| "Dream Weaver" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rose Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 13:02 CDT
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Ack! another unfinished fic! How can u do this to me!! I agree with Kaoru27, just do two endings. That way, both sides are happy, and i don't freak out. See? Everyone wins. Or, if people do send in their own ideas for endings, maybe you could post those? Just a thought |
Reviewed By: Trina On: July 16, 2003 00:53 CDT
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how could you be so mean i hav no emagination what so ever that's why i don't write storys i read them. I realy liked your fic too and it's going to be ruined by my crapy imagination. If i made you sad or mad i'm very sorry but with all that hard work and you don't make a ending ch. o well i guess i'll be depressed 4 a while but i realy liked your fic it was a wonderful story till the end. |
Reviewed By: nightkiller On: July 15, 2003 22:08 CDT
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...[continueing from past rating....SCREWED UP COMPUTER!!]....
anywayz...itz one of da best stories i've ever read....but plz do rite another chapter...some of us are too lazy to do that *cough cough8..hehe....
but itz really fantabulous....keep up the good work... |
Reviewed By: nightkiller On: July 15, 2003 22:04 CDT
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this fic is GREEAAT!! woOt! *ahem..sorri..high on sugar..^_^*
itz |
Reviewed By: nightkiller On: July 15, 2003 22:04 CDT
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this fic is GREEAAT!! woOt! *ahem..sorri..high on sugar..^_^*
itz |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Yasha On: July 12, 2003 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..Let them get together come on! after all this Hiei and Kurama torture at least let them have thier night.. heh heh heh Lemon!!! after all you did say "SM:Come bask in the pretty Yaoi feilds! Weeee!!!" so lets. Lets go to the Yaoi fields and find a lemon! ^-^ Great job i love your writing so ... goooood... |
Reviewed By: Mystic Mushroom On: July 11, 2003 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont know how to explain my rating...it just seemed right. I liked the fic, though it could have been a bit longer...
I don't think there should be a lemon...or a sad ending. Perhaps you could have a lemon chapter with no important plotish things, and then a clean "aftermath" chapter that dosen't directly mention them having sex, but includes a flashback or something of a cute, but in character, moment were Hiei tells kurama that he loves him? Readers could take it as either fluff and sex, or just fluff.
if that confused you, you want to clear up a few things, or just would like to say hi or something...my email is chichifryingpan@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 17:06 CDT
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Once there was this little girl and she read a story named "Dream Weaver" but the mean author of the story only wrote four chapters! So this little girl cried and cried and cried... and you get the picture. Shame on you, you evil author!
It's an excellent story though, really. Your use of imagery is great and the character's thoughts and actions are totally understandable. I especially liked the Dream Weaver's convo with Kurama in Ch. 3! It was awesome. I also liked the way you wrote a things, like "Ningenkai’s single satellite" and "Ruin a perfectly good REM cycle…"
Awww, you picked on Kuwabara! *snicker snicker* He's an awesome character, and one of the most couragous charas in the show, but picking on him is fun. And easy. But he isn't really stupid at all... maybe just a little. ^_~
Oooh, I never thought of this: "Kurama was a sensitive being, though he hated to admit it, and would not risk rejection. He did not wear his heart on his sleeve as most did. He protected his emotions just as much as Hiei did, though he replaced them with a calm, passive front." That makes perfect sense! I understood the part with Hiei but I never thought that Kurama felt similar but just reacted differently!
BTW, in the Demon Triad the first opponent was actually a transvestite, but they dubbed that out. Of course Yusuke, being the pervert that he is, was the one that figured out that she was a he.
They dub out *everything.* -_-
One little mistake, Botan is a "ferry girl" not "fairy girl."
I wish you'd continue this!!! =( |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 22:18 CDT
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Since my computer decided to submit the review before I finished, here's the rest ^_^. I love your story!! Your writing is amazing, and the story is creative. It's great! I feel Hiei's pain, and Kurama's suffering, and the Dream Weaver is just cool. Can't wait for more!!
Oh yeah... LEMON PLEASE!! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 22:15 CDT
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Have you read the Dreamweaver? I can't remember who it's by... |
Reviewed By: Just Another Saiyan Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 22:08 CDT
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Very good story. It is definitely building itself up to a HAPPY ending. HAPPY. HAPPY. Please let me escape my miserable, depressing reality with some happiness for a change!! :) |
Reviewed By: NK On: July 10, 2003 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love to see hiei and kurama get in love. It's soooo nice to have something in common (demon+demon) or common interes. I just love those two guys together because the way hiei has love for the fox's and fox's love for hiei and in their dreams tooo. Please make the next chapter a happy ending for both of them they are sooo cute together.
Seeya later!!!=) |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 19:08 CDT
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Cool. Great story! Love the 'dream weaver' plot. after reading the chapters you have, i'd say they are all screaming, "MAKE THIS LAST CHAPTER A LEMON,' but the story would still be awesome if you made it sad. please continue with whatever choice you make soon!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: hm... On: July 10, 2003 18:36 CDT
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End it happy.
See, you don't have to ask if I liked this story or not because if I didn't, I wouldn't have read it to the end. So there! |
Reviewed By: Rose Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this stuff! KuramaxHiei rocks!^_^ Make it a happy ending and a lemon! Cuz lemons are yummy |
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