" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 04:58 CDT
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Yay another chapter and a promised one to come.
Please let them get together. I'll live without a yaoi lemon but they both are such sad characters it would be nice after all the torment suffered here and in other fics that they could be together.
Besides the poor Dream Weaver is back in prison it would be nice if she could have helped two who need each other get together-a consolation and boon to her karma.
Loved your story so far. So do you have other fics planned in the near future? |
Reviewed By: anime_angel123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please have a nice yaoi ending!! I hate to see (almost) everyone's favorite coupe end up in misery. Its so SAD. My only suggestion is MAKE THE STORY LONGER THAN JUST 5 CHAPTERS!! I'M Begging you!!! I'm totally addicted to this fic (But I'm not gay/lez or anything myself, mind you. I'm perfectly straight.) |
Reviewed By: ^_~ On: July 09, 2003 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv ur story. plz update soon & don't u dare make it a sad endin, idc bout lemon or not, but get Hiei & Kurama together, especially after wat da Dream Weaver had gone throu, & get her out of da damn freakin cell!!!!!!
thatz all 4 now
P.S. u must lllluuuuuvvvvv DBZ ;) |
Reviewed By: Bolivianprob [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love Kurama Hiei Yaoi! Dont end it in a sad manner!!!! Thanks for listnen! |
Reviewed By: Teena M. On: July 09, 2003 17:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Teena: *waves brightly* Lemon! Happy ending! Ignore your brother, he has no taste. Kura-chan deserves a happy ending! |
Reviewed By: XxPlutoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 01:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I vote for a lemon! Please make it a happy ending... my lifes depressing enough as it is to have this end badly... Um... I'll give you a cookie! ::waves a box of oreo cookies:: yummmy cooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssss! Cookies improve everyones mood!
~Elvia |
Reviewed By: la-la On: July 08, 2003 22:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
heh, i like it really i do. please continue! |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I am enjoying the story. Ah the angst, so soothing in a twisted way.
When I get the nerve I just may check out that site. |
Reviewed By: XxPlutoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 03:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm going to have to check out that website... It'll be something interesting to try when my hubby gets back in December! Great chapter, I liked the dream sequences. I feel so bad for Kurama though... I can't stand the thought of his cute little self crying. He's just so sweet. Well... his human part is sweet, Youko Kurama was pretty evil. That's why he's one of my favorites! And I agree, spiked bracelets are very pretty, however I prefer the chokers. I have about 20 matching sets of bracelets and chokers that I got from Hot topic back in my high school days. Unfortunately after having a child you can't really wear spiked jewelry without causing harm to said child. Oh well.
~Elvia |
Reviewed By: Zharaya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good! please tell me you're not the kind of author to leave us poor readers hanging for months while you write the next chapter? please? you have to write more! |
Reviewed By: Trina On: June 30, 2003 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I realy enjoyed your fic. I think that is the best I read in a while. I always read to close or elce I can't c it and I suck at spelling so can't help U there. It's also very original I never read anything like it I think. I don't get the dream weaver though I don't c what her motives r there 4 U hav to put up another ch. U don't want your reader confused forever do U? Well I realy liked your fic keep up the good work. and plese don't be like those people who stop writing at the interesting parts. It's interesting |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 14:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good Chapter. Fun story. I wonder just how much trouble Hiei has gotten himself into. |
Reviewed By: XxPlutoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 03:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow quick update! I'm really bad at proofreading so I can't help you with the mistakes... sorry. However I love where you are going with this. I think I'd like to see Kurama's dreams though. Is he even going to be affected by them or is it only Hiei in denial? Hm... questions questions... Well, thanks for the quick update!
~Elvia |
Reviewed By: sirencirce [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so creative! I love it so much. I'm now hooked in to this story so you can't keep me hanging forever. You have a great talent for detail. Very well done.
Laters |
Reviewed By: mocha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love this! Kurama/Hiei get-togethers are fun!
(since you've asked) you have a few grammer errors. not much though... |
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