| "The Source Of All Things" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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NO! Duo seems to be a (maybe) evil Shinigami... Heero is just too stoic, very cool. Who is he?
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 24, 2003 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh what a twist?! This chapter was so cool. Dou is so amazingly clever and positively evil... I wonder why Heero doesn't take to his offerings? Anyways keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 13:30 CDT
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Well, geez, you're just stuck on this awful cliffhangar kick! :p Not very nice, let me tell you...*mutters about evil authors enjoying watching their readers writhe...* ^_~ lol I'm waiting for the mystery of Shinigami to be solved...^The Firefaery^
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Another cliffhanger. Not that there's any doubt that Heero will be defeated...
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 22, 2003 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter. I'm intrigued! I'm glad that this will be an eventual threesome. Keep up the good job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 20, 2003 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Dou pleading? Oh this I got to read. Update soon and keep up the great job.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 18:22 CDT
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Woah...me confused...v.v Shinigami and Duo, Duo and Shinigami @_@ You *are* going to explain this, right?? Right!?? lol ^_~ The whole Heero bit is confusing me, too, but I guess that's to be expected when you're only on your second chapter, yeah? Hope to see more, soon ^The Firefaery^
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Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 14:42 CDT
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Ohh...me likes. Very interesting so far. I'm just waiting for Duo and Wu Fei, now. I really enjoyed the first chapter, especially when Heero walked in on them. ^_^V lol fun stuff, right? ^The Firefaery^
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well, this is certainly an interesting story, so far. I'm really liking Trowa's POV, his view of sex & Quatre is very fun.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 19, 2003 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Cool! I like this chapter. I can't wait to read more. I'm curious about who was the God that Trowa slept with in his youth? Will it be mentioned again in the series? If so which of the Gumdam characters was it? Ok maybe I'm reading way too much into this. But I guess you can tell that I'm looking forward to the next update. Keep up the good job.
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