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 Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon  On: September 03, 2003 15:54 CDT
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Awwww.... Poor Joey ::: Hands him her Ryo-Ohki Plushie::: I know it's not Seto, but she'll cuddle you and if you give her a carrot she'll even purr!!
 Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 03, 2003 15:00 CDT
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Aww! Poor Joey. I feel bad for him, he's so sad. And I love the new look to mm.org! It looks so much better! What kinda store are you opening up?
 Title: O.O!!
Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 31, 2003 02:22 CDT
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Wicked man I absolutely love this story, such creativity! Such cute chibi babies! Hehehee... PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
 Title: I am AMT
Reviewed By: Kurai Malik  On: August 30, 2003 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The poor monsters!!! Bakura didn't you think you of them when you sent it to the Shadow Realm??!!?! Bakura: No.. Baka!*smacks his head* DO THAT AGAIN AND I HIT YOU HARDER!!! >:( Bakura: O_O OK. Now back to important matters. WHY DOESN'T MARIK COME OUT!!! HE'S BEING AN ASS RIGHT NOW!!*cries* Poor Malik and Joey. I would burst in there and kill that bastard father!(with Joey's permission of course^_^) But its your story BG, so do as you wish :) PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! Ja ne ^_^\\//
 Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 24, 2003 19:44 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*is now very relaxed* That was nice. Mmmm Lemon. I like what Bakura did with Anzu :)
 Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon  On: August 22, 2003 16:38 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! That son of a bitch shall roast in bucket of dog vomit, then steep in a pit of demon bile, then have is intestines yanked out through his dick!
 Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 22, 2003 02:24 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Possibly the best fanfic I have EVER read!! Please read mine too, The Millennium Tiara, Bakura's Secret and some other random comedy that i made up!
 Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2003 20:47 CDT
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Poor Malik... but at least Bakura say teh kids and they're alright. And I hope Joey tells soemone soon. I seriously want to kill Joey's faTher!! also, nince name of hte chapter. jsut like my fic.
 Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2003 20:39 CDT
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Omg... Did joey's dad force Malik to drink??? Ah!!!!!Poor Malik... OoOoOoOoOoOoOo B/R lemon... mmmmmmmm Lemon cake... O I'm going to have that!!! O.o mmmmmm cake. B/R decorations on the cake^^ hehehehehhehe O.o o.O, man, I really want that cake! I'm going to go make plans for getting it!
jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
woah, to many "a"'s
 Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 21, 2003 19:12 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*hugging chibi Ryou and Malik* Poor babies. Seperated from the ones they love :( I don't know who to feel sorry for Ryou, Malik or the chibis.

Nice going with the twister^-^ Laughed so hard.

Till next time. Ja ne!
 Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2003 20:45 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*hugs Ryou* I'm so sorry! You have to live with her ;_; I must kill her!

If Joey's dad touches Malik I'll.....I'll....I'll do something really bad to him!

Till next time. Ja ne
 Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2003 18:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue! I'm so glad i found the next part! This is really great!
Emily
 Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2003 17:55 CDT
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*Falls on floor from laughter* OMG! THAT WAS SOOO FUNNY! Poor Ryou...And poor Fluffy, are you ever gonna let the poor thing go? And no...Anzu isn't human....
 Reviewed By: ZL_Chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2003 22:07 CDT
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YEAH!!! ANZU BASHING!!!! Right? Hehehe. Good job. I hope things will work out for the group in the end. I shed a few tears while reading this.
 Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2003 09:15 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Shadow: Okay so Seto is taking care of the chibis-
Nijiiro: Good!
Shadow: -but Joey had to leave so he's staying with Yami and Yugi.
Nijiiro: Bad!
Shadow: Now Malik is the foster child of Mr. Wheeler, Joey's Dad-
Nijiiro: *shrieks* BAD!!!
Shadow: *rubs sore ear* And Ryou is the foster son of Mr. and Mrs. Gardner.
Nijiiro: ... Good?
Shadow: And his sister is Anzu.
Nijiiro: *screams in terror while running around in a circle like a living banshee*
Shadow: *jsut watches* At least they have someone... with a brain in hte house now. Oh boy... Please update soon while I calm down my 'lighter half'.
 Reviewed By: Caro  On: August 17, 2003 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hi! i've been at camp for a week or two, and i leave for maine in less than a week...but i still read and love and (sometimes/when i can) review your story! ryou gets stuck with...dare i say it...anzu???!!!!! poor ryou, for everything that happened... *sniff* i took some of your story to my sleep away camp, i also took a one shot lemon...i got cought, opps...hehe ^.^;;; well, i hope i can talk to you soon...
Caro
 Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 17, 2003 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O.O HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO RY-CHAN?!?!?! ANZU AS A SISTER!! ARRRRGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!! I SHOULD KILL HER RIGHT NOW!!!*goes of to kill Anzu*
 Reviewed By: AlphaSlave [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2003 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Jou's daddy!? That is wrong on so many levels. Oh that's not safe..not safe at all...what a fix. And, congrats on getting married! I'm so happy for you. I know whatcha go through with parents not accepting your lifestyle, mine are the same way. v_V;; But, that hasn't stopped me! I wish you the best of luck! And you guys are getting married the day before my birthday! So, yay! ^_^ hee hee. And update soon!
 Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2003 12:50 CDT
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Mr. Wheeler?? Oh that CANNOT be good news!! *whimpers* I think the four of htem make grat paretns!! They went through such great lengths to protect the kids! And well yes I agree Isis should have ben there. I mean I know she has to work but it's almsot like she doesn't care. No offense but Ryou had a better chance with Solomon being his guardian (is he alive in the fic?) but plz hurry and update! I want to see the eraction of the guys face when they get the letters. and will Aten be okay? I mean the poor thing seems to be having some trauma issues *looks sheepish* Um my major is psychology, so sorry for the pyscho analyz (i cannot spell)
 Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2003 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!! Mr. Wheeler? But...how? Argh! I wanna now! Update soon ^_^ I like this so far.
 Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2003 11:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't know who I feel more sorry for... Joey, because he was split up with Seto for a bit, Seto, who is split up from his puppy, and has to watch chibis, Yugi because he will run out of food in like... half an hour with Yami and Joey both being there, Malik because he was split up with his yami, and sister, and has to live with joey's dad. Marik and Bakura, because they lost their chibis, and hikaris, or Ryou, who lost his babies, is split up with his yami, and other lovers, and has new parents, not to mention the evil bit-.... girl who talks WAY to much about friendship and has a ra-forsaken crab named fluffy.... I guess Ryou! Poor guy, I feel really sorry for him.
And thanks... I know I have you for support... but it may not help, arigatou for being here for me anyways BG, you're a lot of help
Well, I have to go, jaa ne minna-san!
 Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2003 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Faints* ANZU IS HIS STEP SISTER! Omg..Poor Poo Ryou-cha *Hugs him* And poor Malik to! I ownder whats gonna happen.
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