| "Double Life" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: saiyanbeauty1 On: October 12, 2003 15:32 CDT
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AHH! NO! A evil cliffy. I love your story. Its very well written. Although I think you missed a few words here or there. But I can't really complain since my typing isn't much better. I really like where your going with this story. And the whole going back in time thing totally threw me off! I love unexpected changes. ^_^ I'm anxious to read the next chapter. Also...GO COLORGUARD! I'm on the color guard team at my school'd marching band. ^_^ I'm always happy to meet another color guard member. And I can totally relate to the many pratices and long hours. We had a hella lot of pratices before our big MSBOA festival. Needless to say we got a 2 alot of us were devistated. But thats only another reason to work even harder right? ^_^ Ah well this is getting pretty long and I'm just rambling so later. I look forward to the next chapter! ~_^
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Title: icy
Reviewed By: icy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 14:33 CDT
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the story is really good but how come you haven't updated yet, it has been sooooooooooooo long since the last update!! so please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Priestess Jade, the witch On: October 01, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so thrilled about your fanfic that I told a few friends and added you to my Favorites list. I realy hope that you update soon so that I can find out more about what happens. Somehow I have a feeling that Daisuke and Aki will end up together. Any way, please hurry with the updates. I tend to go bonkers with curiosity if I have to wait too long. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Muse-chan On: September 24, 2003 15:59 CDT
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This is my first time reveiwing your story, and I personally think it is soo cute. There were a few things that confused me while reading this story, but Chibi-no-ai pretty much named them. I don't really have anything I can think of that I can ask, because so far everthing has either been asked, or answered. Oh, and about the time management with school and etc. I totally understand your position. I too have the same difficult problem in getting things together the way you want with only limited time. Besides school comes first, and this is only a hobby that everyone as a fellow animefanatic enjoys. No body can actually get mad at you for trying. After all it's not a real job. Am I right? Now hurry up! Lol. (Jus kidd'n.) Hope to read more soon. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Chibi-no-ai On: September 24, 2003 15:46 CDT
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I feel so ashamed. I skipped over this story countless of times, and know that I stopped to read, I actually like it. I like it alot. However, I am a little confused about the purpose of Shippo, and why he took those six people with him to wherever he was going. Also, I'm still confused on another subject. What was up with Inuyasha's reaction when Kagome was knocked out by Miroku? Did Inuyasha figure out that Kagome was a girl? And if so, How? Other than that the story is great. I understand that you have a life of your own, and you won't be able to post as often as you hope. But, I'm willing to be patient. Until then, I'm hoping to read another chapter from you.
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Reviewed By: Kurama_Puka-chan On: September 24, 2003 15:33 CDT
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Thank you for telling me what AU means. I really appreciate it. Oh and the info you gave for chp 9 was also very useful. Personally I like the story just the way it is. It's really good. L8trs. :)
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Title: great
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASEEEEEE WRITE MORE. DON'T LEAVE US HANGING
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Reviewed By: jazzylady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your fanfic so far. The last unexpected time warp was very creative. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Hell's lil Bitch On: September 19, 2003 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fuck! would u just update damnit!! im sick and tired of waitin for the next chapter! Shit. u could make a Fucki'n shitty snail look like it was the fastest moving thing on earth. holy shit ur slow. sorry for the bad tude im just not a very patient waiter. |
Title: review
Reviewed By: Hell's lil Bitch On: September 15, 2003 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is great! im so excited. ihave an idea for the next chap. u should make kagomes hair be really long again that would put an interesting twist to the story!! |
Title: cool
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think she should keep pretending too be a guy. and get discovered none purposely |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 13:17 CDT
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Another great chapter, though it wasn't what I was expecting... :D!! Yay the adventure begins!! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out... I'll be looking every day! |
Title: Rev9ew
Reviewed By: Cresent Silk Roses(No Time to Log) On: September 14, 2003 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok When do they find out Kagome is a Girl? |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 14:04 CDT
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I must say this chapter wasn't as good as the other ones, but I still laughed through it. Daisuke isn't his cheerful self anymore. (guess that's the side effect of not having your own space.) And Ren....I mean Aki is moving there for good or something darker...? I'll be trying to crack the mystery. I still don't people were bothering you about the name thing. *shrugs and continues* And that is so cute that InuYasha is jealous. And he wouldn't even be having second thoughts about Kagome spending time with Daisuke if she wasn't a girl. And I hope that Aki and Daisuke come to a understanding. (as well as Aki and InuYasha.....on second thought that is wishful thinking) I wonder what will happen after Sango finds out that she blushed over a girl?! Is InuYasha going to find out about her, too? (Though I am still not sure what gave Kagome away. Maybe the vest slid a little to much..) Oh well, I'll stop here. I think I wrote to much. See ya next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Katie9821 On: September 12, 2003 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story. It's interesting. I like how everyone is portrayed in the story. Kagome, cutting her hair and all to go to this school. I like how she is finally getting through to Inuyasha, especially they are roomates. I wonder when Inuyasha will find out her secret of being a girl instead of a guy. Great story can't wait for the upcoming chapters. |
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