| "The Claim" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: ~Shu-chan~ On: November 16, 2003 20:35 CST
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Oh no!! Howard can't come for Duo now!! *cries* He must stay back!! - Umm... hehe. Another good chapter! Well written! Keep up the good work! ^_^ Can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 19:02 CST
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OMG!!! Poor Duo!! **HUGGLES DUO** Da horror!!! HEEEEE!! That was so great!! He remembered!! I TOL U!! I KNEW IT!!!! Ha! Ha! Ha! **Clears Throat** Ooooo!! Chieftain's finally gonna get his just-desserts!! WOW! What a plot twist!! I'm like in SHOCK!! LOL!! GREAT job!! OMG! OMG! OMG! I can't wait fer da next chap!!! UPDATE SOON!!! ~Wanders away in very pleased and delightfully shocked~
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Reviewed By: ~Shu-chan~ On: November 11, 2003 14:15 CST
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Ohh!! What a evil cliffhanger!! o_O I'm enjoying it! That big bad wolf.. freaky. I shivered, it was that great!! I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 10, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You are so mean, this is a bad, very bad cliffhanger. Update soon and keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 17:20 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! **Wails and whines** Grr!! That's so evil!! LOL! Boy I'm a hypocrite. . . I do that too! lol. OMG!!! PEEZ!!! Don't keep us in too much suspense!! I'm soo happy Duo can have children!! YAY!! *Glomps Duo* Hee! Hee! Update soon!! **Wanders quickly away as the big bad wolf shows up** ^.^
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Reviewed By: yo On: November 08, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: yo On: November 08, 2003 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
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wow....more more more!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can't believe duo was stupid enough to go outside, especially considering his promise to heero. but at least, this will get the story moving.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 08, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no a cliff hanger I hope Heero can save Duo and I want them to have a beautyful baby .. Well I hope things go that way... This story is the best and I can't wait to see what comes next .. You keep writing I'll keep reading ..Please update soon TTFN.
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Reviewed By: Destinys lot On: November 04, 2003 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love it. That was such a cute chapter.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 03, 2003 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Sighs happily. This chapter was so cute and sweet. Dou and Heero having a real converation, the blushing and Heero holding Dou was great. Keep up the goood job.
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 14:54 CST
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*SQUEALS* EIIIYYY!!!!!! What an adorable ending!! ~.^ I can't stress how much I love this story!! Oh! Oh! Lemme guess!!! Duo was the one Heero was protecting from that monster, wasn't he!! **Sees the Light** That's when he made his promise about protecting him!!! Am I right? Hee! Hee!! Update soon!!! ~ Your now addicted wandering fan~
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Heero & Duo cuddling, KAWAII.
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Reviewed By: Shu-chan On: November 02, 2003 18:33 CST
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Another well written chapter! I know I am not saying much, and you hear it too often, but do keep up the good work! Your stories are great!!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: November 02, 2003 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story ...And Ilook foward to each and every upadte .. This story is so sweet and Wufei is an ass ... Please update again soon..TTFN
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