| "Double Life" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr On: August 03, 2003 00:18 CDT
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I lOvE tHiS fIc... OnEgAi WrItE sOoN... Or I will run around wild chasing you with monkeys untill you go insane like me for making me wait... Lol just playing... Gome ne.. I am doing it again..my mom tried locking up the candy but she doesn't know I watch rugrats and they showed me how to get what I want with a screw driver... I love cartoons =p
Ja ne for now aaahhhhhhhhhh the monkeys are in my room HeLp me.... I am so scared..I'm under my bed...be quiet they can hear you... I am so scared.........I.....SEE..........MONKEYS!!!!!!! help me I am to young to die I am only 15... Untill next time stay away from monkeys!!!!! =p you have been warned!!!!! they fly you know... I am telling the truth ask my doctor.. she will tell you. |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kami you HAVE to update again soon!! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kami you HAVE to update again soon!! |
Reviewed By: Ranma-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 13:37 CDT
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you really need to update!! god im really excited bout whats gonna happen!! did i mention i had 6 cokes and its only 2:44 damn im hyper |
Reviewed By: ranma-chan On: July 31, 2003 12:54 CDT
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you really need to update or im goon die!! i need to find out if her dad is gonna know! ''-___- need to know |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 19:54 CDT
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Oh, I ment to ask this is in his human appearance, right? Yes? No? Maybe, so?
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 19:51 CDT
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I honestly did not expect a update so soon, but I'm glad. Thank You! Thank You! Thank You!
Now, this will definatily be interseting to read. Trying to keep her father off of campus for 4 days! Can't wait to read that. And I have a feeling that InuYasha was awake when he fell on her, but he just savored doing something he knew couldn't do if he was awake. And Hojo is going to naively go to Kagome's house to visit her to talk about how wonderful her cousin Kagome is. ( Boy, Hojo really gets the short end of the stick in these fan fics doesn't he? ) When do we find out what really happened in that accident? I have some ideas but I'll keep them to myself for now.
I really like this story and I hope you have much in store for it. Be awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ranma-Chan On: July 29, 2003 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the new chapter keep on writing and updating!! |
Reviewed By: Suzaku On: July 29, 2003 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good. Lookin foward 2 readin the next ones. by the way fuuka and sana r form kodocha r they not? |
Reviewed By: Ranma-Chan On: July 29, 2003 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv your story! i wonder if kagomes dad is gonna find out!!!??? you need to write more i am sooooooo hooked on this story so like you gotta update alot! |
Reviewed By: kiSsEs86 On: July 30, 2003 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sooooo cool!!! i luv it........UPDATE SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 03:13 CDT
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Whoa, how is she going to pull this one off? I am pretty sure that her dad would much object to his "little girl" having 24/7 access to boys. InuYasha is getting way to comfy. Coming in the room all wet and bare. ( Just a sec. I need a moment to process that thought. Mmmmm. )Okay like I was saying...then busting in the door like that! Boy or no boy, I have heard my guy friends talk. He violated the code: When the water is running you don't come in or knock loud and long first. Great chapter, I'd comment more but it is 4:20AM over here and I got thing to do come sun up. Be looking for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ranma On: July 29, 2003 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story!!! cant wait until your next chapter!! keep writing |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 28, 2003 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i loved that chapter. i can not wait to read more. adios |
Reviewed By: Kangel On: July 28, 2003 23:10 CDT
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great story please write more also i have a question how did inuyasha find out kagome was a girl cause u did't explain that |
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