| "Feelings for a Fox" Reviews/Comments [ 273 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady MoonShadow1 On: January 31, 2004 17:39 CST
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You're taller than I am(sob!)
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Title: Silver Shadows
Reviewed By: Silver Shadows On: January 30, 2004 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Crap. Forgive the obvious mistakes in my last post. I didn't take the time to recheck it. Just too damn lazy I suppose. And I can severely attest to that. For example, anything beyond three feet of my arms length is obviously not worth my time or effort. It's worth someone else's though. For my sake at least. ^^ Well, I actually made two posts in a relatively close space of time. I too have succumbed to the realization that I have no life. But my realization is shortlived. I've known it for a long time. Ja ne! ^^
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Title: Silver Shadows
Reviewed By: Silver Shadows On: January 30, 2004 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That's all I have to say. Wow. Yes, I understand I must seem unbelievable redundant. ^^ I suppose it comes with the territory, ne? Being delusional has its quirks. ^^ Well anyway, must I even say it? Your story is incredible. Personally, I think it's awesome. But of course, anything that has Kurama fighting with himself over his mothers cookies is automatically good. but somehow you do it exceptionaly well. ^^ I love the whole idea of the story, quite original. And in regards to your authors note, I'd have to say I agree. His hair -WOULD- make that sound. But I think Hiei's would be more of sploing because of the whole spiky swishy effect. Or maybe even a fwap. Eh, anything dramatic. It's Hiei after all. ^6 Well, continue writing, hope to see more stories of yours soon! Ja ne for now. ^^
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Reviewed By: Shiroi Hikari On: January 29, 2004 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. But I was a little confused about some parts, but that's okay. Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Rootbeer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! i just wanted to say EEW about the vine thing. And I'm confused. Although if i get it I'm not sure I want to... Still, great story!!! Please keep going!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, wonderful story. I absolutely love it.
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Reviewed By: S1Cherry [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 23:51 CST
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I love the cookie part! *giggles helplessly* I like Rin like this, tramatizing poor Hiei. *grins wickedly* 'course, torturing Hiei is always fun, but RIN doing it makes is funnier for some reason.*shrugs* who knows. anyways good chapter, as always ^-^ hope you're able to up date soon! later ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kurama no Miko2003 (just too lazy to sign in) [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 20:21 CST
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Wait, so on top of reading Grendel, you also play table-top RPGs? That's the only way I could see the "cookie jar of protection + 7" coming into play . . . O_O I think I just condemned myself to eternal nerd-hood. ~ Kurama no Miko2003
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Reviewed By: StarDust1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 19:36 CST
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hurry up and update i love this story!!!!
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Reviewed By: otaku 6547130 On: January 25, 2004 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect!! I love this fic!! PLZ update real soon!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 20:47 CST
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i love this story and i cant wait to see what happends next so you have to update soon ok tootles
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Reviewed By: lady scorpio On: January 24, 2004 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! Awesome! That was one of the best stories I've read. Was that the last chapter? I was so wrapped in the story I completely forgot about dinner!
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Reviewed By: LLJade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 14:26 CST
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UPDATE PLEASE! For the love of all that's good and pure,UPDATE! And pair Rin up with Hiei! They make a cute couple!
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Reviewed By: The Black Kat On: January 24, 2004 14:04 CST
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Once again another great chapter! As sad as I am to see it end, I am sooooo happy they are finally getting together! Ja
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I want to know what happens next! (lemon!)
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