| "When a Heart Melts" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: Foreverlace [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading your story it was awesome. I truly loved this one. I have read many Sess/Rin stories and yours is the best by far. I would love to read a sequel.
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 00:35 CST
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Wonderful! Thanks for sharing!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: sailorjupiter1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 09:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good fanfic, wasn't at all expecting that to happen in the end. Definitly creative and original, good luck with future fanfics. See ya!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 03:58 CST
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wow. i kinda like the fact that you have to think about it a little. i like to think about things that i read or see. if i go to a movie and it's just watch and ok all done then it's not a fun. when you have to think about it and figure things out in your head it's a lot more interesting. so i like the way you can do that with this fic. i can't wait for you to come out with another!!
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Title: VampirePrincessMiyu
Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: January 16, 2004 15:10 CST
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i'm glad it's a happy ending...i just kinda wished it was human rin though...i don't know, i guess i'm attached to the lil black haired girl. i hope you write another rin/sess. i really liked this story so i'll know your next story would be great too.
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 23:58 CST
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Reviewed By: Vampire Miyu On: January 13, 2004 23:42 CST
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oh that's soooo evil to make him choose. it's not fair...wahhhhh! how about he choose the human rin, then when she dies, he can be w/ the demon rin... fair enuf? lol...k, i liked the chap...please update soon and don't torture poor sesshie any longer ;)
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Reviewed By: BlueRose91 On: January 13, 2004 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay there. gave u all ten's cause i felt kinda guilty there. forgive me? *big, puppy doy eyes* pwese pwese pwese???????? ok now. pleeeeeeeeeezee rite more I wanna see more! RITE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!I am gonna have a temper if I don't read the next chappie...*screams at innocent puppy* hurry or this misrubble puppy will face my wrath cause of u...hahaha *threatens puppy with shocker*
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Reviewed By: BlueRose91 On: January 13, 2004 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good but I thought Aki was her brother!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o well who cares rite? anywayz good job...rite more a_a
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 09:47 CST
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i just squeeked. it wasn't a mouse squeek or something that was loud and funny sounding. it was more of a suprized, sad, i can't believe how utterly crewal that choice is squeek. so now that i have said that i think i will sit here a little longer with my mouth hanging open so that the fly that just flew in can fly out. i don't think i could choose if i had to. man poor sessy. does he have any other choice besides choose? ga! i can't wait to see what happenes!! up date soon and keep up the good work!!!!!
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sits with jaw hanging wide open staring at computer screen* *drools* woooooooooooooooow! *snaps back into reality* Awwww. That's so sad. Poor Sesshy. But, of course, he's goona choose the human Rin, right? Cuz the human still has his child whereas the demon Rin doesn't...............................................................but the demon Rin can protect herself. Oh great, now I don't now who to root for. This is sorta like Inuyasha's situation, except the demon Rin isn't a dead B**tch, trying to kill Sesshoumaru ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn (not signed in) On: January 12, 2004 21:50 CST
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Dude, (I don't think your a guy, I call everyone dude) that was so not cool. That was possibly the most evil cliffy imaginable. I think I've seen politians less evil than that cliffy (OK, so maybe I haven't but I'm pre-ticked right now)!!! If you do not update, I will be forced to throw you into dovebar mix and show you to Fuki-ti. (OK, yet again maybe not because that's just cruel and I don't usually sink so low as to make threats as patetic as that one) Ggggrrrrrrrr... I hate making all of these doubtful authors notes in my reviews. Grrrrrrrr...
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 14:36 CST
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Sorry I haven't reviewed till now. Thank you for updating. Oh, I've put up the first chapter for what's now called "In the Game of Life". Took me long enough, huh. Check it out and tell me what you think. ^_^
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Title: Trainer01
Reviewed By: trainer01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent Job on the story! Can't wait till you write more! ^__^
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Reviewed By: VampirePrincessMiyu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 00:48 CST
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omg i loved it! sess being able to love her. and she doing such a daring thing! me getting teary please, write more...gotta have more i'm addicted
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