| "Joey's Big Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
| Pages (4): [ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
Title: CH 1
Reviewed By: trespassor [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 02:03 CST
Comment/Review:
When one of the mice looked up at her and hissed, she went into a dead faint. I usually wait to review, to see if the story is gonna be worth the time or not. I just had to break with tradition here because of the above quote. Got a good laugh out of it! Even if the whole "drop some cheese and see what happens" thing is fairly ridiculous! In a good, silly way.
|
Title: Wah....
Reviewed By: TenshiStar-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I lubbed this... *sniff* Awwww, this has to be one of the sweetest nonromance stories I've ever read. I would like to know all the Ten Good Things about each other, and what happens with the Bandit Keith/Seto's mansion thing, too. :)
|
Reviewed By: Mill On: March 21, 2004 17:01 CST
Comment/Review:
(Millenia) I like this story and agree that htere shoudl be a sequel. I also have an idea. That Joey's dad comes back, escapin gprison or something, but Seto is there this time to defend and afterwards tells Joey his feelings about their friendship..or something more I don't know. ^^
|
Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I actualy logged in. I realy only have two points to make well really three. a) there beter be a sequal, b) you still have not fixed chapter 17, c) I love this story so you beter keep up the good work. P.S. I hope you did well with the history
|
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 21:14 CST
Comment/Review:
You had better write a sequel to this
|
Reviewed By: me On: November 21, 2003 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this story is like, ingenious, It was great. It had EVERYTHING!*gives hearty sniff*PLEASE write a sequel thing!
|
Reviewed By: Jolt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic was great, too bad it's over
|
Title: insaneAUTHORESS
Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 15:27 CST
Comment/Review:
ThAt WaS sOoO SwEeT!!! POOR JOEY! WRITE AN EPOLOGE WHEN JOEY COMES OUT OF THE COMA! that was an awsome story! :) :) :) :) :)
|
Reviewed By: Dragon Of Eternal or D.O.E. On: November 12, 2003 19:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Bravo! Bravo! Loved it! Yay! *waves little flag* The only bad thing is now it's over... *sniff*
|
Reviewed By: al On: October 28, 2003 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i'm reviewing for adreline (i can't spell it) and i think its a cute story. and yes i do know that it is a death fic.
|
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
his friend hahahahaha!!!! XD Awww....that so sweet at the end...^^ nice the end's kinda just hanging there isn't it? r u gonna have a squeal?
|
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 07:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Surely you aren't going to leave us hanging! I sure hope there is going to be a sequel.
|
Title: Urf??
Reviewed By: YamiNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's with the last chapters? Are they sposed to be the same?
|
Reviewed By: YamiNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 19:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like how in the chapter after Mokuba goes missing, you said Kaiba threw a "fir". Now don't get mad; I knew what you meant. But Imagine him, like rippin up a fir tree and hucking it!! You said it was december... coulda been a christmas tree!! HAaaaaahhaaa.... Oh, but it's a cool story!
|
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 00:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
...*blushing* i never think i'd get thanked for reveiwing...^^ im soo happy.... i think i'll just give up complaining.... i seriously hate jou's father now...
|
| Pages (4): [ 1 2 3 4 › » ] |
