| "Double Life" Reviews/Comments [ 146 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 13:17 CDT
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Another great chapter, though it wasn't what I was expecting... :D!! Yay the adventure begins!! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out... I'll be looking every day! |
Title: Rev9ew
Reviewed By: Cresent Silk Roses(No Time to Log) On: September 14, 2003 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok When do they find out Kagome is a Girl? |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 14:04 CDT
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I must say this chapter wasn't as good as the other ones, but I still laughed through it. Daisuke isn't his cheerful self anymore. (guess that's the side effect of not having your own space.) And Ren....I mean Aki is moving there for good or something darker...? I'll be trying to crack the mystery. I still don't people were bothering you about the name thing. *shrugs and continues* And that is so cute that InuYasha is jealous. And he wouldn't even be having second thoughts about Kagome spending time with Daisuke if she wasn't a girl. And I hope that Aki and Daisuke come to a understanding. (as well as Aki and InuYasha.....on second thought that is wishful thinking) I wonder what will happen after Sango finds out that she blushed over a girl?! Is InuYasha going to find out about her, too? (Though I am still not sure what gave Kagome away. Maybe the vest slid a little to much..) Oh well, I'll stop here. I think I wrote to much. See ya next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Katie9821 On: September 12, 2003 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story. It's interesting. I like how everyone is portrayed in the story. Kagome, cutting her hair and all to go to this school. I like how she is finally getting through to Inuyasha, especially they are roomates. I wonder when Inuyasha will find out her secret of being a girl instead of a guy. Great story can't wait for the upcoming chapters. |
Title: can't wait any longer
Reviewed By: icy On: September 11, 2003 17:24 CDT
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i love your fic, and i check to see if u hav updated or not everyday, so please please please updated soon i can wait no longer!!! |
Title: WOW
Reviewed By: White Angel Chi {media miner member} On: September 10, 2003 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeeze this fan fic is good does every body not agreeeee with me. Hie if youka same dosent up date ill use those pills ive been saveing gerrrrr i love what youve done and u have my full support please up date and how do u reviw with colors
thanks meg simmonsO_o |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 10:33 CDT
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Sorry I havn't been writing you any reviews lately. My computer wouldn't boot up. But After the CPU was fixed the keyboard gives out on me! I couldn't type the letters: 'e','a','r','d', or the space bar! (And I think that the left windows button is on the blink, too.) But My dad got me a new-used computer but I won't get it until Sunday. It has been so bad that I have to copy and paste the sign in! (And belive me, c&p'ing 'Precious' and 'babygurl_4th' is no fun! And don't get me started on the passwords!)Oh and belive me I just have got to write you a review when I am up and running again! See ya Sunday!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha luver On: September 01, 2003 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv it thanks for updating i was waiting |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2003 01:05 CDT
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Hey Yoreaeryu! I did it again! Well I am kinda glad to know about the face. See I kind of pasted and copied for one of my emails and I felt a little guilty. But now I feel bad that We are using Renko-chan's review page as a chat room. Gomen. Our reviews are so close together that they look like a sea of purple. Cool!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2003 00:55 CDT
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Yes, another chapter! And I bow and graciously accept your compliment. I was unaware that my comments would give anyone the giggles. (Even if I can't spell.) Down to business now. ( *cracks fingers in anticipation* ) It just figures that Miroku would flirt with any female, even if it is the coach. Hey! Wasn't he on the track team, too. Tsk. Tsk. No wonder he had the fastest time in the school! I knew his blood would boil when he saw Kagome and Sango together. (even if he did play it off well) Leave it to InuYasha to water the seed of the inplanted fear about Kagome not liking girls in the guys heads. So Renko is there..hmmm. I bet Kagome's dad did that. Guess InuYasha is about to be bumped back a seat. And right after he was starting to respect her more for not prying answers out of him. Wonder if Renko is there to visit or to stay? Man, Kagome and Renko are going to give these boys the impression that all American guy are pretty boys. (I wish!!)But InuYasha is the only man for me! He comes and visits me every night and not only can I turn him off and on..But when he says something stupid I can mute him! Is that not the ideal of a prefect boyfriend? Enough rambling, Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2003 00:35 CDT
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Gaaahhh!!! HOW could you end it there?!?!?! AAAHHHH!!! I must know what happens next!!!!!!! Is Renko going to attend the school as well?!?!
And what do you mean by Inu-kun being human "for now?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!???" Must.... know.... SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yeesh... And here I thought I'd be all worn out when I got home from the convention... Oh well; Guess I am an actual otaku after all! Yay! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 13:15 CDT
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I forgot something in my last review... There's a gay doctor in an all-boy's school? That seems just a little wierd... Just a little, though.
Precious, you brought up another question that's been brewing in my mind while I was trying to sleep: If Sango and Kagome-sama DO end up good friends, they'll hang around each other, and Miroku will be 150% jealous, since he still thinks Kagome-sama's a guy.
'Nother question: Is Inuyasha still hanyou, but just in disquise? That was my first impression... Now I don't know.
And just how did Kikyo die? Will you tell the entire greasome story, with all the gory details? o.o That'd be great.
Precious, about the ¬.¬/¬_¬ face... I've no idea how to do it. I just saw it on some web page and copied it, then pasted it on a notepad document and saved it for future reference. ^^ I really like the ¬.¬ face... I use it a lot in real life. |
Reviewed By: MoROn4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your fic is the most best that I EVER READ! I love your STORY! WELL?! UP-DATE!!! |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 03:06 CDT
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I knew it! I knew that Miroku and Daisuke had to notice something was "strange" about Kagome. ( *patting myself on the back* )
So Sanog knows. Well Kagome wanted a female friend..now she's got one. Ask and ye shall receive. ( *heavenly music plays* ) I wonder if Sango will help her make an alter ego for Kagome, so she can have a female outlet. Hmmm..If she stays in her boy attire and she is around Sango a lot how will Miroku react? Won't that be juciy?
I can't believe that InuYasha did that for her! That was so sweet! The writing scheduel is fine with me. I'm in school, too. And when you can't check updates everyday they start to pile up!
Yoraeryu! It's about time you found this story! Thought you left me. Don't feel bad about writing in purple. Hey, I feel bad that it always seems that I review right after you. It makes me feel like a stalker sometimes. And how do you make that face? ( *looking at the keyboard and scratching head* )
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Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 01:47 CDT
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Why is it that every really good fic is found before me by my brother? Is it a curse that for someone who never reviews points out all the good fics to me?! Why?! WHY?!?!
Absolutely LOVE the fic, by the way. Updating every Thursday or Saturday sounds good. Then I'll have time to review for every chapter.
I need more! Tell me what's going to happen next! Must know!! O__o;!! Update soon! Thursday is good... I'll be leaving this Friday thru Sunday.
Hiya Precious. ¬__¬; I feel guilty for reviewing in purple now... I feel like I'm using someone else's idea... Curses.. I need to stop stealing from my brother's stash of butter rum; it's making my feelings all warped... |
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