| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for next chapter!! That Svale! She's a very persistent and hilarious old coot!! Grr I getting so fustrated when Heero wouldn't allow Tro to help Duo, but even more upset that they won't get that darn zero-spell thingy out of Quat, its no good I tell ya! no good! I can't wait to see how they all fair against 13 JAnus?! And I noticed it says 2x5, but wuffie only did a little peeping on duo while he was bathing and Duo healed him after he fought heero?? UPdat SOOOOOON!!
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Reviewed By: Turtle_fire On: April 22, 2004 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can't wait to see the five hot boys getting together. Did Duo buried some booty trap in Wufei's mind when he fixed him up in the earlier chapter? I love this GW It is so original and is a great joy to read. Please update soon. I am sorry those ffnet indecent jerks censor you, I have stopped visiting ffnet for a long time, their policy kills creativitiy.
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: March 29, 2004 00:52 CST
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Hurray!Yummy Zechs finally shows up! I love your description of him. ?x6 coming? It is scary to see the zero Quatre, I hope he'd go back to being a rabbit soon.
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Reviewed By: AikoNamika On: February 12, 2004 08:08 CST
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Mwahahaha...I like this! I adore the way you write the different characters - for example, Svale constantly referring to Duo as "Maxie". Other authors would often have her referring mentally to him as "Duo" when they were simply writing and not actually thinking, but you kept her in character the entire time. Good job! The part with Zero changing Quatre and trying to get Quatre to change is really cool - and you went into fantastic details about the chakra lines on Trowa's body, and the entire thing is just really cool.
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: January 29, 2004 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Shi No Kami is just GREAT! I Love the organic "Deathscythe?" a lot! But now he is not with the gang, will he has less "face time"? I still hope for a 1x2 in the future, he deserves to have his wish granted for all the hard work he had been doing!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 20, 2004 18:45 CST
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What?! We have to wait almost 10 days for the next update! This is, this is... INJUSTICE! LOL! I guess some of Wufei is rubbing off! Keep up the great job and update soon!
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Should have guessed it was Duo's fiddling that made Quatre so weird. But what is he thinking? Zechs definately makes an excellent phoenix. He keeps 'dying' than popping up again.
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: January 13, 2004 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like to me Duo had used Quatre to get zero. Great move! I always understand the Duo in here is not 'evil' in a bad sense; he just runs, hides, and most importantly ,lies, to achieve the greater good. Maybe I should not had used the word 'evil'; it should be reserved to describe Maldoror exclusively.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: January 05, 2004 16:38 CST
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Great fic. I like it. I have a few questions: 1. Would you explain Dou's behaviour towards Quatre? Was he actually reading Quatre's mind? 2. Who or what is Duo? 3. Was Wufei the last guy who Duo was dancing with or someone who looks like him? Keep it up and update soon
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Reviewed By: Turtle_fire On: January 05, 2004 01:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! More info. on Duo! I like how your Duo turned out so far in this story, especially the evil and calculating bits. You must be so proud to have produced one of the most unique and intriguing OOC Duo.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Why did Duo do whatever he did to Quatre? What/Who is Duo?
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gee, you only write the unexpected. Who would have thought Duo not collecting his "thanks" after resurrected the dragon? I am anxiously waiting for the 'taming of the dragon' scene everyday here. Man, it is so agonizing!!! Garrr... *Turtlefire picks up a very sharp object and perpares to poke hard.*
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wai, this is so exciting. So is Duo also the last of some race?
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Title: Ah, happiness...
Reviewed By: Zefyr (not signed in) On: December 23, 2003 12:02 CST
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'Duo smiled like the cat that had broken through the perimeter fence, killed the guard dogs, beaten the security system and picked the lock to assassinate the canary.' ----> It's lines like these that make me set up a shrine in the corner and bow down to the Almighty Maldorer. Damn! And then there's the visual of the tsunami hesitating at the shore... you just have such a deft way of putting things. Never fails to leave me in awe - at the same time I'm laughing. ;D
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an exciting chapter! I just love the way you describe their fighting scene, I am still catching my breath here. Duo the cheerleader was just cute, you must award him a big fat Hee-lemon for his effort. I didn't expect to Duo saving the dragon at all, what a surprise! I am looking forward to see him playing with his new pet dragon. PLEASE update soon, you know we love you!!!!
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