| "Feelings for a Fox" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_love (2 lazy 2 sign in) On: October 19, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! This fic keeps getting better and better! U have 2 make kurama beat the shit out og inu yash cuz hey inu yasha does seem like the perfect guy 2 get jealose!!! ignore the bad spelling ! oh and any1 pls go read A forbidden love by me! i need reviews!!!
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Reviewed By: YugiohNicole On: October 19, 2003 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Pls update more chapters!
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Title: Feelings for a Fox
Reviewed By: Youkai_Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 07:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I really loved this on, i personally don't care how you wwrite it as long as you keep it up and dont quite like some. I do really like the way you are doing it now though...and it would be cool to have Kurama baby beat the shit out of Inu-baka so go for it! Please post more real soon!
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (too lazy to sign in) On: October 18, 2003 19:14 CDT
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You can switch it, that way I won't have to read another story - no matter how good this fic is, I'm just incredible lazy.
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Reviewed By: Jayde Katt On: October 18, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, great story. Secondly, I think you should just start off at Kurama's POV and maybe make refrences about his past POV. I also like the idea of writing it over again from Kurama's POV but I want to know the end of this story sooner and, lets face it, writing the begining from his POV will just drag this story out a little more, but it will also give a little more in-depth look into his part of the story. So, I am really voting for both, whichever you decide to do. Either way the story will turn out to my liking and, hopefully, yours. Hmph! Who am I kidding? Nobody cares if YOU like it! After all, you are ONLY the one writing it! Hahaha... just kidding. I swear! The story will suck if you don't like it, so PLEASE don't start hateing it cause I really, really want to read it! Update, update, update, update, and... Oh yeah! UPDATE!!!
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Title: Review for Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Artemis The Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an excellent chapter. I don't think I can wait a long time for the next one. So please update as soon as possible or whenever you find time. Good luck. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 14:37 CDT
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I love this Kagome, she's kick ass and hillarious! And the part with the flags in the last chapter was too funny. Keep it up, update soon
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Reviewed By: the little fox On: October 18, 2003 01:52 CDT
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Wonderful wonderful flags! and ownership of the virgin islands for stratigic sheep placement. yeah, all that nutty goodness. well, you nee to explain kurama's relationship with kagome. oh one question, rin is kikyo's grandaughter, so does that mean kagome is related to rin? and if so did rin marry sesshomaru? meaning kagome is part demon? well, transvestites are male tomboys, and i gotta feed my kitty. keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLS WRITE MORE!!! who hit her?! will Inu yasha show up?! If he does pls have kurama beat him 2 a pulp or just make inu yasha scared! well ttyl
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Title: Review for chapter 2
Reviewed By: Artemis The Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story. Please update with chapter three really really soon. If you haven't already you should post this story on fanfiction.net Good luck with the next chapter and hope to read more soon. I just love Kagome/Kurama pairings so please hurry. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (too lazy to sign in) On: October 17, 2003 16:40 CDT
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Let me guess . . . Hiei?
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This if so completely awesome I'm not sure how to put it into words. The style of writing is so original as well as thetype of story it is. I like how your structuring it and developing Kagome into a deeper character than she already is...this experienced and mature girl is so much stronger and you potray it so well with the way you write it. Great job for real, I hope you can update more often!
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Title: hehe...
Reviewed By: EvilBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 23:44 CDT
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I AM jeff the god of biscuits! The room with a view of HELL, staircase of SATAN...pond of DEATH!! I actually used the flag quote in my history class...my professor was not amused. Eddie Izzard is my pagan god... good story! keep it up.
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Title: Feelings for a Fox
Reviewed By: Youkai_Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! hope you post more really soon! i really love the way you have kagome acting here..
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Reviewed By: Hidden One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 21:32 CDT
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Hey, I like your story. I think you're right about the meeting thing. I also like the idea of Kagome being strong. Well, stronger, anyway. Great story! Update soon!
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