| "A DRAGONBALL HONEYMOON" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Title: Surprised.
Reviewed By: SaeriJenn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2011 03:45 EDT
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*mouth drops open* So you're posting your stories here now and not on FF.net? This is a true surprise. Okay noted and faved for updates! |
Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2011 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the most underrated fanfiction stories on this website and deserves more reviews. I have lost count the number of times I have read A "DRAGONBALL HONEYMOON". |
Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 11:35 EDT
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Oh, i forgot to tell. I wish the 2nd wish is for radditz and Nappa back so they can live at peace on earth, or at least to get Vegeta's tail back (eventough it doesnt necessary since it will grow back itself). And i'm glad you make Yamcha didn't reveal Dorothy daughter, she doesn't deserve Vegeta's child. And the episode in Antartica sound like some horror movie (the worm with sensivity to something move). It actually make my skin crawl, one episode horror in such romantic honeymoon. But the other Alien in Bermuda triangle is cute. At last i want to see their honeymoon picture, especially Vegeta with hair tied in cheeks and in pink hat...XD
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Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you! For the first time in your trilogy here, you didn't make Vegeta in poor condition. Instead he's really rich, and sexy as hell. And i like the part in which Vegeta really behave like a prince in the party. Sexy!!! I wish i could click on " picture of Bulma's well hung hubby" too. I liked how you portrait Vegeta with Trunk, so cute. But I cannot imagine how Trunks sit in Vegeta shoulder, is he sit in his shoulder and clinging on Vegeta hair? hmm....as adorable as ever....let me pinch his chubby cheeks again...XD. And the ending, i almost could see myself, when Bulma and Vegeta left Trunks alone again with her parents, when Bulma's parents saw Trunks in horror and Trunks grins evily.....*laughh...laugh...laugh..some more* CUTEEEE XD
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 16:00 EDT
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I'm just writing yo say, that I love your new story Mirror mirror, but I can't rewiev on it.. Dunno why, I'm registert and everything, but it won't let me. I love the story. Continue, please!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 12:56 EST
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Thank you for this. I will say more when I can, but please know I've read the chapters at last and I'm moved.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 15:46 EST
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I'm so stunningly jealous of your ability to write action---and of course, your incredible creativity. You always come up with wonderful adventures that showcase what I love best about these two. I know it's been a long time since you've updated, and I understand if life is leading you elsewhere, but I do hope that you continue to write. You're a singular voice in the DBZ fandom, and one of my all-time faves.
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Reviewed By: eshfemme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your portrayal of the BV love and how intense it is. Your Vegeta characterization is so gruff and vulnerable-- it really just seems to be an elaboration on the canon character. I didn't expect you to update it so massively but thank you!! I thought that all the revelations that Bulma had about Vegeta were touching and were handled so well so even if Vegeta has an interesting character and some lesser authors might make it more of a focus on Vegeta, Bulma still holds her own and actually shows how well she complements Vegeta. The only complaint I have is that sometimes the grammar was off like using lied instead of laid as lied would really be the past tense conjugation of to lie (deceive) while laid would be the form you would use for to lie (lay). But ooh, why does Dorothy have to have a kid?!? I kinda dread and anticipate any sequel coming from that plot thread! Nice job on Dorothy btw as she does seem like a well-rounded character even though she is the bitch everyone loves to hate. Also, Trunks is absolutely adorable! Although I didn't expect him to be quite so bratty but I can forgive that as his antics are still adorable although I'm glad that I'm not the Briefs! Good luck and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 15:09 EST
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That is just plain out awesome... you did a great job with this story... ^_^
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Title: Perfection
Reviewed By: raccly er 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 17:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanna say so much about this fic so far, but theres just to much to say. I guess one word can sum it up though: Perfect. I love this fic! Its got everything! Romance, drama, humor, mystery, origonality, EVERYTHING a good fic should have! Please keep writing this! Its doing so good so far! And I just can't wait to see what else happens! With this fic, you never know what to expect or think!
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Title: Amazing and shocking fic!
Reviewed By: raccly er 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 01:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read up to this chap so fare, andI am completly amazed! I didn't expect any of whats happened! Maybe Im cluelss, but I think your a pretty great writer! You davoid the reads atention from the big twists, so when they do happen, its even more of a shock then thought opssible! great job! quiz qestion though: Will Vegeta eventuly be told about his daughter? Since, it is pretty ovious shes his. Its very intresting ta think of what Bulma's reaction to that'll be, or ferther more Vegeta's, or even Dorothy's reaction to find Vegeta already had a son about the same age as Veronica with Bulma. If its not to much info, Please e-mail me a response to that. It'll be inspiration to read on and find out, not that this fic isn't already stay up all night worthy.
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Title: dbz-fan-jess
Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 00:06 EDT
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I just wanted to drop a line when you emailed your mailing list to say that you were going to update soon I decided to reread your story and its just as exciting to go back and reread again. You did a fantastic job giving a little insite into Vegeta's character throughout this trilogy and giving a great original story along with it. You've done a fantastic job exploring the problems Vegeta could have faced in his relationship with bulma along with the problems he faced trying to fit in and get over the past he's faced. You've given a unique interpretation that inspires readers and is very enjoyable. Your relationships between the characters are so very well written and put them in situations that give us a unique perspective on the characters. Great job with this story, I really like the unique interpretation and great writing.
