| "A DRAGONBALL HONEYMOON" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 18:24 EST
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Another wonderful chapter! how do you do it? Both of the dreams were just perfect and the light touch to the end was magic. great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Princesssvegeta On: February 28, 2005 05:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love love love love love this story am seriously going to cry when you post the final chapter. please say you willlllll continue :)
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Reviewed By: Bulma16 (havne't signed in yet) On: February 27, 2005 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter! I can't tell you how excited I was to see this fic updated at long last! I loved the Jewish Vegeta and Lester's "Australianisms". Amazing job DA!!
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Reviewed By: kendra(less)not loged in On: February 26, 2005 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually screamed of full blown joy when I received your email that you updated. As for the chapter I love the way mix the dark with the comedy. Even though I feel sorry for the loss vegeta had to experiance again. I'm glad his ass, saved his ass (bad pun intended).
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Reviewed By: Menal On: January 27, 2005 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE.
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Reviewed By: Turtle Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I thought I was going to pee myself, I was laughing so hard. What Vegeta and Nappa did to Radditz was just aweful! I have really enjoyed reading your stories. Of all the fanfics, I think yours have remained truest to the characters. I look forward to the continuation of this story.
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Reviewed By: zorella_happymood On: November 24, 2004 17:06 EST
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gokusgirl, seriously, how could this story lose readers? ^_^ Too damned good. DA, as per usual 'twas fantastic. It's always a 'yay!' moment when I get your email, and has been for so so long now. I'll still be around when the final email comes along (lets make that a long way away okay?)
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 16:44 EDT
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Wonderful! And you used Launch! What a great idea! I'm really enjoying this adventure; I love the mix of action and quiet moments of revelation. And I laugh! I would love to see the postcard pic! You really should do a series of drawings for this fic. It deserves them!
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 06, 2004 20:49 EDT
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*watchs Trunks' rampage*...Holy Cow! I hate to see what a true saiyan baby would do. *Komachi Ayako, Xiahou Fumi, and Yin Yi`Jing nods their head in agreement* Komachi Ayako:*Blinks her eyes in disbelief* I agree with Bulma, I can't imagine Vegeta not wanting to train. Xiahou Fumi:*trieds to imagine Dodoria as a female*...Is it good that I can't Dodoria as female or not? Yin Yi`Jing:It good that you can't imagine that ,Young one. *Eyes glows with rage* I am going to rip Lunch(The evil one) up into little bits! Xiahou Fumi:*Back away form Veglma fearfully*....Um...I hate to be Lunch if Veglma get her hands on her... Komachi Ayako: All Right! Soon we shall see what the second wish is going to be. ...I still think its is to wish back Radditz and Nappa.
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Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 22:40 EDT
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*wiping tears from her eyes* How many ways can I tell you you're brilliant? Superb comedy in this chapter, and as always your romance, action, and suspense elements are spot on. You certainly have the talent to make a living off writing. I'd be sure to buy every book, and I'm positive you'd have hundreds lined up behind me. Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 11:01 EDT
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deeeeee-licious! My, was that great! You reveal Vegeta's previous life with such grace. And your gift for comedy is at a zenith here! (I *was* wondering about Trunks!) Fine, fine, fine chapter! I read it before my morning coffee so I'm a bit woozy still. I'll read it again later today--that's how fun it was!
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing (not signed in) On: October 04, 2004 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are horrible to Vegeta! roflmao But so good too.... I haven't reviewed in forever! But--you're just too good a writer to ever just read and not review! I look forward to your next chapter.... Really look forward to it. Keep up the wondrful writing. It's this kind of writing that inspires me to write myself! ^______^
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 11:38 EDT
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I loved this chapter--the memory was wonderful. So realized and very emotional and entertaining. I really think you do the best job of tying Vegeta back to his former life. It folds into your stories so naturally; I love it. Looking forward to the next chapter, LisaB
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: August 02, 2004 03:16 EDT
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great chappy... your stories are so interesting... can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 14:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it'd be hard to top the last chapter, but this one was as poignant as it was funny. Amazing how your writing improves. This part 3 of your epic is by far the best--each chapter so self-contained yet somehow adding your dbz universe and exploring the B/V dynamic. Chibi Vegeta glimpses are a real weakness of mine--I love to speculate about the prince's life (seems that all fics do in that dept is linger on the abuse--I like your peripheral attention to the abuse and how you don't sensationalize it like some fic writers). Anyway, I was hoping for an update to this story just this morning and was so delighted it find one! Brava, brava! debbiechan
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