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| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] | Reviewed By: black beauty On: November 14, 2004 23:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! I can't get enough of this fic! Keep up the awesome job!
| Reviewed By: DirtyD On: November 13, 2004 22:29 EST
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Awwwe, isn't the love Wufei and Duo share so sweet? They sound like they are married already. Enough of that, boy this is slow in coming! How many chapters to the end this time? 70? That's my guess. Decent work as always, this is so enjoyable to read, I adore it.
| Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 03:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that was fantastic. I loved the part with Duo standing in front of Wufei, poking him with his finger and then going all: Wait a moment, what did that ugly brute say again? And then within second, bam, not breaking a sweat, winning the duel. Oh, I so do love Duo in this fic. And the parts when he and Wufei gang up together against Svale, I love it. I think, once he and Wufei will start being lovers, the sex is going to be very explosive, hehehe. Who will be on top and who will be bottom? I bet they will fight about that everytime, lol. If there is anything I can do to help your inspiration with this fic, let me know. I could offer you cookies... I make good cookies.. Really, very good cookies.
| Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 00:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So they win the fight and get the prize. And Wufei & Duo are slowly developing their "relationship" while Heero watches in confusion.
| Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 20:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally got to the last posted chapter after two nights of reading. wow. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm not much for threats of bodily harm. How bout bribes, do they work?
| Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: October 28, 2004 16:25 EDT
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Excellent chapter and cliff hanger. Looking forward the to other half.
| Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 16:05 EDT
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You know that I love this story, don't you? Wufei is thinking about someone else pain, Duo's, that is good. Makes him more human, erm, sorry, Wufei, hehehe. Hmm, so mecha-dragon is going to meet a mythical-dragon, hehe oh the irony of that.. hehelol. And there will be a big fight in the next chapter? Ha, who is going to fight against who? It is out of question that they will win, or is Svale going to steal the atrefact while Duo, Wufei and Heero keep the dragon busy?
| Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Happiness! A little bit of fairy tale to whack poor Wufei in the head (literally). So what exactly is the test? Why do they need two people?
| Reviewed By: D.R On: October 23, 2004 14:40 EDT
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if you ask me ,it's one of you best works. keep it up.
| Reviewed By: DirtyD Momma Cat On: October 22, 2004 19:36 EDT
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I loved 'The Arrangement' so much I went around and started reading your other stories. I'd seen this many times before but held reservations about the story summary. I'm glad I held out so long though. All those cliff hangers would have made me want to exact bodily harm to your person! Now that I've read this I'm pleased with what you did. Again you've made a long road to the path of romance but I like that immeansely. You just don't thrust them into a relationship and beyond OOC actions. This is a great fantasy AU with a fantastic plot. So engrossing, I had to read it all in three days! Love your writing, so unrushed and thought out. Tell me though, I had this idea that Heero was infact born from Centre as a weapon of defense against Juusan. Am I correct? Or even close? My favorite part is still the beginning. Where Trowa found Heero naked after climbing up a mountain even though the bridge was nearby. "Errr Heero don't go that way, the bridge is much easier."
| Title: good job
Reviewed By: Maral On: October 16, 2004 07:06 EDT
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I just discovered this fic and couldn't stop till I finished all available chapters. you can't update soon enough,and No I'm not greedy, not at all!
| Title: 33
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 04:17 EDT
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Great writing in this chapter.... we've got the events on Iwa no Hone, filtered through Duo, and relayed by Trowa. That couldn't've been easy, and you handled it well. *cuddle-glomps Duo* Does Duo need a hug? Is Trowa correct in thinking that Duo understands why he's being left alone? 'Cause really, it could go either way... and I'm thinking... with the dripping blood and all... the poor boy might need a hug, or at least a bracing/gruff display of solidarity of purpose. From Wufei, maybe? Wuffie knew before that Duo was the last of his kind, but now he has a better understanding of that and I think that would affect (increase) his respect for the Jishin.
| Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 03:43 EDT
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Oh my poor little Duo. All alone, just the dead screaming in his head, no one to hug him, to care for him, oh, that is soo sad. It is a miricale he didn't get insane, but I guess he is too stuborn to give in to insanity as he was to stuborn and pride to give in to death when his dead peoples souls invaded him. But it looks like a thin line he is walking. Isn't there someone out there to hug him?
| Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 02:14 EDT
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The more you write on this fic, the more amazed I become. These last few chapters have left me breathless and broken-hearted. Yes, Duo's been a royal shit, but oh - the horrors he's lived through. Thank goodness Trowa sees and understands, but I wonder at what cost to Duo that clean slate might end up being?
| Reviewed By: priscel *WOW@**** On: October 15, 2004 22:37 EDT
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Oh man that was good and way to end the chapter!!!! I kind of figured that at the end of this walkabout for the others that Duo would relive it through his armor and the pledge. The use of we and all..shesh yes i'm a treky and I could soo hear Legion and the seer multitude of voices that piled up on Duo's as he vowed to end Juusan with the last of his breath. WOW update soon!!
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