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Reviewed By: Caralin Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 19:14 EST
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Wow! What a hoot! I can't even begin to say how much I love this more "human" side of Vegeta! It truly is reminiscent of scene out of my own life. (Thinking back on number of times Caralin's husband has ripped loose noxious fumes and made five year old son cry!) I loved this chapter and it was truly well worth the wait. I hope life has settled down enough for you Angelus, I know how time can get away between chapters... I sure will be sorry to see this saga end as I have loved ALL of the adventures and ALL of the sex romps between my two favorite characters. (Especially Vegeta being all jealous of any male attention given to Bulma!) I hope there are future stories tucked away in your creative and talented imagination! ~Caralin Fury~
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Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in!) On: March 17, 2005 14:25 EST
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DA, how do you come up with this wonderful stuff??? You're always full of so much detail and description, it really makes the words real. I'm trying to picture Buisnessman-Vegeta, but it's so hard to think of him as anything but himself! :D Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 13, 2005 04:04 EST
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Great story, funny and touching at the same time, how did you do it? I almost jumped when i received notification of your update, so glad that you are writing again!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 18:24 EST
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Another wonderful chapter! how do you do it? Both of the dreams were just perfect and the light touch to the end was magic. great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Princesssvegeta On: February 28, 2005 05:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love love love love love this story am seriously going to cry when you post the final chapter. please say you willlllll continue :)
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Reviewed By: Bulma16 (havne't signed in yet) On: February 27, 2005 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter! I can't tell you how excited I was to see this fic updated at long last! I loved the Jewish Vegeta and Lester's "Australianisms". Amazing job DA!!
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Reviewed By: kendra(less)not loged in On: February 26, 2005 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually screamed of full blown joy when I received your email that you updated. As for the chapter I love the way mix the dark with the comedy. Even though I feel sorry for the loss vegeta had to experiance again. I'm glad his ass, saved his ass (bad pun intended).
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Reviewed By: Menal On: January 27, 2005 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE.
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Reviewed By: Turtle Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I thought I was going to pee myself, I was laughing so hard. What Vegeta and Nappa did to Radditz was just aweful! I have really enjoyed reading your stories. Of all the fanfics, I think yours have remained truest to the characters. I look forward to the continuation of this story.
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Reviewed By: zorella_happymood On: November 24, 2004 17:06 EST
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gokusgirl, seriously, how could this story lose readers? ^_^ Too damned good. DA, as per usual 'twas fantastic. It's always a 'yay!' moment when I get your email, and has been for so so long now. I'll still be around when the final email comes along (lets make that a long way away okay?)
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 16:44 EDT
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Wonderful! And you used Launch! What a great idea! I'm really enjoying this adventure; I love the mix of action and quiet moments of revelation. And I laugh! I would love to see the postcard pic! You really should do a series of drawings for this fic. It deserves them!
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 06, 2004 20:49 EDT
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*watchs Trunks' rampage*...Holy Cow! I hate to see what a true saiyan baby would do. *Komachi Ayako, Xiahou Fumi, and Yin Yi`Jing nods their head in agreement* Komachi Ayako:*Blinks her eyes in disbelief* I agree with Bulma, I can't imagine Vegeta not wanting to train. Xiahou Fumi:*trieds to imagine Dodoria as a female*...Is it good that I can't Dodoria as female or not? Yin Yi`Jing:It good that you can't imagine that ,Young one. *Eyes glows with rage* I am going to rip Lunch(The evil one) up into little bits! Xiahou Fumi:*Back away form Veglma fearfully*....Um...I hate to be Lunch if Veglma get her hands on her... Komachi Ayako: All Right! Soon we shall see what the second wish is going to be. ...I still think its is to wish back Radditz and Nappa.
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Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 22:40 EDT
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*wiping tears from her eyes* How many ways can I tell you you're brilliant? Superb comedy in this chapter, and as always your romance, action, and suspense elements are spot on. You certainly have the talent to make a living off writing. I'd be sure to buy every book, and I'm positive you'd have hundreds lined up behind me. Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 11:01 EDT
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deeeeee-licious! My, was that great! You reveal Vegeta's previous life with such grace. And your gift for comedy is at a zenith here! (I *was* wondering about Trunks!) Fine, fine, fine chapter! I read it before my morning coffee so I'm a bit woozy still. I'll read it again later today--that's how fun it was!
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing (not signed in) On: October 04, 2004 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are horrible to Vegeta! roflmao But so good too.... I haven't reviewed in forever! But--you're just too good a writer to ever just read and not review! I look forward to your next chapter.... Really look forward to it. Keep up the wondrful writing. It's this kind of writing that inspires me to write myself! ^______^
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 11:38 EDT
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I loved this chapter--the memory was wonderful. So realized and very emotional and entertaining. I really think you do the best job of tying Vegeta back to his former life. It folds into your stories so naturally; I love it. Looking forward to the next chapter, LisaB
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: August 02, 2004 03:16 EDT
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great chappy... your stories are so interesting... can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 14:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it'd be hard to top the last chapter, but this one was as poignant as it was funny. Amazing how your writing improves. This part 3 of your epic is by far the best--each chapter so self-contained yet somehow adding your dbz universe and exploring the B/V dynamic. Chibi Vegeta glimpses are a real weakness of mine--I love to speculate about the prince's life (seems that all fics do in that dept is linger on the abuse--I like your peripheral attention to the abuse and how you don't sensationalize it like some fic writers). Anyway, I was hoping for an update to this story just this morning and was so delighted it find one! Brava, brava! debbiechan
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