| "Watch Over Me" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddesschico(Cant login) On: October 18, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter ^_^ I love Aria and Aten, I would cry if you killed them! I'd write a lnger review, but I haven't slept in 2 days, so I'm super tired. No skool or work for me tmr! Yay! I can sleep.
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Reviewed By: sliderkta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
From sliderkta-- Oh no... Aten & Aria are going to die!!! ;_; Oooo! Aten and Aria plushies! Thank you! Huh? Where did my M&M stash go.... Aria! Is that my... my... vibrator on the f-f-floor!!! ACK!!! Get back here with that, you little tot! LOL! **pounces on the Aria plushie, showering it with sweet kisses** About the Fanfic: It's really good, as usual. It was hilarious to see Yami Malik drooling over Isis.LOL! Poor, poor Isis... How does she deal with him??? I would be freaked out if he did that to me... And I can't believe Isis is being so cold when she fortells the future. Hmmm... I wish could show more emotion. Her cold attitude (in Chap. 24) really ticks me off. It's as if she doesn't really care for the kids. She seems alot like Shaddi... doom, gloom, and coldness. That's how I interpreted it. I can hardly wait til the next chapter! I wanna knows what happens with the "Meanie Lady". By the way, I happen to have my own fanfic here on Mediaminer. It's called "Yami Malik's Revenge!" and I was wondering if you could review it? I would love to know what you think! Talk to ya later! ^_^ --sliderkta
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 18:07 CDT
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Whoa... Evil Aten and Aria? Sounds like an interesting idea to me. The chibi's facing Yami and Seto... I hope they(Aria and Aten) aren't pure evil. -_+. Yay! A sequal to this story!!! Man three years ago I loved reading, then two years after that I hated it, and now, this year, I like it again because there are actually good things to read. Media Miner has better stories than my school's library.
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 15, 2003 13:02 CDT
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:: props her Ace Frehley bear plushie, her Ryo-Ohki plushie, and her bunny plushie around Aten:: There you go sweetheart, sleep well.
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 13, 2003 13:04 CDT
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wow....Aria, mischevious little girl, ain't she? Never know what she'll do next, same with Aten. and can only picture Aria and Aten facing Yami... wonder if it's gonna happen. and if it does, wonder who's gonna kill Aria? And if i find out, wonder if you're gonna write an other Sequel for this, and if so, i wonder if i will ever beable to stop asking question?
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea sorry about not review lately I barely get on anymore and have to read and write. *fall over tired* I've been getting up for school at 5 a.m and not getting home until 3:30 and then run around there to. ugh. then with my lover in a different city I got to drive 45 min. and now that I'm 18 I have to do alot more. my birhtday was sep 30. But hey still able to find time to read your stories. great chapter can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 07:26 CDT
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Oh.. Wooowww. Now we get to hear all about Aria and Atens past. It's so cool what you can come up with, bakurasgirl. I'm not even close to creativness as you are(is that a word?). I can see why Seto was upset when he heard about him and Aria being together. Rencarnations can be so deceiving...
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter! Poor Aten though! and Aria and Seto? That's weird! Anyway, sorry I haven't reviewed. Skool is still stressful. I still love the story though ^_^
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Title: oooo
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww poor chibis had a bad past.great chapter. can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 09, 2003 17:45 CDT
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poor Aten!!! and poor Aria!!! well, at least we know why they were all freakin out at the museum... but.... ewww...poor Aria... well, i feel much better that i got that outta my system, cant wait to see what one Joey picked for a kid^^
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 14:53 CDT
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Aww.. you make Aria and Aten so lovable!! That makes the chapter so kawaii!!!!! I like the way you make them speak like actual children.(the ting about the "hard" which was a "heart" was really funny. *sighs* Kids don't know what they say until someone says it back in a messed up way.
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 06, 2003 17:27 CDT
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Awwww, waii^^ it's niot just kawaii... it's.. super-waii.... it's unbelievable-super-waii... yea, that's it! I found a word that describs it!! good chappy^^ for that.... unbelievable-supper-waii fic, I present to you the "unbelievable-super-waii Bakura&Ryou hugging plushie" *Hands a plushies of Ryou and Bakura sitting and holding on another* waii ne?
