| "When a Heart Melts" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: punkSESHOUMARU/Rinrocker On: December 06, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I finally got my stupid computer to show me the next chapters. Oh and I actually meant to say the dream sequence was ~-~... and the lemon scene was great too. It was so sweet how Sesshoumaru didn't want to hurt Rin. Hope that doesn't make me sound like a perv. Ch.7,8,and 9 were and I'm about to read ch.10
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 22:20 CST
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*holds breath* I egerly await for more! no prob btw about the reviews! i love reading stories, and I know that reading the reviews on my story always helps me to know what to write, though at the moment it's suffering writers block, but i'm working on it. nehoo. GO RIN! yay! kick ass! hehe. Sess is going to be soooo pissed when he gets there. I pity those foolish overgrown neko and anyone still in the castle. is he going to ask for help from the east? he has to right? i mean they are her parents. o.O up date soon and keep up the good work! meanwhile i lie awake waiting to see what wil happen. @.@
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 15:29 CST
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oh no. this can not be good. and i thought it was going to be a nice little happy fic. (:-/ nothing bad is going to happin bewteen Rin and Sess is there? it makes me sad when couples fight (except for when its Inu yasha and Kikyo. though i don't consider them a couple anyway. rrrr. i hate that pile of dirt. no offence to anyone who does.) nehoo. up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kaiyla yamuri On: December 01, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic! It is so great! I'm gonna add you to my favorites. Write more, can't wait!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: November 30, 2003 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad I really enjoyed it. update soon
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 04:22 CST
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mm. ^_^ btw. does anyone know where that biting into where the neck meets the sholder bit came from? it's in alsmost every demon fic i've read. where did it start from? nehoo. late night (or early morning) ramblings, sorry. very nice. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 19:17 CST
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Reviewed By: (fireash) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 16:34 CST
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try hitting the view button twice. it worked for me. mediaminer is weird.
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Reviewed By: punkSESHOMARU/Rinrocker On: November 24, 2003 16:07 CST
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It says ch. 7&8 are up, but it isn't there.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 05:42 CST
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hahaha! that stupid youkai! did he not know that he was fighting the Lord of the Western Lands? dumba*s. i like it! up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 00:23 CST
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Reviewed By: animefluffyaddict On: November 22, 2003 20:49 CST
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You can't stop there I'v really been looking forward to continue reading your story. Its just so great! This chapter was the best. Also how come ya'cut the dream scene short(~-~)?
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Reviewed By: SESSHY-chan On: November 22, 2003 20:43 CST
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I must've sounde like an idiot last time,but I'M REALLY IMPRESSED BY YOUR WRITING AND I JUST LUV THIS FIC! AND I CAN'T FORGET ABOUT DA' CIFFHANGERS!PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEEEEE EE EEEEEEEEEASE,continue the next chapter soon cuz' i'm VERY impatient and i just gotta read more of this! tHIS CHAPTER was GREAT!
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 01:00 CST
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I'm usually not into the entire Sess/Rin thing, but this fic caught my eye several times and I finally read it and I think that it is really sweet and funny. I've already put your fic on my favorites list and I hope you update soon.
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Title: ^-~
Reviewed By: sesshoumaruluver#1 On: November 20, 2003 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU REALLY DID READ MY REVIEW AND CONTINUE! THANKS! SOME PEOPLE DON'T UPDATE THEIR FANFICS FOR MONTHS. I'M SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY YOU DID! IT WAS CUTE HOW THEY WERE EVEN DREAMING ABOUT EACHOTHER, I LOVED IT! I'M GLAD YOU WEREN'T OFFENDED BY MY LAST COMMENT^-^. I HOPE YOU GET LOTS OF REVIEWS. CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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