| "Condom City" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: crazydontcoverit On: January 22, 2005 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool i luved it. Keep wondering who kagome's ganna pick! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: kougagurl666 On: January 22, 2005 15:16 CST
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NOOOO you can't stop it there you are evil!!!!! I want more please update again soon I can't wait!!
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Reviewed By: essies On: January 22, 2005 11:05 CST
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please update
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Reviewed By: Narlyenatvanya On: January 22, 2005 04:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your fic so far. It's interesting to see how you've created the personalities of the inu-brothers, as well as Kagome. I'd love to see you update again soon, but I know life can be hard, so take your time. I would like to mention, however, that when writing the dialogues in quotes, please try to put question marks where there are questions. It's just easier (for me) to be able to see the proper punctuation. Having mentioned that, though, I'd also like to commend you for your style. I very much enjoy it and that you use (mostly) proper grammar. Also, you mentioned that this is a prequel to another fic you've written. Are you willing to say which it is, or do you want us to wait until the end of this one to find out?
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Reviewed By: HuHu_huggiez On: January 22, 2005 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH SHIT WOW....... UPDATE!! OOO SESSHIEE IS GETTING TO CLOSE TO KAGOME PLEASE CHANGE THAT LOL
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Reviewed By: soonchaos On: January 22, 2005 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute chappie. sess is so sweet! i like i like! but don't make him too sweet or else he'll lose that trademark arrogance of his. ^^ not much happened, just an intro into a bad situation kagome gets herself into, right? but its an update! yay!!!!!!!
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Title: Condom City
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 21, 2004 16:22 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Condom City
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 03, 2004 21:05 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 02:48 CDT
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I like the fic. Great read. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: October 05, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story! I can't wait to see how it turns out and how Kagome is going to explain what condoms really are. God, that's funny just thinking about it!
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Reviewed By: mushroom999 On: October 04, 2004 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: morwen of mage On: October 04, 2004 17:06 CDT
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hey, i've read your fan fic version of this fic and i liked it, but i can't see any dif yet between the two. could you please update again soon?! i really can't wait to read about the triangle between the two bros and kagome. please, i say again, please update soon!
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Title: YAY you updated.
Reviewed By: Missy-bee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you got words missing but it okay it was a fun chapter. sesshy was as sexy as ever and that's always a good thing.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is great please update soon
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Reviewed By: la la On: September 15, 2004 19:17 CDT
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that is a good story just please hurry up and up date that was soo unfair how you stoped when it was getting good.
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