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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 21:48 EST
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OMG I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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Title: wow.......
Reviewed By: princessann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 20:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(wow you are one good writer!!!) hey whyed you stop it was getting interesting and cool please continue ill be waitng and e-mail me when you do update!!atacyoung28@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: November 11, 2003 20:18 EST
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wow that chapter was packed with stuff that i now sit here and ponder about...im gonna die soon if inu n kag dont have even the tiniest bit amount of fluff but work at ur pace =D urgh inu is so mean...
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Reviewed By: whitedragon (not signed in!) On: November 11, 2003 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, I have reveiwed under a different name on FF.net, but I also have an account here! I love your story and I think that this chapter was really good. I love how you protray the characters, even though they are in a different setting I think that they are in character perfectly. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Inuheart...not signed on again... On: November 11, 2003 19:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapters~!! I laughed so hard when i was reading~!! Ur a great author and a comedian. the conversation in Inuyasha's room was wonderful-as was the Awards. The kiss...i wasn't expecting that. But it was very cool. I'm enjoying this story to no end. I love it I love it I love it, It's amazing how you can update so often when i have a hard time updating once a week...how do u do that? anyways, i loved the story and am eagerly awaiting the hopefully soon to come "relationship of Inuyasha and Kagome. Update as soon as you can ^^
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Reviewed By: Irrel (gotta sign in...) On: November 11, 2003 18:16 EST
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you are so crueeeeeeeel!!!!!!!!! -_- Man, I should have known... you like to torture people, dont you? I know! I have read your other fics!!! Gosh... this story is starting to really annoy me, I would seriously consider not reading it anymore if IT WASN´T SO FREAKING AWESOME! Keep updating so quick, it's good to my health lol.
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Title: For Best Performance, Shake Well Before Applying
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 18:05 EST
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Early on, Sango mentions the award category as "youngest" boxer. Maybe "best young" or "best new" boxer would be best. Get a few birth certificates and there's no contest as to who's youngest. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oooh... If this story's Kouga weren't so despicable, I'd be in awe of his perfect comeback. He left her with no defense. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ooo! Feel the snipe! I'm loving this!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Eni_2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 17:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. PLEASE update soon.
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Title: Damn it!!!!!
Reviewed By: Tiranth (not signed in) On: November 11, 2003 17:44 EST
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Just when I thought things were getting ok for the two of them...grrrrrr....I'm pulling my hair out here!!! Would you just write them an angry induced passion fiesta and get it over with! I'll even buy the cigarettes!! :) *wipes brow* Okay now that I've gotten that out of my system...Another excellent chapter. I love the mood of the writing. You're keeping it real. And no matter how much I whine and moan you are making their relationship move just the way I would think it would in real life. I do so hope they get together in the end though. Anyhoos..*snuggles and huggles* Tiranth Happy writing! Don't get cramps!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 17:40 EST
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I have a sneaky feeling Koga set that whole thing up to get back at Kagome. Koga just had to bring up the massage thing. I can hear the gasp coming from her family and friends. Her friends probably plan to execute her for that "kiss" InuYasha gave her. So you managed to prove me sorta wrong. (Hey my last prediction can still become a reality!) And I don't know what's scarier...InuYasha screaming at her or he's smiling mask that he wore while plotting against her. So much for InuYasha not recognizing the dress. I think he didn't mean what he said about models that would be insulting his mother. I believe he was trying to gauge a reaction from her to see if she knew. I love the way you described the scene when she got out of the limo. My imagination took your words and made a movie in my head! Are you sure you didn't experience any of this stuff first hand? And thanks for saying you don't mind the long reviews. I try to make them short but I'm never satisfied with them when I do. Frankly I like long reviews, too. Those one line reviews always leave me saying.."But what did you notice? What exactly did you like?" Great chapter! Thanks for the super quick update!
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 17:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!! i am a faithful reader of this fic and basically... IT ROX!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 17:06 EST
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You are the best fanfiction writer in the world! Once again, FFN is evil so I had to read this chappy on MM, but it was great! This story is great! So original and GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!
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Title: Sume
Reviewed By: Sumechick15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 16:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You're story is so twisted I love it! But darn Inuyasha for saying "And you'll never wear that dress as well as my mother did.", he can be such a butt monkey! *Millions of Inuyasha fans come charging at Sume* AHHHHH! YOU DONT UNDERSTND I LUV INUYASHA TOOO!!!! *Crazed fans stop and turn around* He's just being an ass. *Crazed fans come after Sume again* STOP OR I WON"T UPDATE COLLEGE CHICKS OR THE HOUSE GUEST OR CLAWS OR ANY OF MY OTHER STORIES!!!! *Crazed fans drop down in their tracks and pray* Ya you best pray, you are now my minions. Now go beg for mercy from RozeFire since she is the one who wrote this WONDERFULL story! *Inuyasha fans crawl away* Yea, but just to make sure....*Flying butt-monkeys with flung poo as weapons and faires with pixie sticks as weapons appear beside Sume* Follow them and make sure that RozeFire gets more reviews each day or fling poo and hit them with you pixie stick, got it? Good faithful minions go. *Faithfull minion leave while snickering* Well I think you're set! You're sure to get happy reviews now! I love this story soooo much! Please keep making chapters! *See's minions fghting with a cop* NOOO!!! Don't fling poo at him! Run!!! No! Wait just throw a donut a him! Then run!!!! *Minions do as told* Whew...good job...good job.... Sume
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Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: November 10, 2003 23:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!! XD XD XD THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!! YEAH! *ahem* i know officially dub this fic, "Dead Famous", my FAVORITE FIC OF ALL TIME!!! ::bows:: i congradulate you! ^-^ heh heh... (well, i've read like... idk, 175-200 fics, so i'd say you scored rather well, huh?)... yay! and i'll say again that i absolutely ADORE the pace that Inuyasha and Kagome are going at. they don't really like eachother yet, but they don't CONSTANTLY scream at eachother like they used to. the pace is LOVELY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep it that way! ^_^ well, thanks again, and until the next chapters up, i'll see you later! ja ne! ^_^ ~Kate
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Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 19:59 EST
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