| "Autumn Bane" Reviews/Comments [ 185 ] |
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Reviewed By: jess k-i [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!1 ff.net wasn't working so i had to come here. it's me sweet little country girl,, or jak1 any way! great chapter!!k poor kagome!! anyway have a great vacation!! can't wait till u get back *feels selfish cuz she can't wait till the next chapter* I LOVE THIS STORY
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:18 CST
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This scene seems to echo "I Want To Go Back To Where We Met," except that Kagome doesn't have the "What a horrible person I've become" epiphany.
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Reviewed By: raaay On: March 31, 2004 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant help but imagine what happened to any glass effects that happened to be near by 0_0 wow. COVER YOUR EARS!! i bet inu went deaf...ANYWAY, i hope this isnt going to be another one of those where he doesnt realize he loves her until it really counts. i wont spoil the ends of stories for someone that might actually read reviews(like me). *sigh* im so sad. ill just have to find some other way to entertain myself. i wish i lived in arizona...then i could save you from those nasty tigers! har har har....ahem. i hope you have a wonderful time in arizona! grandmas can be fun...if you dont let them get too carried away. visit seattle sometime!! not like i would actually see you...im just being a shameless plug for my city. cant wait till you get back!
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Reviewed By: chap 8 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellant
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 17:59 CST
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"It makes a lovely change from seeing you down each others throats." ~~~ Yeeep! They were DOWN each other's throats during the kiss -- maybe. I think you mean "at each other's throats." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OOoh; I gotta finish readin ghtis later; ticks me off... (sings) (Naraku's in trou-ble! Naraku's in trou-ble!)
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Title: You've done it again! ^o^ oh ho ho ho ho....
Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: March 31, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was sad... aww! >o< But then again... i like depressing stories. O.o Don't ask. And i was all sad at the end (i wasn't really in a crying mood today though...so i didn't cry, but i felt just as sad. ^ ^) and when i read your author note, i started laughing. XD What did you write in it...4 words? Goodness i'm easily amused. ^^ But i just wanted to commend you for your ability to change my mood so quickly! I mean, you'll have me crying, and then 5 seconds later, i'll burst out laughing! ^_^ You're so cool. ~~~ So yeah. Thanks again! ~Kate ^_^
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: March 31, 2004 16:01 CST
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Okay, that was weird, I thought my review was deleted so I wrote it again, but I guess not. Anywayz, update soon!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: March 31, 2004 16:00 CST
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Oh, I feel so sorry for poor Kagome-chan! What's gonna happen next? Update soon, I'm dyin 2 find out!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: March 31, 2004 15:57 CST
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Oh, poor Kagome-chan! I feel so sorry for her! What's gonna happen next? Update soon, I'm dyin 2 find out!
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Reviewed By: INU ROX! On: March 27, 2004 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 22:17 CST
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AAaaaawwwww dag-blast it!!!!!!!! I was expecting fireworks and violin music, but I got TNT and base drums!!!!!!!!!!!! They were kissing and everything, then they had to figure out about Miroku and everything!!!!!!!!!! Why did they stop!?!? It was a good thing they had going!!!!!!!!! Update soon please I gotta know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: raaaay On: March 26, 2004 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOO!! its real! dont fight it! i shouldve known...ive certainly read enough of your stories to kinda guess what kinda tricks you pull out of your hat. dammit. now miroku's gonna get his ass kicked...and most possibly by sango, kagome, and inuyasha. aw crap. i was all caught up in the moment. you know, they never wouldve gone through with all that just because they theought the other was interested! those were true feelings! although kindled because of miroku's meddling-but thats not the point! rargh! well...urgh...at least they kissed in a such a short amount of time...normally you wait until the lastest(?) and latest chapters. yes...im gonna go. GOOD LUCK WITH THE REST! ill be here waiting.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: March 26, 2004 15:52 CST
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Well, that whole thing went down! DAMN, he almost had them too! Oh well, maybe they'll realize their own mistake a little later. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: March 26, 2004 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! ^_^ A great chapter. And you updated SO quick. O.O You amaze me. It takes me like a week to write one chapter X_x Well thanks again! ^ ^ ~Kate ^_^ P.S. - Inuyasha and Kagome aren't the only ones who are going to hurt Miroku... ::cracks nuckles::
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Reviewed By: skne On: March 26, 2004 11:55 CST
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...yay as always, well written and quite unique. I wait with bated breath for the next chapter.
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