| "A DRAGONBALL HONEYMOON" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: LZ On: October 19, 2003 18:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...HOLY SHIT! No one could've seen that coming! I can't help but feel a little sorry for Dorthey...but she deserved it nonetheless. I wouldn't mind if you brought those two (Dorthey & Ronnie) back into the mix later on in the story. Matter of fact, I'm hoping you do! Good job, keep it up!
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Title: Star Struck
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm afraid I'm going to have to start taking meds for an ulcer... what a horrible thing to do to poor Vegeta! What a horrible way to end this chapter! My god, hasn't the poor prince been through enough? (My god, how can you keep coming up with all these fantastic plots?) Here I was, looking forward to Yamcha's reaction, and you had to go and make him almost... decent. Sure, you made up for it with that Pereaux bitch. Jeez, she is one genuine slime bucket. *Still shivering over the end of this chapter.* I can think of a better wish for the dragonballs now...
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Reviewed By: Hetchi 1 On: October 13, 2003 16:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please update your fic..it's been sooo long
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Reviewed By: SaiyanGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 23:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lOVE tHIS fIC sO mUCH. lEMONS aRE sO gREAT. cAN'T wAIT fOR tHE nEXT cHAPTER! yOU aRE jUST sOOOOO tALENTED.
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Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 19:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!!!!
Must...Kill...her!!! I love this story though and the lemons.. :P..Please update soon! You are a very talented writer!
~Nikki |
Reviewed By: Mr Peepers On: August 05, 2003 10:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm hooked! (Again) This is fun! I love the continuing story line. You are consistently excellent, DA! Great lemon, plot twists and characterizations as usual. You are my favorite FF writer and I'm soooooooo glad you're back!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 03, 2003 19:48 EDT
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BRILLIANT!! The b*tch is back, I love it. Next chapter is going to be so much fun, I can see it already! Great start to another fun-loving B/V story. Again, you've got Vegeta down-pat. He's honestly my favorite fan-version of Vegeta and the closest, I think, to the original. Loved last chapter when he pitched the truck. Too funny. Looking forward to next chapter as always :) |
Reviewed By: bise b On: August 03, 2003 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! what a sweet chapter!!! dude! how could you leave every1 hanging! you are so evil! haha PLEASE have a new chapter up REALLY soon! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 16:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
"Haven't we Vegeta?" !??????????!!!!!!!!!!???!!!!!!!!!
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTT?
NOoooooooooooo!! X(
baaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh....
stupid...slut -__-
Greta chapter ^^ Liked the lemons :P
CONTINUE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: SakuyaKatsumara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could kiss you! This story is absolutely loverly... I loved your whole series! Hard to believe it's been almost a year.. or is it two?
Anyway, keep writing! |
Reviewed By: TJ On: July 26, 2003 04:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Can't wait to read more!! Update soon pleassse |
Reviewed By: veggies_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 00:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAH!The long awaited sequel! I am soo happy! And it is better then I expected..10's all the way! Please write more soon! :) |
Reviewed By: Evil_Blue_Crayon On: July 06, 2003 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the way this has turned out. When I read the other story I couldn't stop laughing at the scene where Vegeta dumps a large uncut diamond in her face. I just thought to my self that that is something I could picture him doing in the anime. Hope to see more chapters out from you soon. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: July 06, 2003 20:41 EDT
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OMG!! This is great. I was beginning to wonder if they were ever going to make it to the hotel, though. Trunks is such a little demon, too. ^_^ I love it! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! This fic is halarious!!
OMG!! I love it!!
I laughed sooo many times, everything's in character...OMG!! This is one of my favourite fics now!! ^^
I LOVE IT!!
The Prologue was soooo funny, I loved how evil Chibi Trunks was to Piccolo!!
The first chapter was sooooooooooo amazing!! Haha!! the many times Vegeta got horny were great!! Haha, and the way ppl made fun of Vegeta's height (Hell, he's taller than me at least ^^ I think he's around 5'2-5'5...but damn DBZ artists always screw up porprotion in the show, sometimes he's the same height as Goku...Bulma's supposed to be 1-2 inches shorter I think, but I've seen pictures where she was 3 feet taller and 2 heads shorter ^^")
I loved every part of this fic, I saw no flaws whatsoever!! You have a talent for VB fics!! ^^ They are sooo you!!
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!! |
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