| "Cages" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Xu On: December 30, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kyaaaaaa~~ u updated again!! yay yay!! ^_^ keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan On: December 29, 2003 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is wow! Please hurry and get us the next installment...too many clffhangers are driving me insane.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 22:49 CST
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WOW, it gets thrilling more and more! Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: Kurokitoshiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 19:41 CST
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WAI! How could you do thank neko-sama * shake* You meany! * shakes again* you sadist, why do you torture them! * sniffles* ..but again i suppose it make the story even better! ^-^
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Title: ch 15
Reviewed By: mookienh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 16:57 CST
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OH! Wow. Excellent, in character handling of Aya's reaction to the ugly truth. My stomach dropped when Kikyo got back to his room at the end of the chapter. I nearly cheered when Aya came close to cutting his hair. And despite the big cliffhanger regarding Aya...I'm still curious as to how the whole Ken/Kase thing will play out. Phew!
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 18:26 CST
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ahh and again with Kikyou and Tsubaki goodness *grin*...me likes THAT *nod nod*! Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: Golden for ever On: December 14, 2003 12:53 CST
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I like it a lot. it's getting better with each chapter. I used to download chapters from your page, I prefer it to MM.org, but it seems You've hadn't update it for ages.
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Reviewed By: Samarghand On: December 14, 2003 07:53 CST
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The fic by itself is great but the links(after chapter 11 or so)and the "index" drope down box are making me unhappy can't you do any thing about this problems ????
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Title: Short but skillful written
Reviewed By: Java On: December 07, 2003 12:49 CST
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Ah, Chapter 13 was rather short but thrilling and very skillful written, continue the good work.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 09:25 CST
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*Sigh*....VERY WELL WRITTEN, NEKO! Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 21:53 CST
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Grrr. I so want to KILL Hirofumi RIGHT NOW. Another fanastic chapter, very well done. I love the interaction you have between the characters, and I really, really, really hope that Yohji and Ayumi could free Aya ASAP before he commits suicide..... Happy endings always are nice to stories like this. Great job. Can I be the one to kill Hirofumi? Please? Please? PLEASE???
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Title: ch.12
Reviewed By: Atiko On: November 30, 2003 15:09 CST
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I just finished this chapter and yet I'm waiting impatiently for the next one. strange ne? the story is getting more intresting with each chapter you add and oh, I really enjoyed this one. it's funny I usually don't like Ken much but today I enjoyed reading about him!!! o_O hope you up date soon. Yeh I know You only just added this chapter. blame such requests on your high talent.
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Title: Chapter12 was GREAT
Reviewed By: Sara chan On: November 30, 2003 06:37 CST
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You're always surprising me. each time when I think the fic can't get any better you prove me wrong! Well no offence, in this case I LOVE to be proven Wrong.
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Title: what happened to chap.12????
Reviewed By: Hidden2 On: November 29, 2003 14:28 CST
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I just Yester day read Chapter 12 and it was SOOOO nice whoever today I was discussing it with some friends and was shocked to learn that it had vanished from this site!!!!!
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Title: cages
Reviewed By: no one On: November 29, 2003 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is good, i admit that i enjoyed reading it. but i'm sorry to say that i've to stop reading this fic now cause the chapters and storylines had gotten too horribly angsty for me to continue reading. it seems like things just continue to get angstier and angstier without any sign of happiness for our poor ran/ayan and yotan miserable lives. i just can't stomach the pains and misery thats seems to sunk deeper and deeper into both of their lives, and even afecting those around them as well, especialy their love ones. i can't believe how selfish ran lil sister aya-chan can gets sometime. here she lives a life of luxuaries, while her poor older brother had to spread his legs for that dirty bastard hiro. sorry if my comments sounds kinda harsh and hard, but it's just the way i see it soo far. this fic of yours is very good, just too angsty for my tastebuds to take. i love angsty fics, but NOT too angsty like this one. bye!
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