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good, I always come back to read more. I always wanted a ferret. I looked at a few at a pet shop, but at my apartment they don't allow animals. *sniff* I had to leave my dog at my parents house in Michigan
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 03, 2003 09:07 CDT
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::Reluctantly parts with her precious Ryo-Ohki plushie, placing it gently in Malik's arms:: Poor Malik
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Title: Ch. 20
Reviewed By: Sailor Optimal Optimus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 07:25 CDT
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LMAO! I can't believe Aria did that! Too bad she got caught anyway. Keep up the good work and give Joey's dad hell.
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 02, 2003 21:07 CDT
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Awwwwww, poor Ryou, ne? been through so much and yet still has much to go through. man, I am never gonna get tired of Yu-Gi-Oh ever!! BG, you're a close friend...and I know i can count on you most of the time.... I broke up with my boyfriend... and now it's hard for me to do anything but sleep. I know this isn't healthy, and I know i shouldn't be doing it, but i just dont have enough will power to stop myself from doing it. I haven't eating in 2 days now... and i think 43 or more people have called.... but i just cant bring myself to answering them. My life is a living hell without my kitty (that's Tom).... What should i do? Keep up the good work ~*~Love Kat~*~
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww Poor Joey! *Huggles him*
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddesschico(I can't login..) [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute ^_^ You're so lucky that you got a ferret! I've always wanted one! But I had to settle for a cat, hamsters and mice.
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: September 23, 2003 21:06 CDT
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Awwww, poor seto, just had it dry cleaned. lol, FERRET!!!! I have no ferret >< and i cant get one!! my landlord says no when i askedhim. DAMN HIM
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, skools been hard! Anyway, great chapters! I love this story more and more each time I read it ^_^ Can you do a Yami/Yugi scene? Pwease ^_^
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: September 18, 2003 20:51 CDT
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KUSO!!! I forgot my password... I'll remember soon enough. ANYWHO, how are ya? Great chapter... mmmm, lemon cake.... *holds up a green eyed black cat* This is Otogi^^ He like's my other Cat, named kitty..or Mr.TwinkleToes. Omg... i love that name. Hato is an awesome author too!!! You... then YamiDragon, then Hato, then a bunch of others!! wow, you guys are awesome. |
Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 16:47 CDT
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Hey, if you can, check out my profile. I especially gave a detication to bakurasgirl in their! Oh, and if you have a fanfiction you'd like for me to read (like one that you wrote), email me and convince me to read it. Then I might praise you as well in my profile. I get convinced easily, so don't try to hard! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Crazy-kins On: September 15, 2003 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's written so good with detail and creativity. Not to mention a fabulous plot! I can never make those! Everyday I come here to see if you've updated. Please, don't stop writing fics! This is your faithful fan who isn't noticed but is always there, Crazy-kins |
Reviewed By: Mystical Dragon On: September 15, 2003 16:04 CDT
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Hummm AFF.net cant seem to get their act straight sooo thankfully I get to read your stuff here.... Very good so far..Love it now that the puppy's back where he belongs
::: Nudges Seto glaring at her Ryo-Ohki plushie:: Can it have it back now please? |
Reviewed By: Zera On: September 14, 2003 20:07 CDT
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i've just finshed the rest of the seres and now have come to this story and to tell you the truth --- this is one of the few stories i have read on the internet making it on my top 5 list!
plase add more as soon as you can!
zera |
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 16:04 CDT
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Man this just keeps getting better and better! I'm sooo glad that Joey is safe now! *phew!* Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter, PLEASE KEEP GOING!!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JOEY! POR POOR JOEY! *Huggles Joey* OMG! And he's my favorite character to! Lol, you have a thing with making dad's evil huh? The next thing you'll do will have Yugi's dad come back and do something. Hmmm....I think that would be kool! I'm not insulting you though!! I would never insult you! You're my inspiration! ^_^ Anyway, sorry I didn't review the last chapter. I was busy with the first day of skool. I'm a junior in h.s. now ^_^ |
Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: September 10, 2003 16:10 CDT
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::: tenderly places her Ryo-Ohki plushie in Joey's arms. ::: There.. hold her... She's comforting. |
Title: Chibis!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 01:51 CDT
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Hey your chibis seem sooo cute! I have just added some chibis of my own into my latest fic "Of Fire and Of Ice", please read and I hope ya like it! Please have more lemon between Ryou and Bakura!! I love them all!! (Especially Ryou, Bakura and Malik!) ^^ keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aria acts like me on a sugar high!*laughs* Aten is so cute! Acting like Seto!:) CHIBIS ARE SO CUTE!
I was wondering if you have any cinnamon(sp?) sented candles? I like those ^_~
Till next time, Ja ne! |
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