| "Destinies Collide" Reviews/Comments [ 196 ] |
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 12:05 EDT
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ooo that was good... please keep up the great work and update asap. i cannot wait until you update...so excited.. Go Sesshy! lol we should beat koga, just for shits and giggles, he needs it.. well update asap. Love your story.. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Youkai Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 03:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I must say, I was up a while reading this one, and it just keeps getting better and better. I love everything about this story, and you keep an equal balance of everything as the story goes along. I LOVE it; please continue to write stories this good in the future. One thing, though...*bows* Hail to you, Ruler of the Cliffhangers (which shows you how much I love this story...I don't bow to just anyone). You're positively evil, but heavily respected. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 01, 2004 23:05 EDT
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Somebody at the end of that wonderful chapter needed to hug. Have you ever seen "Boy Meets World"? Ya know that episode where Shawn is going out with that crazy blonde girl and doesn't want Shawn and Cory together? And they start acting like they were in a relationship together. Talking all funny and putting their ears back up to the phone to see if the other had hung up yet. They were acting like they had just broke up with each other. YOU'RE MAKING INUYASHA AND MIROKU ACT THAT WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Paces back and forth with steam coming out of ears* And Kouga!!!!!!!!!!!!! How can he be so nasty!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? Breaking her ribs like that and holding her while he sleeps!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!? If she doesn't want him he needs to get over it and move on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Sesshoumaru has never heard of birth control!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? The poor girl just had to go through his sick little test to become his mate and he just gets her pregnant like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She didn't have time to get use to the idea, and he didn't even ask her about how she feels about having babies so soon into the relationship!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Men are such pigs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There is so much more I could fuss about but I think you've had enough. Now just UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ancientdragon On: June 01, 2004 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: May 28, 2004 09:09 EDT
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don't fret you still have my intrest and i'll stick with you all the way no way i'am going to leave.kitty is over and out.
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Title: ^_^ AHH!!
Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666::not logged in:: On: May 25, 2004 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it soo much!i love you so much!! the lemon was suuper goood! and i just want to kill Kouga right now... but the lemon was really, really, really good! eheh, im in school, and i couldnt stop reading it, and i was scared a person my come up from behind me and start reading it too.. lol, LEMON YUM!! thanks!! update ^_^ let yasha save kag!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 11:25 EDT
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Nice. Real nice. But poor Kagome with Kouga. I just hope Inu-Yasha gets some vengence on him. Great story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 17:55 EDT
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hey there. I've just got over my pouting fit. I thought that you just stopped updating. And then when i went onto ff.net it said that you hadn't and i was like...awww. So i came here and read.. great story so far. me likey! lol keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 24, 2004 00:14 EDT
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Aaaahhhh crap!!!!!! She has to live with Kouga for a month with him getting trigger happy and subduing her every five minutes!?!?!?!?! I would so hurt him if I was her. Isn't Inuyasha going to do anything!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? YAY!!!!!!!! Sesshy finally mated Rin, and to answer your question I'm a Kagome and Rin person!!!!!! But I hope Rin can walk the next morning after Sessh is done with her!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: iloveyourstroyteehee On: May 16, 2004 15:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plzplzplz update this it is really good and descriptive. i just recently got into fanfics and tihs is the first one that i liked (summary) and it is the best one so far i have read, definitly. its orginal and i like how you set things up. i love your story a whole lot and plz update this soon.
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: May 13, 2004 22:29 EDT
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you know that you are the only author that i have sticked with his long.my god you're great at writing because i loose intrest in nice stories quck so in my book you have done a world record for keeping me this long and i hope you can hold on longer ^_^.kitty kitsune is over and out.
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 13:12 EDT
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was awsome. i cant wait to see the next chapter. you realy are evil though. you didnt answer any of my questions. you made up for it, however, with a very interesting chapter. and this just makes people want to see your next chapter even more. i want to know what happens to Kagome, so dont keep me waiting too long, k? ^_^
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w::not logged in:: On: May 13, 2004 00:37 EDT
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plleeeeeeeeeeeeasseeee stop being so meeeeeeaaaan!!! updaaateee soooooon.... or else........ grrrr roar.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 12, 2004 23:22 EDT
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Great, you're just like my classmates at school. Everybody thinks it's funny to make me mad, honestly!! But anyway, GOOD chapter!!!!!!!!!!! Go Rin Go Rin Go Rin!!!!!!!! Show'em who's boss!!!!!!!!!!!! So has the cute simpleton (a.k.a. Inuyasha) realized that Kagome is his angel??? I think that's sweet, he calls her his angel!!!! *Squeal!* It's sooo romantic!!!!!!!!!!!! *Gets dreamy eyed look* Update soon okay?
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