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Reviewed By: Yue Kisaragi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 19:30 CDT
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..... I refuse to believe that this is the end of the fic! What happens to Nagi and Nan-kun?? To Prodigy and Mastermind??? To Shushu and Watari???? To Hisoka and Tsuzuki?????I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!! Please please please, write a sequal! If you don't I will haunt you forever and ever and ever... so long that you'll have to get the shinigami to get rid of me!
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Title: Over already?
Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic, and how can you stand to end it there? thats insane!! what happened next? did they live happily ever after or did Marukai survive somehow and come back to haunt them? Please at least add a note about weather or noth Nanjiro (? isthathim?) falls in love with Nagi and weather prodigy and Mastermind ever got together (they would be Cute) On a more serious note, we are sorry to hear about your mom, and we hope it isnt anything too serious. thank you for reading our ramblings.
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 10:57 CDT
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi On: May 24, 2004 16:13 CDT
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*is momentarally satisfied and waits for more* IT IS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FANFIC... *huggs kiki-chan78* Good job! Now Please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your fic's addictive...
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Title: *LOL*poor telekinetiks
Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones~ *not signed in right now.... On: May 22, 2004 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE!!! this is GREAT and you need to write the next part soon, and indeed how will you resolve this. We are very curious of that. Please update soon and sooth our rageing curiosity please because this is NICE
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazed Chibi On: May 16, 2004 11:41 CDT
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You updated... YAY!!!!!! I really do love this fic... It's very well written!!!!
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Title: Fubar indeed....
Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones~ *not signed in right now.... On: May 07, 2004 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was... uhmm... unexpected to say the least.... More soon please, its GOOD!!! and yes.... fubar indeed.... what about the crazy irish man out of curiosity? will he be in this? Well, more soon please!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi On: May 04, 2004 15:39 CDT
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I LOVE this Fanfic! Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Gravedigger17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your ideas are absolutely wonderful, and the fic is enjoyable! However, you have a slight tendency to play around with the tenses... I've noticed that you'll switch back and forth between present and past tense, even in the middle of a scene! It can cause quite a headache for the reader. Also, it seems that in your editing... you've placed a scene in a little too early. There's a scene where Youji and Kijin are speaking, and it's NOT in the 'living plane' (please excuse me, I've forgotten the name for where Kijin lives). However, Kijin and the others had not left the Weiss flowershop, yet. You may want to take a look at that. (or perhaps I'm just going insane, I don't know....) All in all, very good though. Please continue writing, I enjoy reading the story.
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Reviewed By: ^___________^ On: April 13, 2004 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is GREAT!!!!!! we just got the update notice in our inbox (oops) and this is great!!! Hisoka/Tsu-chan is a MUCH better pairing!!! ^____^ YAY!!!! it finaly looks like Tsu-chan will be rescued!!!! about frieken time..... Well more soon please this is great!!!
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Title: Hehehe....
Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones~ *not signed in right now.... On: March 22, 2004 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
we love this and hope you continue soon, and who is mastermind going to hook up with now that he's learning about the human side of his nature? That shinigami who's helping him or is he going to go back to orical? i dont much like orical in this, but thats ok i supose.... Well please write more soon when you can, we love this!!!!
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Reviewed By: toscas_kiss On: March 16, 2004 00:06 CST
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These last few chapters are excellent! The Esset plot keeps getting more evil and twisted, and I'm on the edge of my seat about Muraki and Aya. And Oracle definitely needs to catch a clue! Looking forward to the next installation. Thanks for the entertainment.
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Title: more please.. *puppy eyes*
Reviewed By: Simon Erif [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More more more more more.... please more!! fantastic story but want to know more!!!
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones~ On: March 03, 2004 23:09 CST
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^_________________________________^ NICE!!!!! please update soon, and we are sorry to hear about your sister, what happend? None of our biz but still, we're sorry. Hope you are doing better though and we still love this fic a lot!! thankies!!!
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Title: the last chapter and the chapter before that are the same
Reviewed By: The chaotic ones (not loged in) On: February 21, 2004 16:59 CST
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