| "Feelings for a Fox" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae (don't feel like logging in) On: October 24, 2003 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you have outdone yourself. This is probably one of the funnest things I've read, and it improves so with each chapter...I have to say that I've never seen anyone take up Kurama and subsequent personalities quite like you have, yes a lot of times they will have them talking to each other but the way you potray them is quite unique, its like they are always berating each other and laughing at it, goes away from the usual Suchii who is on top of everything role I think...I'm going to go ahead and apologize now for torturing his name the way I did and any other owrds I can't spell right, I've never been good at spelling at you think I would have gotten over that by now, I do agree with your comment on Kenshin and Kurama and so for, kinda funny really, never really thougt about that, if I was anything of a writer or knew the characters well enough I would so go for the idea and I hope somebody will take up your idea and do it...it would be interesting. Well once again, great job, sorry I alway write such lengthy reviews and most of the time about nothing...great job though, keep it up and I hope you update soon. P.S. Most give you props for your speedy updating skills thus far!!
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: TriAnime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic. I luv K/K pairings! U'r so evil to leave a cliffhanger! Evil! I'll take it back if u put up a new chapter. LOL Just kidding. But PLZ do write another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Skittles2xtreme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Woooo! I can't wait for the next chapter! I loved how you made Kurama argue with his Youko. It tickled me pink to see them trying to restrain themselves. I can't wait to see what they will think when they find out about Shippou! You going to stick to the main storyline and make him a demon and not her real son? Either way, I can't wait! Hurry Hurry Hurry!!!! Otherwise i'll hold my breath until you do! lol
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! please post more real soon....i really love your fic so far!
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Reviewed By: Skittles2xtreme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I can't wait for further updates. I like the originality of the pair of Kagome and Kourama. Gah! What I wouldn't give to be in her shoes right about now. I'd love to get my hands on that sly Youko myself. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (too lazy to sign in) On: October 22, 2003 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
ERGH! I hate it when you do those cliffies! You evil!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I am reviewing it here as well hope you dont mind! Well as i said in other one great chapter, hope you post more soon and i really love the way it is unfolding....though it was a bit evil to leave it off there *smile* cant really blame you though, i do it all the time when i write! Well please bring in Shippo as soon as you can and if you can, can you tell me how you managed to get italic and bold in your stories? It would make it much easier on me if i could get then i accept my formatting but whenever i use anything but a txt file it wont upload...i use mic word processer by the way in case it matters. Well Ja ne for now...chaoschild6@msn.com
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you have outdone yourself. For those who think your fic is slow, they're insane. Your doing great, and I love it...I do like having Kurama's POV in there, so kudos on that. Update soon, I want to know what is going to happen to Shippo and what the guys will think when they see him (if they get to seem him when not in disguise). Great job, keep it up!!! and PLEASE update soon!
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Title: Review for Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Artemis The Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent next two chapters. Please update with the next chapter/s when you can. I can't wait to read what happened to Shippo. What was the name of the fic you read that you complained about in chapter your update for 10/22/03. I would love to see how this author wrote their story so please give me the title and the website where this fic was posted. You can e-mail me at kkoolgirls@yahoo.com. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Kurama no Miko2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic! It's a solid crossover, with a believable plot line and character relationships! I love this! I look forward to reading your next chapter! This has got to be the best IY/YYH crossover I've ever read! ~ Kurama no Miko2003
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Reviewed By: chibi dragon On: October 22, 2003 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOooo.....that was really good. Liked how you wrote it. Yeah continue!!!
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O-kay, first off, kudos for this last chapter, it was just as great as the ones proceding it (or is it preceding it, that confuses me sometimes) although I would like to know what Kurama's POV, I can't really decide if it should be put intertwined or after the fact, it may give the story a little more depth but with the humor you've added it kinda doesn't need it too much, however artistically it would be very impressive to a re-telling in another POV, well either way, it's really up to you andw what you would like to do and what makes you think the story will end in the best way, who are we to try and change your artistic view anyways, ya know, and my final thought before I once again lay it on about how awesome your story is, I kinda don't like the idea about bringing inu yasha in here, she's seems to have changed to much to still have him around to me and in actuality I didn't really think he was still around when I started picturing this but hey once again I can't really say what you see so do what you think is the best. Once again this is completely awesome, I'm starting to wonder what will happen when Kagome figures out who Koemna's lackies are and vice versa...but keep up the excellent work, still funny as every and please keep updating it, no ones seems to update regularly anymore! (Sorry for any misspellings, I just never learned how to do that)
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Title: Review on your story!
Reviewed By: The Youkai Nightmare On: October 20, 2003 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD This is SO HILARIOUS! I LOVE IT FROM KAGOME'S POV!!!!!!!! ^_^ Hmm...how about you write this story from Kagome's POV then write another one from Kurama's POV? Well, gtg......UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: black kaze kitsune On: October 20, 2003 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ really REALLY good ficcy. also very funny. does looking at things ironiclly and just the way kagome thinks now happen after 500 yrs. of living?.. must be so huh? ^^"
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Title: hiyaku_de_mon@sesshoumaru.zzn.com
Reviewed By: tessa3 On: October 19, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I am so going to recommend your fic on fanfiction.net so everyone can chk it out...I like the way you are goin with this I just have to recieve an email from you telling me when you will be updating...i hope you recieve this review Jan ne P.S. do you have any plans for hiei....email address hiyaku_de_mon@ssesshoumaru.zzn.com
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