| "Double Life" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kurama_Puka-chan On: August 25, 2003 00:26 CDT
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Please don't scorn or laugh at me because I don't know this, but I wanted to know what AU stands for. Can someone please be so polite and tell me what it means? I would be so thankful. Oh yeah. This story is great.. Ja ne. |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 09:16 CDT
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Oh...My....GOD! THIS IS SUCH A COOL FIC!
It's origional, has a great plot, and it's just awesome!
::Grins evilly:: You know, you should update more. Updates lead to good things. And good
things are good. (someone-"Way to state the obvious, ass!!" ::suck their blood and let them die::)
Anyway, I REALLY LOVE this fic and would be very HAPPY if you UPDATED! HINT HINT!
(think of it as a b-day present! My b-day's on Aug. 31! Hoorah!)\
Allie- |
Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr On: August 12, 2003 03:10 CDT
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So when do you plan on updating? I have been hiding under my bed for weeks from those damn flying MONKEYS!!!! Coming out every now and then to see if you updated yet. I can only hold them off for so long you know!.....Onegai write soon or these Monkeys are going to get ugly. Arigatou and Ja ne for now my little friend. or in the words of the terminator......I'll be back =p =p =p |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 01:45 CDT
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Okay I just finish rereading Chapters 1-5. And it was very enlightening.
I notice somethings that I just brushed off before. Like the fact that Miroku knows. He has to! The comments he made, the stares, the dog! I bet when he went to grope Sango it was partly a test right? And if he doesn't know then I am disappointed in him. He claims to be the biggest "Appreciater" of women, and can't sniff a pu**ycat out of the bunch!
Moving on. Daisuke might not know that Kagome is a girl but he must think that she is a little wierd. He is always making her blush about InuYasha but convenantly when no one is around to see it. Then there is the fact that he is always telling her little tid-bits about InuYasha. That is when Daisuke is not telling her where to find him. They don't think it is strange that she is always asking about InuYasha? Doesn't seem very boylike to me.
And I wanted to ask something that has been bugging me. Is the fact the Sango is Dr Izumi's niece play a more important role in this story or you just didn't want to make up another character? I guess I'll keep a lid on the rest of my question. ( don't want to get annoying )
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr On: August 03, 2003 00:18 CDT
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I lOvE tHiS fIc... OnEgAi WrItE sOoN... Or I will run around wild chasing you with monkeys untill you go insane like me for making me wait... Lol just playing... Gome ne.. I am doing it again..my mom tried locking up the candy but she doesn't know I watch rugrats and they showed me how to get what I want with a screw driver... I love cartoons =p
Ja ne for now aaahhhhhhhhhh the monkeys are in my room HeLp me.... I am so scared..I'm under my bed...be quiet they can hear you... I am so scared.........I.....SEE..........MONKEYS!!!!!!! help me I am to young to die I am only 15... Untill next time stay away from monkeys!!!!! =p you have been warned!!!!! they fly you know... I am telling the truth ask my doctor.. she will tell you. |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kami you HAVE to update again soon!! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kami you HAVE to update again soon!! |
Reviewed By: Ranma-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 13:37 CDT
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you really need to update!! god im really excited bout whats gonna happen!! did i mention i had 6 cokes and its only 2:44 damn im hyper |
Reviewed By: ranma-chan On: July 31, 2003 12:54 CDT
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you really need to update or im goon die!! i need to find out if her dad is gonna know! ''-___- need to know |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 19:54 CDT
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Oh, I ment to ask this is in his human appearance, right? Yes? No? Maybe, so?
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 19:51 CDT
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I honestly did not expect a update so soon, but I'm glad. Thank You! Thank You! Thank You!
Now, this will definatily be interseting to read. Trying to keep her father off of campus for 4 days! Can't wait to read that. And I have a feeling that InuYasha was awake when he fell on her, but he just savored doing something he knew couldn't do if he was awake. And Hojo is going to naively go to Kagome's house to visit her to talk about how wonderful her cousin Kagome is. ( Boy, Hojo really gets the short end of the stick in these fan fics doesn't he? ) When do we find out what really happened in that accident? I have some ideas but I'll keep them to myself for now.
I really like this story and I hope you have much in store for it. Be awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ranma-Chan On: July 29, 2003 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the new chapter keep on writing and updating!! |
Reviewed By: Suzaku On: July 29, 2003 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good. Lookin foward 2 readin the next ones. by the way fuuka and sana r form kodocha r they not? |
Reviewed By: Ranma-Chan On: July 29, 2003 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv your story! i wonder if kagomes dad is gonna find out!!!??? you need to write more i am sooooooo hooked on this story so like you gotta update alot! |
Reviewed By: kiSsEs86 On: July 30, 2003 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sooooo cool!!! i luv it........UPDATE SOON!!! |
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