| "Feelings for a Fox" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: Skittles2xtreme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 09:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aieeeee! I LOVED it! The Kagome babblespeak in her mind was funny. Where did she get that "We" stuff from anyway? The dream sequence was awesome. The chase sequence was great and the fluffy dream lime was Yummy! More! More! More! I must have more! Hehe. Keep 'em coming But please, can I play with Youko-kun's tail? Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: Midnight_001(2 lazy 2 sign in) On: November 10, 2003 00:57 CST
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I loved it!!! Yeah Youko is a hottie I love him!!Update soon.!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (Too lazy to sign in) On: November 09, 2003 22:13 CST
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Hhmmm . . . I can't wait to read of Shippo's reaction when he sees his momma with another guy . . . . eeeww . . . *shudders* I once saw my mom and dad errr . . . look a bird! 0.0
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Title: Red_dragon-210
Reviewed By: Red_Dragon-210 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! YOUKO KURAMA!!! HE IS SOOO HOT!!! Anyway nice fic. I really enjoy it. Also funny scene with shippou and Hiei. I like the way you wrote and like the fact that you tried to put some time before youko/kurama and Kagome got together. Like you said most fic just jump inot it and it is rather annoying. So great job with that too. Anyway can't wait for the next Chappie and I SOOOOO can't wait till you put Sesshou-kun in this fic. HE IS 'THE' HOTTEST ANIME CHARACTER I've SEEN!!! (at least in my opinion). So I hope you put him in at least more than one of your chappies please. ~RED~
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Reviewed By: Kurama no Miko2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 08:04 CST
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With regards to the second question . . . as far as I know, Hiei's a guy. And I luv the way this fic's coming along. ~ Kurama no Miko2003
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Title: Nice story!
Reviewed By: Yohko Kurama On: November 08, 2003 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thinks its an excellent story that you should really work on more and more as i read it! The faster you can get some chapters in the better and hopefully soon you can get some *cough sexual cough* things going on. Thanks for the enjoyment of this story and write a lot more chapters thanks!
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (too lazy to sign in) On: November 07, 2003 11:49 CST
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*bouncing up and down* Impatiently yet patienly waiting!
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Reviewed By: Bekkablair On: November 07, 2003 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy shit...Shippo talks fast, that took me like 2 minutes to figure out what the fuck he was saying! And I never noticed Hiei's little white-star-hairdo, thanx for pointing that out! And are you or are you not going to make a lemon?
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Reviewed By: Bekkablair On: November 07, 2003 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, you got a ten for spelling/grammar! That's really friggen rare nowadays...it's getting pretty pathetic. Fox demons...as hippies?! I don't know WHY, but I can sort of see that strange, STRANGE mental image of Youko with a huge baggy shirt, smoking some weed and doing the peace sign... And about those *shudder* Bob the Builder toys... I KNEW THERE WAS SOMETHING TOTALLY AND COMPLETELY WRONG WITH THEM FROM THE MOMENT I FIRST HEARD OF IT!! You've just proved it! Great story!! I love it! Oh, will there be any future lemon(s)? I need to know!
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Title: GREAT AND FUNNY!
Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit there were some sweet parts and funny parts espacially at the end.I just think thats hilarious how Hiei was asking Shippo all those stupid questions HA!HA!HA!
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Title: brittany
Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 19:34 CST
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great chapter. i can't wait until your next none.
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 17:20 CST
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i'm loving it keep up the good work!!! damn it i really wanted 2 c kurama beat inu yasha so ur "idea" better be good!
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Title: Weeee!
Reviewed By: Skittles2xtreme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 09:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMFAO You captured Shippouspeak perfectly! I can't wait to see what Hiei thinks of all this. And wait till Youko-kun finds out about Inuyasha! By the way..I can think of much better things for Youko and Inuyasha to do together instead of fighting. Hehehehe. I've got such a pervy mind. If you ask me...that's just a plotbunny waiting to happen. Keep 'em coming! P.S. Have you figured out at all if Hiei is supposed to be asexual in Yu Yu Hakusho? I believe i read something about "forbidden children" or something like that. Other than that .. I love IT! Oooh! Pretty!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 17:19 CST
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Great chapter, but I have a small request. KEEP SHIPPOU WAY FROM THE SUGAR even though his speed talking was sooooooooo cute. I love shippou! I'm so glad that you got him back. Have kagome kick some ass.
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Reviewed By: Karama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was funny. you would have to look hard and read carefully to understand what shippo was saying. i took the time to do that. great job. keep up the good work^_^
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