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Reviewed By: Eternal White (previously known as 'Kate ^_^' er wait.... actually, that's what i'm known as according to media miner... > [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahahaha!! I found it! *grins triumphantly* somebody had deleted all my bookmarked sites (which included ALL of the fanfictions i was reading. Not to mention the fact that i couldn't remember all of their names...) so i couldn't keep checking to see if you'd updated or not. but i was looking on the internet for something for school this morning, and i (in some really odd series of events) found your fan fiction again!! XD I was so happy. lol ^.^; But i loved the new chapters! There were just lovely. ^_^ And i TOTALLY thought there was something weird about Daisuke from the beginning!! ^-^ And what was the question you asked...? something about descriptivness? umm... the only thing i might add (i'm not criticising you!! ^ ^;;; you just wanted opinions, so...) is just more of what the MAIN main characters think. You know... what they feel, their opinions on things. and so on and so on. ^_^; besides that it's wonderful! (i hope you didn't think any of that was critisizm!! ^ ^;;;;) so...thanks again! ja ne! ~Eternal White~
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: February 26, 2004 14:40 CST
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aww he cooks thats sweet and the whole mother thing just to keep it under wraps hmm i wonder who did that to kikyous tmbstone well anyways coolie chappie and hope more come soon!
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Reviewed By: shan_01 On: February 26, 2004 04:55 CST
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Nice love it.Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kizna Kyouru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 13:15 CST
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yay, very good chappy! but what happened, did Inuyasha really kill Kikyo after she attacked him with a knife? And whats up with Naraku being all stalker-like in a cemetary, creepy. UPDATE SOON......please? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Wow!This fanfic was really a blast! I LOVE this!! Funny,interesting, original, romantic, it got everything that appeal to me!!!^________^ Come on!keep writing! I find this greaaayt!! And I wanna mooreee!!!!^.^ See ya!^.~/
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Title: 12blue12(logged off)
Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:06 CST
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i dont know were i started resadin this fic ff.net or hear well anyways really coolie update like where your goin wit the fic cya!
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Title: oOOOOo
Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 23:45 CST
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how dare her father... did he make aki go there just to keep an eye on her.. what a meanie how dare he aww now i just want to sock someone.. well i thank you for updating. hehe well buh bye
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Reviewed By: navyboarder17 ... On: February 12, 2004 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
much much better. I like it a whole lot again. Errr what's a beta reader? This coupling is confusing, I know inu and kag, but aki is messin me up, same with miroku. I like it though. Take your time writing like I said before. I'm in no rush... less u put out a killer cliffy. Then I'd be ranting and jumping up and down to get u to update. nice job au revoir
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Reviewed By: Missy Mel On: February 10, 2004 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease write another chappy! i just can't take it anymore! i keep coming home just hoping you'll write one! Keep up the great work! Sincerely Missy
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 09:35 CST
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Thank you! Thank you! For changing the story from that "going to the past" story plot. It confused me because it came out of no where. Besides I think you could do better seeing as the begin of your is really good. I know InuYasha is already suspious of Aki because of the way Kagome ran to greet her but once again the dog gives away the true idenity of our little sneaks...And I'm sure Kagome took InuYasha's statement the wrong way. He probably means or thinks he is responsible for Kikyo's death. (I would say some other stuff but I already said it when I reviewed the chapter the first time.)
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Reviewed By: Kizna Kyouru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 19:05 CST
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ooOOOooo very good, i hope you update soon. i think i would go to an all guys school if i could, it would be fun, i dont get along with girls well anyways. well yup yup, great job and update as soon as you can
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Reviewed By: navyboarder17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright! I am greatly appreciated t u for switching the story line, this was one of the best tory's till u had shippo take them all back to the past. It's be just to confusing and the story would last forever and ever. lol from your writing it keeps me from being able to predictr things, I like that. Normally I can figure out what's going to happen but this has really unnexpected twists so I have no clue. Neways I like the way your going with this again. SOO much better. Take your time. It took me almost a year just to write a single story (haven't posted it yet)it's gonna be good I hope though. it's too long though. well I'll reveiw l8er. au revoir
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic i wanted to read it like a half a month ago but then i noticed wen u updated last so i didnt want to read somtin that will nvr be updated but im glad your bac on the roll some the stuff u wrote was pure lmfao! well hope u update soon cya!
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 02:31 CST
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I'm so thrilled to see you're working on this story again! I look forward to seeing new chapters, but take your time! Great writing can't be rushed. We can all be patient and wait for your newest chapters. :) *cheers you on* Keep up the great work.
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Title: LOVE YA
Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for updating I thought you never would! *cheers* we all love you!
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