| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 31, 2003 14:33 CST
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Nope, the last part didn't came out right. But I guess you are telling us that our long awaited chapter full of lemon will be here soon right? Well hopefully really soon. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 30, 2003 21:10 CST
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Finally, some one out there likes me! I finally accessed the last 2 chapters (does a victory dance). Ok enough silly stuff. I like your fic. It's great and don't forget to update your fic soon.
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please have Duo do a lot more of evil stuff, he is so cool!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wufei rocks! So does this mean that Wufei knows Heero?
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Title: turtlefire
Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so funny to see Trowa holding Duo down to be molested by Svale the old witch. I could see myself in Svale; but my hand would sure head south on Duo and more. Can't wait to see Chang and his relationship with Duo... 5x2, then 1x2?
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Reviewed By: I think I might be going crazy!!! On: October 27, 2003 11:40 CST
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All I could read from ch. 5 was the disclaimers. Either Mediaminer is messing with me again or you need to re-post this chapter.
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus Christ! Quatre was getting some while Duo listened... What a torture!!! I think Duo just has to *ask* Heero to have sex with him; the ignorant/innocent Heero would not understand his hints in a million years! Duo is a 'god' then in this story, cool! I still love him even he is a bit calculating. Very interesting story! More updates please!!!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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NO! Duo seems to be a (maybe) evil Shinigami... Heero is just too stoic, very cool. Who is he?
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 24, 2003 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh what a twist?! This chapter was so cool. Dou is so amazingly clever and positively evil... I wonder why Heero doesn't take to his offerings? Anyways keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 13:30 CDT
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Well, geez, you're just stuck on this awful cliffhangar kick! :p Not very nice, let me tell you...*mutters about evil authors enjoying watching their readers writhe...* ^_~ lol I'm waiting for the mystery of Shinigami to be solved...^The Firefaery^
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Another cliffhanger. Not that there's any doubt that Heero will be defeated...
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 22, 2003 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter. I'm intrigued! I'm glad that this will be an eventual threesome. Keep up the good job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 20, 2003 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Dou pleading? Oh this I got to read. Update soon and keep up the great job.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 18:22 CDT
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Woah...me confused...v.v Shinigami and Duo, Duo and Shinigami @_@ You *are* going to explain this, right?? Right!?? lol ^_~ The whole Heero bit is confusing me, too, but I guess that's to be expected when you're only on your second chapter, yeah? Hope to see more, soon ^The Firefaery^
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Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 14:42 CDT
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Ohh...me likes. Very interesting so far. I'm just waiting for Duo and Wu Fei, now. I really enjoyed the first chapter, especially when Heero walked in on them. ^_^V lol fun stuff, right? ^The Firefaery^
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