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Title: Perfect fic!
Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: June 20, 2004 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am so glad that it is only half way through, this fic is so good that I don't want it to end, ever. I won't mind if you post at least one chapter a day. After a few intense chapters, I am glad you are going to slow things down a little. Don't forget to heat up the love scenes though. I wonder how the experience changed Heero, will he emerge smarter and better in courting Duo? By the way, if someone has sex with Duo, will he be having it with the entire Jishin race too since all of them are now inside Duo? Imagine millions of Jishins having an orgasm at the same time! ;D Well, if the dead ones could not feel it, than there are at least a few millions of Peeping Toms inside Duo head. It has been a long time since you throw us a lemon or lime, write on!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually the pace is perfect...in fact you can go faster if ya want to. I love your writings this and "The Arrangement" are my favorites but I pretty much love whatever you put out there. Keep up the good work. TaTa
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Reviewed By: Cephalanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 18:57 CDT
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Woo-hoo! Still reading, still enjoying... no suggestions for future development because I'm just having so darn much fun following where you lead. Keep up the amazing work!
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Title: Justice
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What needs more developing? Well, the 2x5, but that is hopefully to come. I would like to know whether or not Quatre is going to keep Zero or not. And who or what is Heero? The story isn't going neither to fast or to slow, it is just fine with me. Fast where fast is needed and slow when you need it slow. Poor Duo, having to deal with so many other souls in his mind. It is a miricale that he is acting sane for the most time. And now he has to face a really pissed of Wufei. And that after he protected Wufei from being taken over from Juusan.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 11:46 CDT
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*giggles about 2x5* well wuffers is being kind of mean... him calling Duo trash and all. but it would be interesting if somehow it worked out for them. but hey, the affection that Duo's showing to heero could that also lead to something? Ya!! jusan's onworld, and i'm anxious to see what happens now... I think that Duo and heero are now the only ones powerful enough to knock Juju off planet. can't wait!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: June 13, 2004 01:16 CDT
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I love all your fics but this one has a special place in my heart. It's so well plotted, you give all the clues and still keep me guessing. I adore the byplays between the characters and the AU abilities and roles you've assigned them. You've had me both laughing and crying... and always breathless for more.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a brilliant move! Duo had marked Wufei. Now, Juusan has arrived, what happens next?
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: May 30, 2004 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The long-waited big fight is very intense and wonderful. But I wonder why Duo didn't throw back the soul stone to Fen so that he could fight better.. nevertheless, I am very glad to see Duo handles the dragon himself. The imp's interruption is just hilarious, I like it a lot. Seems like Duo is losing to the Dragon, but he must have saved something up his sleeve, ne? Please update soon! You are GREAT!
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Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nothing makes me happier than reading a new chapter of one of my favorite fanfics. ^________^
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: May 07, 2004 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Congratulation on another marvelous chapter! I love Duo's attitude, and Wufei's stubborness...I hope he will ruin the war for the Jusan. Please update ASAP, we are all dying to see your next chapter here!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 20:35 CDT
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EPPPPA!! And it was just getting good!!! Man now i'm antsy for the next chapter. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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More insight into Heero, but still totally clueless of what he is. The little interlude while Svale flirted w/ Wufei & when Duo should up was certainly amusing. Now, I wonder how the battle will go. Please update soon!
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Title: The plot thickens...
Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dundunduuuuun. So the disgruntled dragon finally shows up...I love his sense of justice and his conversations with Jusan in his head. Especially the part about Wufei dragging Heero out of the circle and nursing him back to health himself in order to fight him. ^_- I also love your characterizations of EVERYONE. I'm in love with strong, yet clueless Heero, Duo kicks ass, Wufei makes me want to hug him, Zechs is growing on me, and Svale is one of my favorite non-GW characters. You rock. ^^ So Heero knows he has a certain mission...I wish I was clued into the secret. I guess I can wait in suspense if it means I have another chapter to look forward to. ^____^ When this story is complete I'm going to have conflicting emotions of happiness and sadness. ;_;
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Title: *___*
Reviewed By: LithiumStar On: May 06, 2004 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::worships you:: This is one of my all-time favorite fanfics EVER. You write such creative stories, with plot lines that are nothing like any other story I have ever read. Where do you come up with this stuff?? ^_^ I can't wait to find out the secret behind Heero and his mission. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ep-chan On: May 04, 2004 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is sooo good!!! when will you be updating? Will heero and duo be getting together? Will that Ja-guy capture duo and make him his love slave? or better yet he can make him my love slave (drools). :D ... can't wait for next Chap!
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