| "On The Sea" Reviews/Comments [ 207 ] |
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 18:18 CST
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loved the latest updae kinda scary on kages part g2 say love your story love love it your a great writer im gettin kinda sick of how some ppl write cuz it monst of the time doesnt make sence so glad to found a person wit a 10 on writin style and one wit great ideas well hopin for more updates soon hope u feel beta soon cya
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 16:27 CST
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Good chap! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: AnimeHimeko On: January 25, 2004 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! This fanfic is going really well. And for the record, I think a lemon would fit in perfectly. You could easily just take it out for the FF.Net version. But do what you want. Keep up the good work!
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Title: WEDDING!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: monkeymary89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all I want to say you are THE best writer on this site and this is my #1 favorite story. I started reading it before I became a member and when I finally became a member I couldn't find your story! Because I'm such a baka I couldn't remember the title OR your pen name, but now that I have found It again it is the first story on my fave list. Oh, and please add a leamon. (*gets evil henti look in eyes*) MUAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! (*relizes people are stareing*) Sorry about that, it dosen't have to be hardcore (though wouldn't be upset if it was) It could be very tastefull. By the way, I hope Kagome makes Inu blow his top when he sees her in her wedding dress, that should teach him to doubt Kagomes looks! (*evil look returns*) Yeah, tourture is what Inu needs . . . speacial tourture. (*relizes that shes acting wierd again*) Maybe I should lay off the sugar and get some sleep. Sorry to write such a long and boreing review, but you deserve it!(the long part not the boreing part) Anyways, great fic and update soon! P.S. Sorry for my henti-ness but Miroku is my brother. What can I say, he's warped my fragile little mind.
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Title: To have a Lemon or not to have a Lemon?
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha - he doesn't know what he's going to be in store for; and neither does Kagome - she's only seen the rough side of him, now hopefully he'll show her the gentlemanly side (?) to him!! *jumps up and down* Oh YES, please!! I want a Lemon!!!! I love all that romantic stuff! ^_^ But I'll understand if it's however the majority votes.....please update soon (with Lemon?)!! Can't wait to read more! Sara-sama
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Title: The Engagement
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! That's so funny!! Does Inuyasha realize just WHO Kagome is yet? If he doesn't, he will soon! I can't wait to read their reactions to this!! Sara-sama
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Title: Inuyasha's Discovery
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course Sess knew *hard to hide anything from him!* and I'm glad Miroku and Shippo are "ok" with Kagome being a girl, and not a guy like they thought! When Inuyasha realized Kagome was a girl and how he realized it - that scene was great! I loved how you wrote it, and now I'm going to finish reading what I missed! Sara-sama
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Title: So glad I found this!
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading your story over on aff.net, and I'm glad to find it over here! I know I've got a few more chapters to read, but Sango and Kagome found each other? Will anyone find out Kagome's secret? I so enjoy this story! Sara-sama
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Reviewed By: Crimson_demon On: January 22, 2004 21:01 CST
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Great job so far, keep going, and if you want my opinon, I think that a lemon would be a good idea, as long as it is written tastefully. Bye
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Title: Yes! Please! Lemon!
Reviewed By: LadyPantera On: January 22, 2004 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving this fic! PLEASE go ahead and make a whole tub of lemonade!! I think most of us are up for that!! :-) Looking forward to all your ideas!
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Title: i hate doin reviews but for you i will
Reviewed By: non reviewer writtin a review On: January 21, 2004 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want lemon please i hate doin reviews but i love this story and you are a great author and i really want to find out what happens so please update and please put in lemons PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: friendly reviewer On: January 21, 2004 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i vote for lemonthis is one of my favorite stories please update soon i want to know what happens at the wedding
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Reviewed By: kmf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 03:35 CST
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Hmmmmm, let me think..... Of course I want to see a lemon! But maybe, to keep everyone satisfied, you should combine it in a chapter that is not completely integral to the plot. That way people can skip it they dont want to read it, and hentais like me get their lemon fix of the day ^_^ Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: neokey On: January 20, 2004 01:42 CST
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luv it, please write more soon
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Reviewed By: Relix On: January 19, 2004 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, and i vote that: Yes, a lemon please!
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