Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ever since you teased us with hints about this part of your 'trilogy' I've been waiting for you to post.
True to form, you've immediately given us a hint of what's to come - two fun-filled (?) weeks of Vegeta and Bulma traipsing around the world "the normal way" in an effort to make things right.
True to form, you've managed to capture the amazing ways the two sexes can look at a situation in complete opposite ways - Bulma was thinking of the future; in a few 'short hours' they'd be at the hotel where they could make love - how romantic. Vegeta was thinking only of the present; he couldn't screw her in his painfully aroused state - how fucked-up!
Oh yeah, this is going to be fun... :) |
