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Reviewed By: sage_libra On: November 02, 2003 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the humor and the way you write these characters...can't wait for the next chapters.
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Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: mookienh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 07:51 CST
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Woooo...seme Aya! I love the way you write the steamy scenes between the two of them. Even the way Aya's dirty talk was less of a turn on than expected - wow. There is a lot more to this relationship than sex, and small things like that really drive the point home almost more than the feelings between the two of them. Kikyou's background was a surprise, but it makes perfect sense how he and Aya would be as close as they are now. I look forward to seeing some of the reasons behind the little in-jokes between the two of them that were mentioned. Ken didn't seem to mind the visual image of being tied to the bed if Yohji wasn't present? Hmmm...that means that he doesn't mind the image of being tied up by Mamoru? Interesting... I love this story, and am so pleased that you have managed to update as frequently, with each chapter full of passion and emotion and mystery. Kudos! (Errr, no pun intended!)
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 00:54 CST
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Teehehehe! Great job on this chapter, as always! Defnitely suprised me by making Aya the seme in their lastest bout of sex, although I really liked it. ^_^ I'm truly glad to see that Aya and Yohji are starting to be happier, even though they're also worried about being found out about their true nature of the relationship1!!!!
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 19:23 CST
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*Hehe* "You need to shave..." oups, HOW could I forget...Yohji has something called "beard" too ^_^ *silly Koji-chan* *laugh*. Ah, Kikyou and Tsubaki appeared too...that was good, I like them around! Ui, Yohji was bottom...and I didn't mind at all ^_^...now, that's a surprise...hhm, how could that... *is walking away while scratching her head and mumbling incomprehensible things*. Ja Koji-chan *appears out of the blue* er, keep going oh great Neko ^.^...you know we're all too eager to read the next part ^_^.
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Title: Chapter 9 was great
Reviewed By: Atiko On: October 27, 2003 10:36 CST
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Mmmm,Yumi.It's becoming Intresting.Of curse for my test Aya had gone easy on Yohji but all the same. this chapter was great(like the rest chapters of course.)
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Reviewed By: Jess a.k.a tongari On: October 25, 2003 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! I am so happy! Yohji/Aya lemony goodness. hehehehehee! I cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 21:23 CDT
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I've been very ill recently, and in my illness-induced dreams, I saw this fic being acted out. Yes, I like this fic so much that I even end up dreaming about it. But, seriously, Neko-koi... This is turning out quite beautifully. Of course, what else does one expect from such a great author, right? ^_~
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Reviewed By: nymphaea On: October 21, 2003 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! they're together at last! Go Yohji and Aya!^__^ sorry... but.. i've read most of fics and i've loved all of your writing but.. (forgive me!) i've never reviewed anything...i just never get around to it.. well.. now i have! ^__^ yay, me happy, every time i start reading a new fic of yours i always end up checking everyday for updates! ha...your stories haunt me, i swear.. ^__^;;;; yeah, so...i'll stop wasting your time and just say that i love this story as much as i love Shadows...and ..hee..keep up the excellent writing pleasepleaseplease!! (wow, i sound so stupid and 'fangirl-y' in this...don't mind me, i'll just go back to lurking to save myself from embarressment, ok? byebye!)
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 17:54 CDT
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Well, I forgot something ^-^. These conversations *sigh* I LOVE "serious"^.^ conversations between Aya and Yohji! Oups, Kikyou and Tsubaki had their room near Yohji and Aya's ^_________^...well, not really a bad thing, ne *hentai grin*. *Siiiigh* their first time ^_^...it WAS wonderfully written! Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 13:40 CDT
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Waaaahahhaahah! That really lifted my day! I abandoned my essay in order to read your chapter. It'll be turned in late.... >.> I'm really glad Yohji and Aya are finally together, and I really hope it'll work out in the end with the least amount of pain..... =/ Pain is not good if it's from Hiro. THAT BASTARD! *kills Hiro repeatedly*
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Reviewed By: Unicat On: October 21, 2003 11:37 CDT
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As thrilling as a Novel.
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Reviewed By: lituska_silvermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 10:23 CDT
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no few words can easily describe how much I love reading your stories :)...they are wonderful in their depth and originality of plotline...cant wait to read the next part
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 16:59 CDT
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Whooohoooo!!! This just keeps getting better! Poor Aya.....I hope he doesn't pull away from Yohji because of that. o.o;;
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Reviewed By: Queen tubumka On: October 19, 2003 07:35 CDT
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an amazing well written story!
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Reviewed By: Nicky [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 02:44 CDT
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Wai! * huggles* Neko-sama! I'm so happy that you fainally wrote that scene! I can't wait for the next update. ^-^
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