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Reviewed By: IrrelTE On: October 18, 2003 19:36 EDT
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that french thing was priceless!!! Inuyasha IS a jerk, but it's so like him for some reason lol I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 16:36 EDT
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THAT WAS AWESOME!! Stupid Inu-chan! Great Chapter! I've always wanted to read a story where someone translates the opposite meaning to someone!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 04:02 EDT
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I know I already explained why I haven't been review like I usually do in the Autume Bane review, but I'm stil going to say sorry. Great translating Kagome. Wait 'til the phones start ringing off the hook from reports asking InuYasha to confirm Angel's statment about him being a heartless so-and-so. Kikyo is going to freak! And after this chapter the title is starting to make sense. Be looking for the next chapter. Have fun on your trip!
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Title: Breakfast at:
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 20:21 EDT
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Seventy school uniforms. Hee! So that's why we never see her in a torn or bloody one...~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wait... Inuyasha's mother was the demon? Somehow, I can't see the parent he shares with Sesshoumaru as being trophy material. Sess shares the hair, so he's probably not full human. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ooooh, nice move with the French and the lipstick, but I do wonder what was wrong with her hair.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 19:19 EDT
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lol what a great chapter lol had me laughing!
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Kiri-chan (sorry , too lazy to log in) On: October 16, 2003 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOOOONNDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! * * * Kirisame.
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Reviewed By: IrrelTE On: October 15, 2003 23:33 EDT
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yeah! what is he famous for??? Anyway... I loved it! I'm kinda sleep, sorry.... I'll write something intelligent the next time you post a chapter =P
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 22:44 EDT
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Hey Rose fire, I just want to let you know that this an Awsome story, and that you need to UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!< /b> Or tomorrow, whichever, but make it fast ,please?
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 20:16 EDT
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Ooooo... I believe now you are my favorite author! I think you wrote "Bottled Genius" and this fanfic is just as good as that one!!! Update soon!!!!!! ^,^
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 19:03 EDT
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Ohh!! This is the best fanfiction. I just love how you are portraying everybody. But...I think Sango could stick up for herself a little more. Anywho, I can't wait for the next day. It's always humourous to watch Inu and Kag go at it. Keep up the writing!!! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Ongaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 18:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! Stupid fanfiction.net wasn't working, so came here instead. ^^; I'm starting to like mm.org a lot better than ff.net. Your chappy was really good. Inuyasha got his surprise hehe. I can't wait to see what things you got planned. I have seen that movie trailer a couple of times, the first time I saw it it was going by to fast haha so I didn't catch much... but later I did. I seriously doubt Kagome is screaming because his beads are coming off, more of the fact of whatever is happining to make them come off. heh
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Reviewed By: Anandria [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 17:57 EDT
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So this time 'round is for my own benefit, but hey. I still really enjoy it and the fact of all that happens. ja!
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Title: I hate you sooo much....
Reviewed By: Chibi Genesis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 17:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH! I would give just about ANYTHING to be able to write like you. Your ideas are very unique and fasicnating. You always come up with something that probably no one else would thing of and yet you always keep the key connections with the original. Amazing... Hell, you should become a professional writer. Come to think of it.. make your own series and become a manga artist, you're a fantastic artist ,too. Ja Ne and Blessed Be! -Chibi
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 17:47 EDT
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yeay! another great chapter! im waiting eagerly for more! =D
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Reviewed By: Anandria On: October 15, 2003 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really didn't find many mistakes,. but you slipped up when Kagome was talking to Sango(you caled her so) and Sango hadn't even stated her name yet and you, after that, continued to call her Clipboard Girl. I think the idea was very interesting, definately a little closer to the truth as I would see it if it were an actuality. It'll be really interesting to see how it all plays out later. Continue, onegai!
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