| "Love and war" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 02:23 CDT
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Your story has won Third Place for Best AU/AR Fiction from the Feudal Association. Your award can be found here - http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/april2006awards/Best_AU_AR_Ficti on_3rd.jpg The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: tootalltygerlily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 01:23 CDT
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Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best AU/AR Fiction" at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group! The official website for the group - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The yahoo group where nomination/voting takes place - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ If you have any questions, feel free to email Dark Avenger (the owner) at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com
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Title: SUGOI! (AWESOME)
Reviewed By: dark irish sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 14:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOH! I love this story! It is sad but the next part sounds even better, i love your writing! i think im gonna be a forever fan to you! ~your new loyal reader dark irish sorceress
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Title: LUV IT
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE UR STORY!!! MADE ME CRY VER SAD ENDING, WHY DID SHE HAVE TO DIE=( YOUR VERY TALENTED!! WRIT MORE SOON
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Reviewed By: LumChan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stil cry everytime I read your story.
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Reviewed By: Ameera1130 On: May 25, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is Bull you killed her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but i loved it anyway. bring her back in a sequel pleeeeze!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: May 10, 2005 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that is a one of the best stories I have ever read. I Loved it very much. Please don't wait to write more. P.S. Love YA!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story with a capital L It was a fast paced in some parts but overall kool in the others. Your style of writing needs a bit of work and grammer needs tooning but other then that this story Rulz!!!!!!!!
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Title: OMG LOVED IT!
Reviewed By: EdwardKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVED YOUR STORY! IT SO KICKED ASS! WOW! I wish I could write like that! BUt my stories all suck! Wow, but how could you end it like that, there better be a sequal! I wanna know what happens, does Kag come back, whats up with Inu that poor baby! Well write a sequal! Loved it one of my favs!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Valerie22 On: November 21, 2004 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, to start of with you are a very good writer. I don't mean to be critical for you should now that I rarely leave reviews but I liked your originality very much so. You should know that your style of writing indeed needs some work, the spelling and grammar errors are rare but they're there, the origianility of your story is admirable, and I very well enjoyed reading this! Now, the style of grammar is something that you should not worry about, you only need to read a few pages of any grammar book and you'll get. As for the spelling and grammar you really have no trouble just remember to reread what you have written carefully to check from these simple but noticeable mistakes. Everything else was very good! I'm very impressed with how you kept everything going so well...I mean, you put angst(sadness, and anger) and most importantly ROMANCE. You did have some mistakes: keeping tracks of some things and confusing and contradicting others but as I explained earlier if you just reread what you have written this won't be a problem anymore. I'm quite ashamed to say that as old as I am I still enjoy this show very much. I love Kag+Inu=couple and wouldn't have it any other way, so yes I was upset with the fact that Kag wasn't Inu's first woman to BE WITH, her first child was killed and Inuyasha's harsh opinion of them having one, and lastly(I cried my eyes out, used a whole kleenex box, & had red eyes and nose)Kag's death and Inu's loneliness without love. SEQUEAL!!! This was * |
Title: OH JEEZ
Reviewed By: Crazy_Green [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH JEEZ that was GREAT. 8 thumbs up (if only i had 6 more!) i can't wait for the sequel great job!
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Reviewed By: jin_the_wind_master_420 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a sad ending to an excellent story. You even had me getting a little teary eyed in the last chapters. PLEASE get the sequal up as soon as possable. I cant wait to read it.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 07:12 CDT
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i cried like a little bitch
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Reviewed By: LumChan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing.
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Title: Just a bit more to say
Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 21:42 CDT
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I noticed also that you breaked for a new paragraph when you didn't need to in alot of places. All I can say is try to make your paragraphs at least five sentenses long. English class teaches you those things for a reason. /////////// Keep up the good work on the story. I think that you have alot of potential as a writer.
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