| "When a Heart Melts" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 02:00 CST
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ohh. once again i am braught almost to tears. that was so sad and yet sweet and romantic. like a romeo and juliet with a happy ending. feh. stupid humans. oh please up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Death Bringer On: December 18, 2003 23:38 CST
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Woah, this is really good! ^-^ Is the whole demon thing a illusion though? I'm a little confused...I really hope it wasn't, Rin as a demon is really a good idea...update soon!
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Title: Woah...
Reviewed By: Winter's Tears On: December 18, 2003 23:35 CST
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This is intreasting...I've alwasys loved Sess/Rin fics, but there are not a lot of them around! I'm still trying to make since to this whole thing...so somehow Sesshoumaru and Rin got turned back in time, and this time her human grandfather came to her and she didn't have a Yukai father at all. WEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER! Sorry, I get over hyper when I read a good story...please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 17:46 CST
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Sorry that I haven't reviewed lately. I hope you forgive me because I'm doing it now, and that was one of the best chapters I have ever seen you write. I applaud your brilliance. (Well, if you could hear it) Anyway, I hope you update really soon.
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, your a great writer, BUT WHAT"S UP WITH THESE CLIFF HANGERS??????? It's ok, I love writing cliff hangers too. I've really only written one in my story A Wish By Two Hearts. I wish I could write like you. I don't usually read Sessh/ Rin pairings cuz I always thought of it more as like a afther/ daughter relationship, because Rin's so young, but really when you think about it if she was older, they'd still be like 100 or so years apart. Please update soon, I'll be checking up on you.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 23:05 CST
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oohhhh. poor sessy! he lost his pup. and it would have been so cute too! kinda like inu yasha when he was little. oh he was so cute! ^-^ little sessy koinu! hehe. up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 00:24 CST
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x-P sorry, ignore my spelling mistakes. i hade a classics final this morning ... or, yesterday morning (depending) so my brain is a little fried. @.@ ok. leaving you alone now.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 00:22 CST
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oooohhhhhhhh. hmm. *thoughtfull look* i see. ... no i don't, but thats ok. ^_^ i think i get enough. so Rin in this new reality, is she a little girl or a grown up girl? i'm going to asume grown up for know to stick with your anti father daughter thing for now. hm. interesting. yeah, finals are a drag. up date as soon as you can and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 00:39 CST
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Wha...? was it all a dream? the whole thing? that would be so evil. was it a preminition of sorts? i'm so confused! *cries* this is too much for my sleep deprived brain. up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: VampireMiyu On: December 09, 2003 21:22 CST
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i haven't read your fic since i last reviewed. loved it! about your last chapter: so it was all an illusion? well, i'm looking forward to it. i like rin as a human better anyway. i think the idea of sess loving a human is oh so cute. yay! does this mean we get another dose of them falling in love all over again? hehehe. i just can't get enough of rin x sess. =0).
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 12:35 CST
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruluver#1 On: December 06, 2003 20:40 CST
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ch.9 was a great lemon! Please I hope this story doesn't turn out to be a tragedy.
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: punkSESHOUMARU/Rinrocker On: December 06, 2003 20:37 CST
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OH MY GOD!!!!! Please update soon!!!!! I hope Sesshoumaru rescues Rin soon and kills those stupid bastards for messing with Rin. Although I have to admit I really liked it how Rin transformed and kicked some ass! Now that my computer has no more problems please write the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'LL CHECK AGAIN TO SEE IF YOU UPDATED^-^
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Reviewed By: animefluffyaddict On: December 06, 2003 20:28 CST
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Love the fic keep updating please
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Reviewed By: punkWolF On: December 06, 2003 20:24 CST
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Great fic by da way do you know what Kawaii means cuz' i wanna know
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