| "Double Life" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 03:13 CDT
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Whoa, how is she going to pull this one off? I am pretty sure that her dad would much object to his "little girl" having 24/7 access to boys. InuYasha is getting way to comfy. Coming in the room all wet and bare. ( Just a sec. I need a moment to process that thought. Mmmmm. )Okay like I was saying...then busting in the door like that! Boy or no boy, I have heard my guy friends talk. He violated the code: When the water is running you don't come in or knock loud and long first. Great chapter, I'd comment more but it is 4:20AM over here and I got thing to do come sun up. Be looking for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ranma On: July 29, 2003 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story!!! cant wait until your next chapter!! keep writing |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 28, 2003 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i loved that chapter. i can not wait to read more. adios |
Reviewed By: Kangel On: July 28, 2003 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story please write more also i have a question how did inuyasha find out kagome was a girl cause u did't explain that |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 16:38 CDT
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Noooo! I need more! It was just starting to get go and you left me with a cliff hanger. You have to update soon, pleaseee? Besides a few spelling errors, I can tell this is going to be a great fan fic. Your description and stlye of writing are to shabby either. I will checking up and thirstly waiting the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: anne On: July 26, 2003 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like u'r story so much! pls. continue |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 11:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE! I LIKE THIS FIC SO MUCH! |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruboi On: July 25, 2003 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think u r good. Where is Sesshoumaru? Please continue the story. |
Reviewed By: ChUNky LuVeR [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 13:13 CDT
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WHy DIDN't YOU UP DATE?! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAA SNIF SNIFF YOU BETTER! ^_~' |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 05:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great !!!
don't get her expelled, please !!
I hope the doctor won't say a thing and taht he'll let her stay !
make it Kag/Inu too^^
loved it !
So fun !!
Kirisame. |
Reviewed By: kk On: July 23, 2003 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT FIC!!!! must continue!! If you do not, i'll um, i'll..........strangle u. don't know how ut i will. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 09:33 CDT
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OOOOOO!!!!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE! I LUV IT! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!
Allie-
::chants-coffeecoffeecoffeecoffee...:: |
Reviewed By: .:.LizziE.:. On: July 22, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic, update soon! |
Reviewed By: bEcca On: July 22, 2003 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice story~~ i really like it.. watz qunna happen?? is kaqome qunna qet kicked out?? well update soon~~ |
Reviewed By: ChUNky LuVeR [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool story keep writing!!! I just hope kagome makes it ^.^ |
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