| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ibuki On: October 15, 2004 21:54 EDT
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I'm a fan of all your works. Especially the ones that revolve around Heero. But this one is so good even without a lot of him. Your stories are truly amazing!
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Title: Loving it as usual
Reviewed By: StarStruck [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say...this fic is one of my all-time favorites! I hope Heero gets more mention, since he is my favorite character...I love how you write him. Plus, I'm dying to know the secret behings Heero's existance! ^____^
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Reviewed By: PhoenixMageFire On: October 09, 2004 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, thank you Maldror-sama. I've been egarly awaiting your new works. Even in an AU setting, the characters are so perfectly rendered.
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Reviewed By: priscel *eyes story then blinks* On: October 08, 2004 22:31 EDT
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YA!!!!!!!! TWO updates`!!! "...do not look, just get out of bed and forget it ever happened." lol oh gosh!!! *then whines* WAAA what a note to leave it on! Thank you trowa for caring enough to realize that they were about to witnessed not only the power of Juusan but the destruction of all those Duo held dear! I had hoped that someone would care enough to ask Duo why the Tim was damaged or the reliving of all this would cost him. But respect for him and his suffering falls on deaf ears. *hugs tro* I can't thank him enough for the consolation comment that Duo'd home was beautiful. *her mind's eye at work...* quite beautiful. Thank you sooo MUCH for the update and I can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 14:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! You're back. More of this!!! Poor Duo, I hope someone will give him a nice hug after having to relive these memories. Erm, but not Svale, please.
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Title: Back in business!
Reviewed By: vox dei On: October 07, 2004 22:26 EDT
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I'm glad you've returned your attention to this fic! As I've said before, very original. Your Heeros are pretty unique- both this one and the one from 'The Arrangement'. This is good, I find them remarkably genuine/credible. So things are finally coming into focus, and Heero, Duo and Wufei are not out to kill each other. Poor Trowa- Quatre has become a computer. Be honest with your readers- is Svale a partial self-insert (with all that groping...) J/K. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 03:30 EDT
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Yes, a new chapter. Oh, I like it very much. I wish Duo and Wufei would hug each other and admit that they are both lonely. But it is a start that Wufei thanked Duo for rescuing him and saving his life. If Duo would apologize to Wufei for using him as a puppet, I guess that would help Wufei accept him as an ally faster. I wonder what kind of powers Svale has that Duo doesn't want her to use them. hehehe, even Wufei seemed to be impressed by Duo's warning of getting spanked. lol. You really need that long for the next chapter??? Weeks??? sniff, sniff, ohhh, what about cookies? Would cookies make you write faster?
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! This is going to be such a happy little group of fighters. I can tell ;-p
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: September 26, 2004 01:10 EDT
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So glad you're finally coming back to this story. Thank heavens it's memorable enough that I didn't have to go back and re-read it after such a long time from your last posting. It doesn't look as if the 2x5 or even the 2x5x1 pairings are going to happen any time soon. The animosity between them is so strong, it's hard to imagine either Heero or Wufei softening any time soon. Hurry and type the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Droom On: July 24, 2004 10:38 EDT
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Out of curiosity (sp? oO); is there a possibilty of Relena showing up? I wondered about that yesterday, and now I'm torn between wanting her to show up and, well, NOT wanting her to show up. ^^
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Reviewed By: Droom On: July 23, 2004 10:22 EDT
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There! I finished reading it! And was also very happy to learn we're only half way through the story concept now, it's great. Very different from the Arrangement, but I love it still. "On one side of the cirque, Chang and Duo were facing off - well, the Dragon was facing off, Duo was leaning with insulting casualness against a stone, laughing in his face." This bit had me grinning like a maniac, probably because I could visualise it perfectly. :) Very interesting and wicked cool story you've come up with. ^^
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: July 05, 2004 02:25 EDT
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Another fascinating chapter. I love the byplay between Wufei and Duo... and the bittersweetness of that between Trowa and Quatre. I adored Zero panicing about the end of the universe in a mere many billion years. I can't tell you how delighted I am that this fic is only half way done! I look forward to the rest.
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: July 04, 2004 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never tell a lie? I don't think it is wise! Hey, you'd got us to fell in love with a liar Duo, and now no more lies? Injustice!!!! But can you make him manipulative without telling a lie at least? Is "Maxwell" really in Jushin's vocabulary? I keep thinking the coffee when you say "House Maxwell". Isn't Heero 'the Source of all thing'? Please update soon. It is such a joy reading your fic.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 14:25 EDT
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Ya know I was afraid this was the end!! But I'm SOOO happy it isn't. *notices a plot bunny bouncing by* it's pink?! *grabs it and spray paints it blue* much better (^_^) I think the progress of the story is going very well and I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: June 20, 2004 19:02 EDT
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The pace is great, although you could move a bit faster with the plot, as long as you don't skimp over the Duo and Wufie part. The plot, so far is clear enough, we know more about Duo and Wufei, but it wouldn't hurt to start seeing some insight into Heero. After all a 5x2x1 fic would not be complete if we can't see some kind of interest on Heero's behalf. Keep up the AWESOME job and update soon.
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