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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 00:04 CDT
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Alright, one more thing (I promise lol), I just found the review by me and wanted to point out that their (I get the urge to say 'his' for some odd reason) intelligence quotient is severely lacking, based on the grammar of the post that is. AND that the author of Yu Yu Hakusho never exactly answered the question of whethor or not Hiei and Kurama were a couple. So in all actuality, it is highly likely that, though the author did not originally intend for them to be a couple, the two demons were a unit by the end of the series. The notion was encouraged by the creators of the Yu Yu Hakusho anime. Plus Kurama is a kitsune (for those that don't know what that implies, it means he is naturally bisexually active) and Hiei is born into a race of all asexually reproducing females. If anything, Hiei is likely to be completely gay, while Kurama is truly a bisexual. I will admit that when authors introduce Yusuke and Kuwabara into the yaoi world it does stray from the series, but that is every fanfiction author's perogative. ALSO there is one openly gay couple in the series.
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 23:55 CDT
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May I add that whoever wrote that review about Yaoi and Yuri authors is an uninformed, overall jerk? I'd also like to mention that I am a straight female and cannot get enough of my favorite Yaoi couple (obviously being Kurama and Hiei). They're adorable, have intense personalities and histories that can be manipulated in many ways, and are very, very attractive.
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 23:51 CDT
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Fun, fun. lol. A little fluffy yes, but who doesn't love a good fluff story. XD I very much enjoyed it, even if it was simple. lol. However, I think your sequel makes up for both of the points.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was excellent! I loved the way you wrote it and i loved the double endings. Plus, on a personal note, Fuck whoever wrote that insolent thing about Yaoi/Yuri writers. As far as I'm concerned, I write Yaoi and I'm pretty damn straight. So, on behalf of me, at least, Fuck him (her?) Anyways, i loved the story and am gonna read more of your stories now.
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Reviewed By: Angela On: January 07, 2004 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the stroy, now I am going to go read the sequal. XD Keep writting.
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Reviewed By: Angela On: January 07, 2004 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the stroy, now I am going to go read the sequal. XD Keep writting.
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Title: Dream Weaver
Reviewed By: AuAgHgChemist [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, the Dream Weaver was a great "adversary." Not too out of character either. The first ending was good, in character, and the only one pausible after the situation was resolved. Kurama already knew Hiei would have to leave, and that he would leave. But in my mind the second ending happened after the first one, and I would call it a beginning instead. I seriously doubt Hiei would leave Kurama forever, besides he made his fox cry and no one makes his fox cry not even him.
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 23:06 CST
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THat story was good!!
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Title: Endings!!!
Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oddly, I think I liked the first ending better...it seemed much more realistic. But the part @ Koenma and Botan watching in the 2nd ending was FUNNY. XD *applause*
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Reviewed By: Rose Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2003 20:37 CDT
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Wee, you finished it ^_^ Thank you, it was great! Though I really was rooting for a lemon. ~sigh~ oh well, I guess I can deal. Good job! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KURAMA AND HIEI......... *twiches* ME love those two especially Hiei Damn that demon is hot and then Kurama such a sexy fox *licks my lips* Yaoi YUMYYY! Please my dear I need the second ending damn it!!!! NOW! and if you could manage some Yaoi lemonade in the process very much apreciated.
Love ya ! later! |
Reviewed By: Ally Hearts On: August 02, 2003 12:48 CDT
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Thank you sooooo much for writing a happy ending. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 23:52 CDT
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I had a grin stretched from ear to ear. I thoroughly enjoyed this ending. I like the way you wrote Kurama's internal dialogue about the incident with the Dream Weaver and how well he knows Hiei, and that forcing Hiei to do anything just isn't something he wants to do.
I'm really going to have to see what that position is about. |
Reviewed By: Jennifred [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*melts into a puddle of goo* I could have sworn I had reviewed this before, maybe not. Anywho, I loved this story, and I loved the happy ending! You did a great job caputuring their emotions, and making all of it seem believable. Good job ^^
-Jennifred |
Reviewed By: XxPlutoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm gone from cyberspace for a while and look what happened! I have to say I enjoyed both endings. They each fit the story well. However I am a sucker for happy endings so YAY! Oh and I honestly tried to write an ending myself but I just couldn't do it. I just couldn't get into their heads I guess... I mean after all it is your story and I have a hard enough time writing my own. Sorry... If you write any other fics in the future though send me an email or something! I really love your style of writing. |
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