| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: fadedLily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2010 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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So I went ahead and read this even though I said I wouldn't, knowing that there would never be a conclusion to this fantastic and intriguing tale. However, as I said, I am a huge fan of your writing and firmly believe that you've written some of the best stories in the arena of Gundam Wing fanfiction. You are, in fact, the measuring stick I use to compare all other stories. Even having heard from you personally that there will never be a conclusion, I could not stop my curiosity. Now I'm saddened because this great work will never be finished... I have a thought in my head, but before I rush off and follow it where it wants to go, I'll sit and think on it a bit. As always, thank you for being such a wonderful writer, and for sharing your world with us.
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 13:11 CST
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*cries because there is no more* And that is a damn shame because I *really* want to know where this is going. Sigh. Thank you for writing! I really did enjoy this fic alot. I hope you finish it one day.
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Reviewed By: didi kat On: May 05, 2007 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks around* Umm, is this fic dead? I hope not because I really, really, REALLY want to know how it all turns out in the end. Please write some more. *makes cute puppy eyes* Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: rubysp On: November 18, 2006 05:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah!! your comparisons through chemistry brings back -cough- fond memories... ugh!! NH3-CH(R)-COOH anyone? -_-'' i totally love "Heero decided they were all unreliable heaps of irritating carbon " ^___^ keep up the good work!! (what happened to the updates?!?!)
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Reviewed By: Nikki509 On: April 26, 2006 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Source of All Things is one of my most favourite fanfics. Your writing is very descriptive, imaginative, and at some points funny. I really like the way you portrayed all of the Gundam Wing pilots (especially Duo), and the way you integrated them into your fantasy realm (Duo striving for revenge, Wufei part of a dragon clan, and shaman!Trowa). Your OC is a nice, fun character that really livens up the story, instead of the usual Mary-Sue! The plot is very intriguing and creative, and I like the ideas in them (like Duo throwing away his ability to lie so that the others will trust him). It's very nice to see a fanfic with themes and character development, and a conclusion approaching - with more than just romance (of course, the romance is good too :) 1x2x5!!). I have been patiently waiting for another chapter to be written for months, after reading the 40 chapters in something like three days. :) Please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Renata On: December 24, 2005 04:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, considering, we haven't Quatre with Zero around^_^, it would be nice, if you posted some AN with hints about this fic's future (or does "Status: Completed" mean you've abandoned the story? You are, as far as I can tell, mostly in the Naruto's fandom now, after all... Clarify this, please.
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Title: Patiently Waiting...
Reviewed By: PurpleBunny On: September 27, 2005 18:16 CDT
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Mmmm... Just wanted to let you know that I've been very patiently waiting for the next chapter to this wonderful fic. ..Yup, real patient. Waiting. ... Still waiting. While hitting refresh button. And tappying fingers. But definitely patient.
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Reviewed By: HieiWannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best GW stories I've ever read. Your characterizations were very believeable, it follows the series fairly well, and the premise is very original and imaginative. The only problem I have is that it's not finished yet! Please, correct this soon!
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Reviewed By: yukina189 On: April 11, 2005 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fic rocks I shall bow down to its presence and attemt to wait patiently for the next update and hopfully nothing will keep you from updating for to long update soon!
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Title: ::worships::
Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaaaayyy..another chapter! This is the only GW fanfic I read anymore...I love it too much to sacrifice to my other fandom obsessions. ^__^
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: March 08, 2005 22:53 CST
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It has been a while. To tell you the truth I hardly even noticed, Freeport took up ALL of my attention. It's nice to get back to this though, I didn't even realize how much I miss Heero until today. Him and his need to analyze everything. Someone needs to give him a clue, throw him a bone. Something for his poor uncultivated mind. So delicious, your stories fill me up when few other things do. I'll be looking out for more.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Heero's POV is logical thought process that is confused by those irritating carbon lifeforms is just so fun. I like how you worked in the Orb of Ophed further into the story.
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 13:31 CST
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When Heero was hoping for some explosion to take the tension between Wufei and Duo away, I really was hoping that they were going to fuck each other like the horny little bunnies they are. But it looks as if I have to wait a while longer for that to happen. Though I have the feeling that Quatre noticed something has happened between them. Maybe he can use Zero to push them a little faster into the right direction, preferably a soft bed. And about that romantic aspect, I do have a problem seeing Heero or Wufei suddenly starting to recite poem about the beauty of love and Duo's eyes. Or waking him with flowers and breakfast in bed. Or singing under his window. And I don't have any further comment for the ending of this chapter. Duo banging his head on the table doesn't need to be commented. hehehhehe. By they way, what can I do to "help" you write faster? I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: asukakureru On: March 08, 2005 06:30 CST
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heaps of carbon! XD ohh, i just love the way heero thinks. he's so -- so -- eeeeeee. *cuddlesquish* "We'll slow him down dead." = RAWRRR. Wufei's so intense. so sexy. *loves on* The fight scene was good, as always (aren't you tired of writing great fight scenes? The tension/flirting/hating between Duo and Wufei = OMG SEXY. I love that sort of angry attraction. rawrrr. Howard and Svale crack me up. XD
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Reviewed By: Ryoko3600 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 22:19 CST
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Good Chapter!!
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Reviewed By: RandomChickie On: February 27, 2005 05:39 CST
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This is wonderfully well written! It's hard to find fics that actually use grammar and spell check nowadays. One question though: Is it the fact that Q's from a tribe that specializes in math and stragety that he can control Zero at all?
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Reviewed By: yuu_sprite On: January 24, 2005 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It had been a long time since I read a story with such intricacies in plot and story line let alone a fanfic. This is well thought out and it doesn't drag on like many stories with a lot of details. Oh... and when is Duo and Wufei going to shack up? =P P.S. I'm a bug Wufei fan
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 05:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great solution and Trowa managed to suprise Zero, hehhee, that was fun. Even though all that talk about chakras left me a bit puzzled. And I enjoyed that lime bit with Trowa and Quatre. But when is Duo going to have some fun???? Hopefully not until after they defeated Juusan and his ghosts go to rest.
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