| "A DRAGONBALL HONEYMOON" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Firebird234 On: July 10, 2004 02:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolulty love your fanfictions I especally love this story. I agree with the other reviewers that you are a talented writer and I can't wait for the next chapter. And poor Vegeta having a child with Dorothy hopefully she'll leave them alone, here's a funny thought since the first wish is going to be used to bring back everyone Vegeta killed in Ivory City I bet the 2nd wish Bulma will use to bring back Vegeta and Trunks' tails. I also wonder if you are going to rewrite the Buu saga to fit into your fanfic timeline and include Trunks' psychic talent (and any other possible children Bulma and Vegeta might have) it would definatly be interesting, keep on writing we all love it.
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 05:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story just keeps getting better and better.
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 05:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story just keeps getting better and better.
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Reviewed By: Darkefire On: June 02, 2004 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I live for your latest installment. Your stories are original and compelling without getting cliched or overwrought. My only complaint with you is the amount of time I have to wait in between each chapter! (by the way, take as much time as you need; I wouldn't want anything to get omitted because you were rushed!) I more or less take your words as gospel of the "lost" years in between the sagas, and your latest endeavor promises to provide numerous plot twists. Keep up the good work!
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Title: yeee HAH!
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: March 29, 2004 18:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore your fics--! I didn't think it was possible you could get better, but this one has all the saucy humor of that xmas fic plus more more more plain ole delight--wow, hitting us with the great lemons asap! Merci! You're the only B/V writer who can do the froth and humor of manga/anime while still being so damn romantic (something Toriyama really wasn't, alas!) I love seeing the old funloving Bulma back (she tends to get way serious in fics!) I seriously don't know why you fanfic writers do this stuff when you're this talented and your time is probably gold. Anyway thanks for feeding an obsession with such delightfully good writing! Your Veggie has always been perfect but now I'm loving this rolicking non-CC exec Bulma we didn't see in the last two cyber novels (?what do you call em anyway?) AWESOME, wow, geez, golly! debbiechan shalombayit@juno.com (PLEASE add me to mailing list!)
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If only there were words to describe the glory of the keyboard you use to compose your stories. I'd try to praise your fics instead of your writing utensils, but nothing I can say would come remotely close to expressing how wonderful they are. Take as long as you need between each chapter. A month or a year, it doesn't matter. The stirrings your writings leave in my imagination keep each chapter as fresh as the day you posted them. I don't even have to reread to catch up. It's as if my mind keeps your stories on hold, only to pick up as if things had never left off. I dream each day of becoming an inkling of the writer you are. Thank you for sharing your visions with us. Thank you so much.
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Reviewed By: LZ On: December 23, 2003 16:35 EST
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I suddenly realized I misspelled your name. PLZ forgive me. P.S. THX for reviving me from my original state.
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Reviewed By: LZ On: December 23, 2003 16:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm on the ground, not moving (except for the occassional twitch). Right below my feet is a note. Upon closer examination, one can read... "If you're reading this note right now this means that I have passed out from laughing so hard and therefore can't express any comments directly. If so, this means you (Darke Angleus) have done a great job, and to please continue with this wonderful fic. Sincerly, LZ" " P.S. Be so kind as to dump a bucket of cold water on me to be sure that I am still alive. THZ"
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Reviewed By: Angel Tinuviel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 23:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic definately has me on edge. ^__^ nice lemon. But that last sentence was extremely disturbing. *cringe* must you screw with their lives so much. *shudder* stupid bitch. grrrrr. lol she's bald mwahahahahahaha. I love vegeta so much. lucky bulma. ^__^ i'm waiting in atticipation for the next chapter. just stop screwing up their romance. "Can you feel the love tonight" ^__^ ok i'm officially in crazy for vegeta and B/V mode. Anyways good job.
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Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 10:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Bows before the mighty Darke* You never cease to amaze me. Your plots are amazing, your characterizations superb, you have the best dialogue and descriptions in the fanfic business, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. You're fearless in your writing and that's what makes it so incredible. I love the Dorothy character; it's refreshing to have a new antagonist, especially one that isn't trying to blow up the planet like all the others. And about Ronnie, well, I have goose bumps. I cannot wait to see how you handle this twist; it's completely unexpected, and absolutely perfect. Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us; you are the diamond in the rough.
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Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 10:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Bows before the mighty Darke* You never cease to amaze me. Your plots are amazing, your characterizations superb, you have the best dialogue and descriptions in the fanfic business, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. You're fearless in your writing and that's what makes it so incredible. I love the Dorothy character; it's refreshing to have a new antagonist, especially one that isn't trying to blow up the planet like all the others. And about Ronnie, well, I have goose bumps. I cannot wait to see how you handle this twist; it's completely unexpected, and absolutely perfect. Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us; you are the diamond in the rough.
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 12:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta and Bulma are just trouble magnets, aren't they? Can't wait to find out how all this will play out. . . .I don't suppose begging will get a new chappy out sooner. BTW, glad your site is back up! DBZ isn't the same without the Darkside!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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::Steps back from computer:: Okay... I really didn't expect this. This could prove to be a serious twist in your plot, and that's a good thing. But how your fans will react to it, I'm not sure. I mean...this whole new 'element' is going to cause some major porblems, and I really don't want to hear about Dorothy anymore. She's put Vegeta and Bulma through ENOUGH, and now this new 'element' is going to have her ass in their lives forever. I have to bear in mind that: #1: You don't give a shit about how we're going to react to this plot twist, becasue like you said this is YOUR interperation of v/b. #2:This is fanficiton, the idea is to express yourself, and not be so repeative like so many fanfictions out here. #3: That I know that you're going to make it all right in the end, somehow...but it's a storng possibility that you may loose some loyal fans with your plot surprise. But then we can repeat reason #1 again... But I'm stickin' around. As always this is a very good chapter, no matter how low I wait for one it's always worth it. I'm going to wait quietly for the next installment, and see what wacky stuff you'll put our favorite couple through, until then, may the muses keep you inspired! :) gg
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Title: Hiya!!!!
Reviewed By: kodachi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 11:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods, Thank you(!) for updating. I always loved your stories (..."From bad to Worse"...) and you are damn well talented! I like the way you portray Vegeta. Of course the other characters are very well developed as well, but I´m a Vegeta-fanatic and pay special attention to him... ^-^ Anyway I hope to see more and wish you tons of luck for the future. ~kodachi~
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Reviewed By: steweddonuts On: October 19, 2003 19:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you are kidding.... that is the most disturbing sentance I have ever read in my entire life. That CANNOT be Vejita's kid! Noooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! Thanks for updating, I'm already addicted.
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