| "Cages" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Xellas M. [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this really keeps getting better as it goes on. I'm completely addicted and hope you update very soon!
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Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 14:36 CST
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On this US Turkey-day, let us give thanks for "Cages" and the brilliant writer Nekojita_chan who make the maulings over stuffing and orange-glazed yams fade away into a holiday blur. Speaking of maulings... poor Aya. Youji'll make it better in the next chappie, right?
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 14:34 CST
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Oh my god....that was awful. Not your chap! Hiro beating Aya O_O! Poor Ayan...ooh I could kick that pricks ass! Sorry for the bad words here but I HATE him...*sigh* Aya *sob*. Ja *I hope Yohji is going to kick his ass Ò_Ó* Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan On: November 23, 2003 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was about to go into withdrawal waiting for you to update! This such a great story. It has all the elements of the series yet it's in such different place. I can't wait to see how things continue. Please update soon!
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Title: Chapter11
Reviewed By: Atiko On: November 22, 2003 13:43 CST
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I can't waite to see what comes next. will hero find out soon,thanks to the used condom , or will you keep him in the dark for a while??? I really hope you'll up date SOON.
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 14:37 CST
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww..... *big goofy smile*
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 11:50 CST
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Aah the tickling thing, I had such a bright grin on my face *giggle* ^_^. Well, Hiro is back in town *yaaay...Y U C K*...hehe gomen I HAD to say that, I really don't like Hiro ^.^! Ja *it was LOVELY* Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: Deceased Laugh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, wow! That was fantastic, it really was. It's rather refreshing to see a fic that has nothing much to do with the original story line. I also enjoyed the fact that you made Youji the prostitute, and not Aya. Your characterizations are wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Morning After
Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan(orY/A) On: November 08, 2003 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finished chapter 10 and I must say WOW! I usually don't like reading fanfics about the boys that have nothing to do with them being assassins but this one is really good. I like the way you have incorporated other characters from the series into the story and all the characters seem to have retained some of their characterization that made us love (or hate them...as the Takatori's do) them to begin with. Something else I really enjoyed in this particular chapter is the final part about Youji and Aya...I felt like that had to eventually happen and the way you wrote it made it seem so sweet and romantic. Please don't take too long to update!
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Reviewed By: Frust On: November 07, 2003 08:57 CST
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Awwwww! That was NICE! Yohji's first time as the bottom (drools). I can get used to it.(Thinks hard)To be honest I hope to see him in this position again(Grins evilly and drools even more).
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Reviewed By: undead_and_dying On: November 04, 2003 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an amazing story and i'm very impressed at how you develop your characters so well. very believable and very intense. keep up the good work!
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Title: chapter 10 was cavity sweet
Reviewed By: Atiko On: November 03, 2003 10:28 CST
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Ah and I'd thought that chapter 9 was good but in compare to chapter ten… God, chapter ten was cavity sweet. I like the idea of Yohji being the Uke, may be because he is too arrogant and always avoiding the slights discomfort, and you succeed to putting him into this role without looking out of character. Congratulations. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Thank you for this very pleasant chapter.
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: TNT30 On: November 03, 2003 05:05 CST
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Poor Yohji needs to go find his old friends. Aya's friends are always threatening him. If he doesn't have his wire in this AU, he should buy a gun so he wouldn't have to be a punching bag for even OCs. Didn't he learn some self-defense as a detective? I would have ignored Aya as not worth the hassle. Yohji must still be in that self-destructive mode.
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Reviewed By: Sara chan On: November 02, 2003 15:48 CST
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Wooooow. Chapter ten was good beyond words, it almost made me gasp with excitement.
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Reviewed By: Sahel On: November 02, 2003 12:40 CST
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What can I say? I LOVE you !!! (and your fics of course.)
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